[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 6:55 PM Title: Sisters
I'm first for once? YAY ME!
Okay, for starters? You've once again pitched something from left field that nobody was expecting. Donatella and Tom Senior showing up out of the blue to confess all to Elle? Brilliant!! It makes the fifteen minutes I kept getting "site unreachable" worth the wait.
But, this raises the question: what's Lina going to do once she's confronted with the truth by both sisters? She sure as heck won't be able to continue with wanting to adopt Young Tom as a pet. Not after hearing about the near-disaster of introducing Jessica to him!
Of course, you'll probably say that Lina is both pragmatic and stubborn. She might have Janine hide Young Tom somewhere other than Kate and Cassidy's apartment. And who could be more trustworthy with such a unique secret than a lawyer like...Serena? ;-D
Of course, Jessica--being just as stubborn as her mother--could still be a wild card player in this deal. And spirit him away to someplace unexpected. (like, say, her out-of-state college) without anybody initially aware of it.
So many confusing possibilities.
[Report This]Date: July 18 2016 11:24 AM Title: Tom's Story
Holy Crap! TomSpeedy was right (for once).
HAPPY BELATED ANNIVERSARY, DUDE! :-D
Author's Response:
Thanks for being such a wonderful supporter of thisd tale. It is humbling to see that it still has the ability to entertain!
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 9:34 PM Title: Tom's Story
CONGRATULATIONS DUGGERNAUT!!!!
Tom's story is 1 year old!!!!!! Happy birthday Tom and his lovers! It's been a wild year!
We are breaking records with this story and this story never ceases to amaze me!
I can't believe how far this story has come and I can't wait for what you have in store for us!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom, couldn't have done it without you!
[Report This]Date: July 15 2016 7:09 PM Title: A Night to Remember
Usually, this is where I'd make some bad pun like "Oh! A three-way game of 'squash.' " But, if you seriously believe I'd ruin the erotic poignance of this chapter by stooping that low, then with all due respect, sir, you...
...are out of your gourd. X-D
[Report This]Date: July 15 2016 6:04 PM Title: A Night to Remember
Now this is what Im talking about!
Round 2 of Cassidy and Katie has begun and they seem very prepared as if they have been planning to do this for a while.
Yes, this is definately a night to remember. I still think the first part of round 1 was more intense then this round 2 so far.
The cucumber makes a surprising twist. I was thinking maybe both ends could be in both women. Like a double sided dildo.
It's itnereting to see Janine always strike him when he is having fun. She was Tom's first giantess and it showed him what reality was living with a giantess. Now it's stuck in his head forever.
Next chapter is sisters? Like Janine and Jessica? You mean part 2 of round 2 won't be next chapter? I hope you meant that Katie and Cassidy are close to each other like sisters.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 13 2016 9:23 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes
Sorry! I was just trying to imagine him as one of those jailhouse poets. Given the (ahem!) solitary confinement his mother is most likely going to subject him to, in the next chapter.*
*Unless, of course, you twist the plot, yet again! ;-)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2016 9:20 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes
"I cannot live each moment...
In fear..trying to anticipate
Every...threat that might appear."
"I do not like green eggs and ham.
I prefer Janine, Katie, Cassidy, and Sam."
[Report This]Date: July 13 2016 5:05 PM Title: Damn the Torpedoes
Tom has a great point. While he is still kinda injured, he will be resting for life in a few days, so I agree that he might as well make these next 2 days memorable.
It's funny, that even though Tom is injured, he still has his charm. Sometimes the injury, especially in the face might just make that charm not that powerful, but Tom still knows how to look attractive even with a scar on his head. Maybe he looks more badass with the scar. Maybe the scar is what attracts these ladies.
Heck, yeah! Round 2 with the sexy nurse/teacher coming up! This duo is my favorite and I don't blame Tom for taking this chance. Both of them are sexy, know how to take control and also these two have great chemistry which makes the fun seem perfect for Tom.
Haha! Now we actually get to see Katie "screw the living day lights" out of Tom. I can't wait for that.
I really can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 12 2016 12:16 PM Title: Four's a Crowd
please more
it seems everyone is tempting Tess says Tom is capable of
the question whether tess will be able to protect (hide) toma front line.
[Report This]Date: July 09 2016 3:50 PM Title: Four's a Crowd
Haha! Imagine if Miss Harwood walks in shouting, "Tom, you ready to fuck?" And then she stops as soon as she sees Tess. That would be so embarrassing.
I agree with Tess, it's interesting to see all these women spread their legs for Tom. Then again, I'm glad they opened their legs for Tom, it's what he wanted anyway. Remember what Janine said. "He wants to be there."
Now that Tess left, maybe some foreplay could happen next. Yeah, I'm just getting ahead of myself, but I bet Tom would salivate seeing both Katie and Cassidy back again.
I love how even when Katie is talking about responsibility, she still has this attitude of having fun with Tom. Was it mutual? Actually, I don't think it was, but since Tom couldn't do anything about it the experience made it arousing for him.
I love it when Miss Harwood is talking, and even thinking. Her ideas are what I treasure and I can read essays about her all day. Love it when she dreams about Tom bound to her all day.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2016 3:19 PM Title: Four's a Crowd
Tess might claim she's alright. But, she's got to be feeling the tension. Like someone buried up to their neck on the beach...just below the high tide mark!
[Report This]Date: July 09 2016 3:02 PM Title: Four's a Crowd
Miss Hardwood isn't very truthful, didn't Tom get stuck in her vagina at one point and almost suffocated? Still, at least Miss Hardwood is more understanding than Lina.
[Report This]Date: July 06 2016 7:36 PM Title: Ulterior
Ah, yes! The moment that I've truly dreaded more than the arrival of Tom's mother. The involvement of...
The Lady Lawyer! :-O
Author's Response:
Lol, heretofore and forthwith, abiding by the requirements and strictures of the aforementioned article contained in sub paragraph four pursuant to clause three.....ARGGGH! legal speak!
[Report This]Date: July 06 2016 4:40 PM Title: Ulterior
There we go! Lina is still the clever one in this situation. She had control over the entire conversation. She succeeded in convincing Tess to hold off the text and even scheduled a time for Tess to bring Tom to Lina's house.
We have seen Lina mention Serena a few times before. At first, she wanted all of Cassidy's info which still doesn't make sense to me becuase she didn't seem to do anything with it. Now they will talk again, and I'm sure it's about Tom and his mother instead.
I think the moment when Tom disagreed with Lina was what convinced Tess that Lina was trully on her side. However, I think Lina said this just to get on Tess's side.
Since Tom is sleeping and resting, will he be somewhat recovered for a fun time part 2 with Katie and Cassidy, or is it too soon? I know Tom isn't 100%, but I wonder how long until he is fine enough to handle them.
I bet when Lina gets Tom on Friday, they are going to have some fun before Raphaella shows up. Who knows? Maybe Tom is pleasing Lina while she picks up Raphaella. Wouldn't that be fun.
Serena Hall hasn't done anything and I think that alone makes this cliffhanger not as exciting as your usual cliffhangers.
I wonder who gets the next chapter? Lina and Serena or Cassidy and Tom? I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
More talk next chapter, but soon Tom, soon
[Report This]Date: July 01 2016 7:58 AM Title: Tess
@ Hector: Not so much a bad "guy" as a devious anti-heroine. After all; let's not forget the peculiar line of research she asked Serena to conduct. She didn't do that out of concern for Ella's maternal instincts! I'm unalterably convinced that she's just as obsessed as ever with having Tom purely as a combination pet and living sex toy. Just as obsessed as Jessica, in fact! But, mature enough to control it, better.
"That's my theory, and I'm stickin' to it." :-)
Date: June 30 2016 9:20 PM Title: Tom's Story
@TomSpeedy: Except at this point it's clear Tom doesn't know what's good for him. He's like an addict that thinks they can handle it, but they obviously can't.
Regardless of what you think of her, Tess is in the right here and the the only one that cares for Tom well being 100%. Especially since if Lina has her way, Raphaella will never see her son again and Tess will never see her brother.
@Carycomic: Problem with that is that Lina wouldn't just kidnap someone and she doesn't know Raphaella's sister has Tom's shrunken Grandpa with her.
Why are you making Lina into a bad guy anyway? When in reality there are ways she could resolve it amicably with Raphaella.
Like you know, coming to some sort of compromise with Raphaella. That seems far more in character than deciding to just kidnap someone.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2016 8:15 PM Title: Tess
Well? It looks like we're back to one of two alternatives. Either Jessica running back to her college sorority (Tom and all); or Lina and Tom's aunt shrink-napping his mom.
Of course, if Duggernaut can formulate a third alternative, then he's even more of a literary genius than we previously thought!
[Report This]Date: June 30 2016 7:35 PM Title: Tess
Aw, Tess. Don't be a party pooper. Tom is just having some fun. No need to worry about it.
Well, Tess does have a point. Tom is being passed around from girl to woman and I bet that she feels morally wrong to let Tom have this life.
It reminds me of the party for Janine where all the girls were asking about Tom and Tess kept shrugging it off. She knows that Tom is an attractive piece for these girls and I think this situation reminds Tess of that.
While Tess is right, I hope her decision gets overturned. I just can't suppress how much I love Tom to be this awesome toy passed around.
One issue that these characters gotta deal with is Tom's mom. I mean, it feels like the mention of her name gets people worried and see her as a wall between them and Tom.
Also, if Tess tells the truth to her mom, then Lina loses her credibility for her word. Now, Raphaella will be suspicious if she knows that Lina lied to her.
Cassidy also has an interesting take. She seeks desire through Tom, but also as a nurse, she seeks the need to help him recover. This conflicts her decisions and now to add Tom's mom to the plate may stress Cassidy out on what to do with him.
It seems at this point in the story, the character are also determining where should Tom go, just like us readers. We all have our own opinions for Tom, and these characters are also debating it.
I put my self in Tom's shoes and I think that I am fine and that these scars are nothing. )But that's just the inner Tom talking.) I really have no idea who gets Tom.
So many possibilities, I cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: June 30 2016 7:03 PM Title: Tess
Looks like Tessa cares more about Tom's wellbeing
than Tom himself does.
Date: June 30 2016 6:53 PM Title: Tess
Tom raised a hand and waved, “Giant Tess,” he greeted. Clever.
Otherwise, it looks like we're seeing people starting to rein Tom in, and put a damper on his adventuring ways. Let's see how that works out.