I just can't wait for the anniversary chapter 100!

I am really not sure about Jessica. She is kind of childish which turns me off. But maybe we will be surprised.

I'm at this point where Janine just fell off the excitement list. As Tom waits for Janine, I think his time with Cassidy and Miss Harwood showed him what real women like to do with him, and not teenage girls like Janine.

I think I am more interested in Jessica and her reaction. Does she know who Tom is? Does she know how attractive he is? Will he fall under the same spell as her mother and sister?

Then there is tonight. Wow, your writing made last night feel like it was a one time thing becuase you had so much detail and had 2 chapters describing that night. Now we get round 2!

I love how they say that they will get creative and use some toys. The only thing that I feel hesitant to judge on is how the toy will be used. Everytime, it is the same thing, Tom gets tied to it and it goes inside a woman. While that is awesome, it's getting a bit repetitive.

Maybe a threesome with a toy will be better than I think. Perhaps there is a double sided dildo and Tom can be inside both women at the same time.

I think they should get like gummy bears and tease Tom by playing with the gummy bears beforehand. They can lick it, chew, and even shove it inside them.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

You're so close to where I was going to go with this threesome but alas next chapter chapter 100 will not be that installment. Sorry. Doesn't mean I won't unless it a little later though Muwahaha 

Uh-oh! Sounds like TW-1 has become quite the little masochist during his captivity. Indeed, I often tell anyone who asks (and, more often, even when they don't) that--unlike Major Nelson--I would've VOLUNTEERED to spend life without parole in a birdcage surrounded by harem girls and belly dancers! But, I guess that's just me.

OK! Being serious, now. As overused as this word might be, "brilliant" is the only way I can think of to describe this latest plot twist. Tom's namesake grandfather was captured by his mother's horny sister?! I truly did not see that coming. I'd privately assumed he was in some top-secret government lab. "Protective custody" granted by the same Feds for whom he might've developed the shrink ray (as, say, a forensically undetectable weapon for "terminations with extreme prejudice").

This is one of those rare instances I'm glad I guessed wrong.

Author's Response:

I too think I may also volunteered. From the outset I had Tom Sr a victim of his own invention and falling into the Hans of whoever found they only thing I vacillated about was who. The sister of Tom's mother provided my an opportunity to tie this up. It is good to veer from expectation and surprise once in a while. Talk about assisted care living...

Wowowowowwo! I mean, did that just happen?!

I have never ever ever seen this coming! It's so weird yet so hot!

I mean, you tied up this loose end in a way I never would have imagined!

So basically Tom's Aunt has his grandpa as a pet. (So Donatella is Tom wentworth sr's niece.)

Why is Donatella into that mature guys? I have no idea but hey, I like mature women. Just not that old. I prefer the 30-40 range. She likes the 50-60 range.

She keeps the grandpa as a pet? Does he still have stamina? How is he still charming? Haha!

Man, I wish this happened with Miss Harwood. Keep Tom as her teacher's pet for many years.

Duggrnaut, did you plan this grandpa thing for months? Becuase it makes perfect sense why he can't reply that often.

Wow, Tom's aunt is in modeling? These tense must run in the family. I wish Donatella found me instead of Tom's grandpa. Being kept as her pet doesn't sound so bad.

Also, she was going to punish him. Boy, that sounds awesome! While this chapter was random, I needed this.

If Tom thought he was living the life, he has no idea! Haha! Tom's grandpa is living the dream! A high 20s girl got him and she is a model!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi Tom yep I had Tom Sr fall prey from the the get go though I did wrestle with who I wanted to have find him. There is no biological relation between Tom Sr and donatella. She is the sister of his daughter in law.she was one of the people who helped Janine originally get into modelling though even she was unaware of the family connection to Tom.  Right in the first chapter I state tom's mother was also a model so it runs in the family. I wonder what would happen if he choked down a viagra would it make his whole body stiff?

Although I did not comment recently I love how the story continues and I am very curious what comes next.

I would love to see Cassidy and Katie will step-by-step increase their superiority and dominance over Tom. Using him for pleasure, making fun of him, teasing and denying his orgasms, making him feel helpless and ignoring his whimpering and squirming. Turning him into their little obedient servant too and punishing him if he displeases them. More dominant and demanding they will be more aroused and satisfied he will be - maybe Tom could experience sub-space?

Just one question: is that "buffeted" as in "Jimmy Buffet"...or "free buffet?"

Author's Response:

Margaritaville 

Yay! I'm first in line, again. That being said; please, don't get me wrong. This chapter definitely deserves an even half-dozen gold stars! Never mind just five. Even so, the cliff-hanger still felt like the straight line to a dirty riddle. As in:

How many giantesses does take to screw a shrunken dim-bulb named Tom?

Seriously, though: isn't keeping him restrained like that kind of a double-edged sword? For instance, if Jessica is keeping Cassidy's place under surveillance and sneaks inside after Katie...

Well, I'm sure you catch my drift.

Nice chapter! I liked that ignoring aspect - when after using him the whole day she just dropped him down trapped inside her soiled panties and not even looking at him she told him to stay before leaving the room - that was a very nice moment demonstrating how dominant and superior she must feel.

Also Tom likes to be dominated. However he must still learn to be respectful and obedient. E.g. his previous unauthorized ejaculation inside her panties and now he was told to stay but he left the room and almost got injured (or maybe even killed) causing possibly also big troubles to Katie and Cassidy. Also his thinking about himself like an alpha male does not indicate he feels submissive.

His attitude and behavior is in contrary with Katie's dominance so I am curious how she is going to deal with that. I think she should reaffirm her authority by an appropriate punishment. However after the punishment I would love to see Tom feels submissive and honestly regrets his behavior. And then she will give him a chance to show his regret and obtain the forgiveness ;-). After that she can say "good boy" and everything would be ok again :-).

It just went from sexy to scary. I'm scared that the fun is over. That Miss Harwood will start feeling sorry and won't be in control again. I enjoyed that and if she starts feeling guilty, then I'm not sure how Tom will like her.

Is this just a transition so Cassidy can "nurse" Tom again? I can see a hurt Tom being helped by her.

Maybe this was just a scare, perhaps Tom dodged her foot and is actually between her feet getting a nice view upskirt.

Or Miss Harwood actually saw Tom and is playfully stepping on him with little pressure.

Worst possible outcome is Tom dies and the end. Now I hope that is not the case. (insert nervous laugh).

I kinda can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

...it's been a good run...