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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2016 6:05 PM Title: Monday Night

Still trying to get used to normal life, huh. Much easier being shrunk and abused, lol. Now the new normal is the new strange.

When Tess asked where was he, I was hoping Tom replied "inside Miss Harwood" or something like that.

The librarian is interested in Tom too. He has become quite the celebrity in this school.

Tom dorms? Fuck yeah. Parties all night. Shrink fest coming soon!

School fun. I can't wait for Tom to find Miss Harwood again. Especially in that yoga class.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Good analogy for Tom transitioning back to being big. We'll see how well he copes

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2016 5:59 PM Title: Monday Night

A hottie librarian? Please! No!!

No more red herrings. :-(

Author's Response:

Lol. Patience...

Reviewer: licktoy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2016 11:51 PM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

I am "afraid" Tom feels bad because something went wrong in his resizing and his molecules may collapse again - this time forever ;-)



Author's Response:

Hmm that just might be an issue...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 9:33 AM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

Daunting? I'd say it's a "little" overwhelming!

Ba-DUM-Boom!!

Seriously, though: it's nice to see that you're devoting more than one or two chapters to his respite at normal size. It shows you're not selling out to the "Just-give-us-some-wham-bam-thank-you-giant-ma'am" crowd.

Author's Response:

I'm not quite done with our intrepid hero yet...he's still a little shaken up

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 5:45 PM Title: Not Feeling Lunch

I know what's wrong. He is addicted to pussy and he ain't getting it. He has an addiction problem and he is suffering without it.

All the girls know how to cheer him. Tom just doesn't know that sex is what makes him feel better.

Interesting how open Janine is. I remember in the beginning of the story, Janine despised Tom despite his grin that he threw at her. Now she wants him. Awesome turn of events, having the prettiest girl in school go after you.

I think Tom needs to rest in bed and let some girl do all the action next time. Then, Tom can take control next time. Maybe, we can see some hot after school action, like those stories you hear all the time like some guy is doing it with a teacher in the closet or something.

Man, I want Granmps to stay. He seems so joyful and his enthusiasm toward shrinking is incredible. It's like when you have a fantasy and you find someone with the same fantasy and you share ideas.

Hopefully Tom gets better soon. I believe there is still lots of fun left for him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Aren't we all? Yes Janine has transformed herself into an emoting human being after starting out as quite a self absorbed she devil. This story isn't quite done yet

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 6:05 PM Title: Tom's Story

Well, imitation is alleged to be the sincerest form of flattery. Although, technically speaking, what you and I put poor Duggernaut through was more like a pair of fanfic abstracts!

Reviewer: bartek21 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 4:11 AM Title: Monday Morning Blues

tom may shrink by sexual arousal?
And this happens in front of janine
janine hide it very deep vagina to keep him safe
  (Accidentally she pulls him into her womb and gets stuck for 2 days in it)
Then all they are looking for Tom janine asking where he is. She tells them that he does not know
where is . and in fact, Tom is very close
it would be without the price hehehe

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 10:42 PM Title: Monday Morning Blues

I wish I was Tom right now. Visiting your giantess teachers as a normal sized person. It must be fun to share your experiences. It's like in porn sessions where after the session, you and your partner describe how was it and what you liked. Awesome.

Miss Addison defiantely has something special with Tom. Perhaps, she will pass Tom since he pleased her. "Miss Addison, I'm failing! Is there anything I can do to pass?" Miss Addison smiles. "Well, there is one thing...." and that's how Tom was the only student to pass that class. Ever had a hot teacher that was strict? Try this method. :)

Miss Harwood is so darn like able. Even as a regular teacher, she moves like she wants to tease Tom. I, too was mesmerized by what she was doing. Love how she whispers to him. Love how she leaned over his desk to show power. Love how she specifically wanted him to be between her lips and inside her pussy. So naughty, Miss Harwood. I love it! I hope she gives him detention again!

Insert detention scene:

Tom was the only student in for detention that day. He was stuck with Miss Harwood and that wasn't necessarily a bad thing. Miss Harwood isn't your average teacher. She blended beauty and power into one powerful body and you almost wanted to be in detention just to see her. Tom sat in his seat wait for detention to start. Moments later, Miss Harwood arrived. She locked the door behind her and looked over at Tom. Tom's eyes locked on to her and she embraced his gaze. She licked her finger and traced it down her body, emphasizing her curves and figure. Her heels clicked on the floor, the sound becoming louder as she approached his desk until he was looking way up at her. Miss Harwood leaned over Tom's desk and smiled. "Time for detention, Mr. Wentworth." Tom just stared back at her. She smiled and walked around Tom's desk. "I miss you as my toy.....my little plaything" she whispered in Tom's ear. "Your little body sent shivers down my spine". Miss Harwood stroked Tom's back as she said this. She then reached her arms around Tom and she was sliding her hands around Tom's front. She then lowered them to his crotch and she squeezed with Tom letting out a small whince. Miss Harwood then removed her hands and pulled Tom's chair back from his desk, dragging Tom with it. She then walked in front of Tom, smiled and sat on his lap. Tom's dick got harder. "Do you miss my body, Tom? My smooth, cuvaceous, sweet smelling body all over you? Did it make you hard?" She then began grinding on his lap making Tom's erect member ready to erupt. Once she felt it, Miss Harwood stopped grinding. Tom expected her to get up, but she didn't. She just sat on his lap, almost motion less. Miss Harwood then leaned back, her smooth hair covering Tom's face. He could smell something sweet and knew that it was from her hair. As she let Tom fiddle with her hair, she decided to use this to her advantage. "You know Tom, you will always be my favorite. In fact, I think I am going to keep you once again." She chuckled. This got Tom's attention. "What do you mean? I'm back to my normal height." "Not for long little man" she smiled and stood up, and only then did Tom realized that he was indeed shrinking again, but how. Not instantly like he did in his grandfather's basement, but slowly, enough for Miss Harwood to appreciate the fear in Tom's eyes. Even though Tom dreamed about being small again, he wasn't ready yet. Not like this. And no one knows about his whereabouts! Once Tom reached 3 feet tall in his chair, Miss Harwood sat on the front end of the chair facing him, her legs blocking his sides and her fit core blocking his front. She leaned in and pressed her firm breasts into Tom, whose head fit perfectly in between them. "I convinced your grandfather to let me have some of the shrinking formula. I washed my hair with it. Enjoyed the smell?" She giggled. "Of course you did. It wasn't hard to get it knowing your grandfather's fantasy. He happily offered it to me, and it wasn't hard to seduce him. He thinks you are a lucky boy Tom. He said that you are lucky to have me, and he was right. But more importantly, I am lucky to have you". She smiled. Tom tried to scream, but it was muffled as Miss Harwood was smothering him. He was breathing in throughly the fabric of her top but his voice was nowhere to be found. He couldn't believe what he was hearing. He knew that his grandfather was aware of Tom wanting to shrink back again, but a surprise shrinking was not what he expected. At least someone knows that Miss Harwood has him, but he wasn't sure if his teacher has promised him to keep it a secret. Miss Harwood defiantely knew how to get what she wanted. Once Tom reached 1 foot tall, Miss Harwood scooted herself forward, restricting Tom's space. He was facing her midsection, very flat with no signs of any bulge. On his sides were her muscular thighs, where they were like walls to him. "It won't be long now." Miss Harwood giggled as her body came in closer. Before he knew it, Tom was small enough to be held and Miss Harwood then grabbed him and lifted him up to her face. "My little Tom, back with Miss Harwood. Come back for more?" She giggled. Tom couldn't help but get hard. He knew what she was capable of and he wasn't sure when this would end. He reached his final height of 3 inches and the shrinking stopped. Tom knew what time it was. "Playtime!" Miss Harwood cheered. It was almost as if she could read his mind. With that, she kissed his face, Tom, unable to protect himself as the soft lips enveloped his face, covering him with lipstick, and a scent of feminine beauty. She then placed him in her cleavage, rendering him immobile. He looked at her and she gave a sexy grin back at him. Miss Harwood then began to shake and Tom felt himself getting hit by her massive boobs. Soon, they separated and Tom slipped out. "Not so fast" Miss Harwood chirped as she caught Tom. "Now for my favorite spot. It's time to take you home with me Tom. We will be spending a lot of quality time together, just you and me." Tom noticed her hand lowering and she pulled open the waistband of her panties, revealing what he once called heaven. "I hope you like it down there, I made it extra cozy for you. Don't worry, you will only be down there all day" she giggled. Tom let out a yelp as Miss Harwood let go of him and he began descending, straight into the dark abyss which he was well familiar with. He landed smoothly as he always had and he stopped right in front of her glistening sex as it shined in the light. Before he had any chance to admire it, Miss Harwood let the waistband snap back, sealing Tom inside and leaving him in darkness. Miss Harwood took her time getting home. She knew that she was in no rush and she had all the time in the world to play with Tom. He was her and she liked it that way.

End detention scene. Best ending ever. :)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 8:37 PM Title: Monday Morning Blues

Proof, once again, that absence makes the heart grow fonder...and abstinence makes the part grow harder.

P.S.--First, again, TS! X-D

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 8:28 PM Title: The Wisdom of Age

I'm sure TomSpeedy (who will probably claim technical difficulties, again, for not being first) will call it "wishful thinking." But, I have a bad feeling that Young Tom is going to have a relapse from those residual isotopes his eponymous grandfather hinted at.

Author's Response:

Hmm one never knows...

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2016 9:18 PM Title: Mother Knows Best

Private tutors........ :D

Man, I can't wait to see who those tutors will be. (Please be Miss Harwood).

Must be very weird to see this beautiful girl who has had sex with you as a giantess gently stroke your cheek and kiss your hand in a caring manner. Boy, it's amazing what Tom has gone through.

I am eager to listen to Tom 1 and 3 discuss. I hope they share fantasies of stories! "Hey gramps, what made you stick with my aunt?" "Oh, well, let's just say that she knows how to handle small things." Young Tom saw it all coming together. When his aunt saw him all little, he saw the look on her eyes, as if she was eager to do something. Then it hit him. His grandpa shrunk too and his aunt was his giantess. A grin appeared on young Tom's face and the older Tom grinned even wider. "I think you know why I favor you aunt now, don't you my young Tom?" "Gramps, you got to tell me everything. How long? What did she do? What was your punishment..." "Slow down, Tom. Not here. I'm not ready to share everything in this strangers house. But I can give you a few tips on how to enjoy it more." "How? Young Tom replied. "You will find out next chapter. Isn't that right Duggernaut." (From beyond the story, Duggernaut gave a nod of approval.)

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 27 2016 8:40 PM Title: Mother Knows Best

That-a-boy, Tom! Stick by your guns.

It would've been all too easy for him to yield to his mother's desire to over-compensate. But, I think this bizarre experience--I won't say "unique" as he now knows his grandfather went through it, too--has shown him that he is mentally and emotionally stronger than he previously thought he was. In which regard, he might be more like his mother than even she is willing to admit.

I just wish Jessica, Tatiana, and Serena could have had some quality time with Our Hero, as well.

Reviewer: Shiron66 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2016 1:38 PM Title: Zapped

Well, I just hope that Tom shrink again..... and maybe Lina run away with him..... "the last one is only a dream of my...XD"

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 3:28 PM Title: Zapped

Great chapter. 

 

I look forward to seeing Tom trying to return to a normal life, especially running into Miss Hardwood and Miss Addison. Especially Miss Addison since she helped cover for Tom even after Janine took Tom away from her.

 

I also kinda hope Addison and Hardwood bond over their shared experience with Tom. Maybe Hardwood can help her loosen up. 



Author's Response:

Those are a couple of the loose ends I referenced in another response to a review.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 11:35 AM Title: Zapped

Whoa! What a minute!

They already enlarged him? This chapter? Duggernaut, I'm used to you using every detail to sneak in a chapter. Such as the "the car ride" or "the facility" or "Dr. Harrison" and then "the machine" and finally would be this chapter. Instead, you cut straight to the enlargement which is something that I did not expect from you.

Well, now that he is big, do the ladies still want a piece of him? I can tell Tom wants a piece of them. It must feel great to be normal again. It's like waking up from a dream of giantesses and all of a sudden, they return in your normal life.

Like, what if you dream of some imaginary hot girl, and then you wake up and she is in your life. I bet that's how Tom feels with some of these women.

Also, Tom has to deal with responsibikty again. Eating, going to the bathroom, homework, school. Maybe being tiny was better?

I can't wait for Tom to go meet Miss Harwood and Miss Addison. I want to see the looks on their faces. Especially Miss Harwood! I wonder if she will put him in detention.

My original plan for this story was to have Tom shrunk forever. But seeing how far this story has come and how many people look up to at as inspiration, I think a classic storybook feelgood ending would be nice.

Being normal and living life as a regular kid again shows that this was Tom's story of his adventure of being tiny.

By loose ends, I hope this means that Tom meets every giantess and grins at them knowing what they did to him. It's like they have their own secret that the rest of the world is oblivious to.

Well, this machine has no side effects, so we might as well use it every night to have some fun. Isn't that the dream? Deciding how to get kinky just got a whole lot more interesting.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Glad I was able to step outside your expectations and surprise you. Yep Tom is big again and you'll soon find out the machine is broken...

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2016 6:32 AM Title: Zapped

An excellent blend of poignancy and medical plausibility (re: his post-enlargement reaction). But, I now have to wonder what's ahead for chapter 126? The re-shrinking of Grandpa Tom by Donatella? If only for a quick "auntie climax?"

Author's Response:

Nice! I've a couple of things up my sleeve still so don't ring the bell just yet :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 3:16 PM Title: Mother Child Reunion

Well then, it looks as though this story is about to start winding down. But, then, Lina's here, and no doubt she's scheming to turn this situation to her advantage.

It also looks like I was wrong earlier: it looks like Serena won't have a round with Tom.



Author's Response:

It certainly has that feel doesn't it?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2016 7:23 AM Title: Mother Child Reunion

WOW!!!!!!!!!!

Like Lina, I didn't expect Little Tom's mom to be so calm. Despite what her sister had already shown her! I mean; let's face it. A shrunken father-in-law is one thing. But, a shrunken son?! I wouldn't have been surprised at still seeing some kind of histrionic occurrence. Raffaella is truly stronger than most people (even her own kids) give her credit for.

I have to wonder, though; is Little Tom crying tears of joy and relief? Or disappointment?

Author's Response:

We know Ella has the ability to undo the shrinking and is competent as a parent but we aren't quite finished with her maternal instinct yet. As for the tears perhaps a bit of both

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2016 6:18 PM Title: Mother Child Reunion

"I'm not sure what to say about the next chapter". Oh no... Could it be?? Why do I think the story is ending. Tom getting restored, his tale is ending?? No!!!!!

Well, if it does end, it's been a great run. Breaking records, 124+ chapters, 700+ reviews, top read and favorited. It's been an adventure.

I still hope there is more to this story. Maybe, Tom gets some fun before he gets restored. Maybe, Tom refuses to grow back and he is forever a little guy ready to be with a woman.

Maybe this Harrison Kinsley person can't get Tom to focus, so they bring in Miss Harwood to keep him in check. :)

Honestly, I'm just taking my best memories of this story and trying to squeeze some more fun into the rest of this story.

Back to this chapter.

Wow, Ella was so chill with it. I knew that she wouldn't freak out, but it was odd to see Tom's mom just think that it's no big deal.

Lol, rip Lina's plans. While it seemed like a good plan, it seemed a bit far fetched. Too good to be true.

I kind of like this Tom Sr. situation in the background. By the way he keeps smiling, I imagine that he can shrink anytime he wants. He probably knows that Donatella is going to fuck him later tonight.

This also brings up the question of whether Tom will be restored and which giantess gets the shrinking machine. (What if Miss Harwood gets the shrinking machine???!!! She can shrink Tom during private detention and no one will know!)

I love how Donatella thinks about keeping the young Tom as a pet too. I bet Tom is horny with all these gorgeous women all around him.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Still some unanswered things and loose threads. It's been a helluva of a run and a lot of fun. 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 2:13 PM Title: Tom's Story

@Darkness,

I believe the end notes are to describe what happens in the next chapter. That would be the 2 mothers with their own agendas for what to do with Tom. The older Tom is just a bystander, and he isn't the focus. These two mothers are focused on the little Tom which I guess is why only 1 Tom is mentioned.

@tinyman,

Tess has had thoughts about it, but she has refused to let those thoughts come to her. Even Janine early on has tried to lure Tess into some fun with Tom but she declined. If anything, Tess might be interested in women anyway, especially since Janine and Tess were kissing each other. I think Tess and Raphaella also are aware that Tom is part of their family and don't find the intimate behavior as attractive as the other ladies.

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