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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2016 12:32 AM Title: Two Giant Birds, One Little Tom

Once again, your threesome game is off the charts, and we didn't even see anything below the belt yet! That's how good it was!

These two ladies are great and arguably were Tom's favorite women. Katie continues to impress with her sexiness and Cassidy is just the same, expressing continuous sexy moves on Tom.

These ladies have been intimate before. Must be interesting to add Tom to their mix. I bet they are the kinky ones and have had many ideas that they want to try out.

Man, Tom is so lucky! These two women must be gorgeous, both around 27 and they got rocking bodies from yoga. (Tom should join them in yoga. Giantess yoga. Tom trapped inside tight yoga pants!)

Well, the good news is that the fun doesn't end yet! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2016 6:53 PM Title: Two Giant Birds, One Little Tom

Yay! I'm first in line, again. That being said; please, don't get me wrong. This chapter definitely deserves an even half-dozen gold stars! Never mind just five. Even so, the cliff-hanger still felt like the straight line to a dirty riddle. As in:

How many giantesses does take to screw a shrunken dim-bulb named Tom?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 4:19 PM Title: Near Miss (double meaning intended)

She's still willing to share him with Cassidy after giving him a case of...Band-aids?

;-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 4:19 PM Title: Near Miss (double meaning intended)

Seriously, though: isn't keeping him restrained like that kind of a double-edged sword? For instance, if Jessica is keeping Cassidy's place under surveillance and sneaks inside after Katie...

Well, I'm sure you catch my drift.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 11:21 AM Title: Near Miss (double meaning intended)

That was so hot! I think this bandaid bondage is now my favorite choice. Also, the groin and head were exposed?!! Perfect! I was wondering if she was going to out him inside her. That would be the dream.

The dialogue was fantastic! She asks him if he likes it and she uses her teacher voice. I also, like how Tom kept on saying she was his favorite teacher and that he wanted to look at her and do anything with her.

Now Miss Harwood knows how much Tom wants her and by restrianing him, it gives her control of him. It makes him desire her even more becuase the wait is killing him.

Oh boy the date. Katie makes Cassidy look like a little girl. It took a few chapter for Cassidy to get into it. First chapter for Katie and she has him all tied up and inside her. I could picture Katie saying "Cassidy, you have to try this"... And so on. Miss Harwood defiantely has experience and Tom will be more attracted to her.

Keep Tom tied up like this! I love this position.

I really, really, really can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 6:37 AM Title: Tom

Nice chapter! I liked that ignoring aspect - when after using him the whole day she just dropped him down trapped inside her soiled panties and not even looking at him she told him to stay before leaving the room - that was a very nice moment demonstrating how dominant and superior she must feel.

Also Tom likes to be dominated. However he must still learn to be respectful and obedient. E.g. his previous unauthorized ejaculation inside her panties and now he was told to stay but he left the room and almost got injured (or maybe even killed) causing possibly also big troubles to Katie and Cassidy. Also his thinking about himself like an alpha male does not indicate he feels submissive.

His attitude and behavior is in contrary with Katie's dominance so I am curious how she is going to deal with that. I think she should reaffirm her authority by an appropriate punishment. However after the punishment I would love to see Tom feels submissive and honestly regrets his behavior. And then she will give him a chance to show his regret and obtain the forgiveness ;-). After that she can say "good boy" and everything would be ok again :-).

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 6:18 AM Title: Tom

@ Tom Speedy (while imitating Fred Rogers of MR. ROGERS' NEIGHBORHOOD):

Can you say "malicious mischief?"

I knew you couldn't. Mr. Duggernaut was just messing with your head!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 6:37 PM Title: Tom

It just went from sexy to scary. I'm scared that the fun is over. That Miss Harwood will start feeling sorry and won't be in control again. I enjoyed that and if she starts feeling guilty, then I'm not sure how Tom will like her.

Is this just a transition so Cassidy can "nurse" Tom again? I can see a hurt Tom being helped by her.

Maybe this was just a scare, perhaps Tom dodged her foot and is actually between her feet getting a nice view upskirt.

Or Miss Harwood actually saw Tom and is playfully stepping on him with little pressure.

Worst possible outcome is Tom dies and the end. Now I hope that is not the case. (insert nervous laugh).

I kinda can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

...it's been a good run...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 6:36 PM Title: Tom

Oh, dear! Is there where the usual stereotype of previously undiscovered indestructibility comes into play?

Author's Response:

No such luck for Tom, we've already established he can be hurt... (indestructability just seems like a cheat, like a dream sequence or something, just saying :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 6:09 PM Title: Afterschool

If Lina found out that Ms. Harwood is engaging in sexual relations with a student...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 9:27 PM Title: Afterschool

Heh! Why do I have the feeling that you're going to be giving new meaning to the term "Headmistress?" And, yet, even if my facetiously wild guess is actually on target, let's not forget that you still have two other female characters who have yet to meet Our Little Hero: Jessica Lindholm and Serena the Lawyer. They would seem to have chronological priority; don't you?

Author's Response:

Lest us not forget about Tatiana, I mean if we're using chronological appearance as seniority for taking a turn with Tom. That said I haven't ruled out an abduction by Jessica. Tom lost in a sorority full of unaware girls? Hmm...

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 8:30 PM Title: Afterschool

I wonder if Miss Addison is feeling guilty about what happened between her and Tom since she's willing to make sure he doesn't suffer academically. Now i'm hoping Addison and Tom meet up again, maybe Addison can apologize. 

 

Also, i hope the Headmistress gets a turn with Tom.



Author's Response:

I think miss Addison was thoroughly put in her place by Janine and doesn't want to run afoul of her rather than any change of heart she might have had. With things racing toward a conclusion I think the headmistress is unlikely but I still don't know where this going...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 2:26 PM Title: Afterschool

Haha! This is similar to when your boss almost catches you on a a certain website.

Did the headmistress really think of doing certain things to Tom if she was 20 years younger??? Man, this world is horny.

So the solution is 1 on 1 time, eh? I approve becuase we all know what that means.

I wished there was more Tom in this chapter. Not much interaction with him.

I love it when Miss Harwood just thinks of ideas to do to Tom. She doesn't have to do all of them, but I like to see what she thinks of. When she thought of force feeding her orgasm to Tom, I was thinking wow, that's a first, and that's super erotic. Very sexy. Even though she didn't do it, I liked how she thought of it. (Still wish she did it though).

I hope Tom's one on one time with Katie isn't done yet. I want them to go to their house and have more fun before they go back to Cassidy.

She could still feed him her orgasm later. She could say he needs his strength for tonight. That pen sure has its uses. I would love to see him drink it all up.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hey Tom glad you're still interested in this story. Another reviewer pointed out that we've yet to encounter a giantess who actually takes Tom's feelings into consideration. Onthe other hand Tom has been an active participant in many of his interactions with our ladies. Just not sure where I want this to go and am kind of conflicted. 

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2016 11:49 PM Title: Cassidy

“Everything in the world is about sex except sex. Sex is about power.” ~ Oscar Wilde :-)

@TomSpeedy: I think the "problem" with Janine is not that she is sadistic but she is abusive. I mean there is a fine line between domination (which is satisfying for both although domme is sadistic, so it is give and take) and abuse (which is satisfying only for one of them, so it is only take). And Janine crossed that line.

 



Author's Response:

Very astute observation and distinction. We'll explained and insightful.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2016 9:51 AM Title: Cassidy

Whoa! All dig Lina: Queen of the Back-handed Compliment.

Author's Response:

RIGHT!?!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2016 5:30 PM Title: Cassidy

Wow, I was so anxious to see what was going to happen to Tom, but now we have this side plot instead. I know this chapter is necessary, but I crave Miss Harwood! So beautiful and sexy!

Lina feels like an evil lady right now. Leaving Tom's mom to her? Pfft. Is she going to kill her? She has this lawyer at her disposal too. Is she going to frame Tom's mom for experiments on Tom? It's the part where Lina said that Tom's mom won't be looking for Tom that gets me. Very suspicious. I would love to have Lina as my lawyer. I know she isn't a lawyer, but she would make a good one.

Lethal stroke, blade, founds its mark, mortal wound? This is just a verbal argument. Lol. It's not life and death.

Seems like a stupid deal for Cassidy. She already takes care of Tom so why does she have to take care of Janine just to see Tom? It's like Lina said, "what better than taking care of Tom? Taking care of Janine too!" Can't believe Cassidy agreed to that shit. Obviously she was intimidated by Lina and just gave in.

Omg, what if Lina brainwashes Tom's mother?!! I can picture that! Lina hires some guys to kidnap her and force her to forget that she has a son. Some pyschologial stuff I bet. Lina is going deep just to get Tom into her sexy milf hands.

Half of this discussion was what will Tom decide. I would say he wants to live with Cassidy simply because I think he had the best time with her over any other giantess.

Tom just wants to be with sexy women non stop and that's why he keeps using his "charm" to get them all riled up. Miss Harwood and Cassidy are both relentless at sex but are not sadistic like Janine and Miss Addison.

It's funny that Lina is the most gentle giantess but she is so aggressive in getting what she wants verbally. I wish that can translate over when she gets Tom back.

Jessica seems like a 6 year old in this scene. She just keeps asking to see Tom like how a kid asks if they can see a certain animal. "Can I see it now?" She is also asking permission which shows how little control she has over this situation. Lastly, what is with Lina calling her "child" all the time. It seems fine with Janine becuase she is still a teen but I think Jessica is a bit too old for that. Perhaps it's was just a form of humiliating Jessica.

Well, I'm anxious to see how Tom is doing. I would rather he stay with the teacher than any of these giantesses in the room. Miss Harwood just oozes sexiness and Tom gets a first class experience with her.

I really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2016 5:07 PM Title: Cassidy

Ominous! But i really hope Janine doesn't succeed, i really want Tom's mother to finally see him.

 

Plus Lina should know, being a mother herself, that that a mother wouldn't give up on her children. I gotta believe she'll find Tom regardless. 



Author's Response:

We are seeing a different side to Lina that may help to explain Janine’s behavior.  But momma bears can be ornery.

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2016 2:06 AM Title: Afternoon

I think now I understood the reason why she created that tube - to improve breathing while he is inside.

I liked the teasing & denial scene - his growing frustration and her having fun from not letting him cum.
So I am really curious what is going to happen when she discovers her little slave had an unauthorized "accident" in her panties. Will she make him understand better not to do it again? ;-) That he can cum only if he is allowed?

Also, his attitude and the way he talks to her seems like he is getting out of his submissive mood. As if he checks boundaries. Will she remind him his place? ;-)

I would love if she makes him whimpering and squirming while using him for her pleasure. And his erected miniature penis would tell her he likes how she treats him and he likes to be her little whatever she wants.

I loved the idea with the opening just for his head.

I am looking forward for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2016 1:26 PM Title: Afternoon

In keeping with the pun in my previous review? Right now, Katie is probably thinking: "Oh, yes, Tom! I want 'sodom' more!"


Good thing Timescribe is on hiatus from here. He might not approve of pseudo-Biblical plays on words.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2016 8:10 PM Title: Afternoon

This chapter felt kinda short this time. I noticed it was your first chapter below 1000 words since the last 10+ chapters.

Also, I actually liked his position tied to a pen inside her. I wished there was a sense of time while he was in there. After she puts him inside her at the end of last chapter, she pulls him out at the beginning of this chapter, so it feels like he was in there for very little time.

I would love to hear Miss Harwood's thoughts as he is down there. Perhaps, she can think of ways to plays with Tom. Maybe imagine what he is doing inside her. Also, she can think about giving him a playful squeeze inside her.

Wait a minute! The panties were in the drawer! She left the classroom last chapter, and didn't return until this chapter. So something must have hallened between the chapters that I don't know yet.

She just came in class? Any noise or movement in front of the class? Or is she just a natural and hiding it? Perhaps Katie orgasms in public places all the the time and she mastered controlling her posture as she does this.

I mean, Katie is not even moaning or anything when Tom pleases her. She just bucks her hips a little and she just explodes right there, in front of her classroom. Nothing wrong here folks.

Oohhhh! Maybe Tom wasn't supposed to make here come, and she is going to punish him! Oh boy!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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