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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 8:25 PM Title: The Hired Help

So, Marta thought there was a bruja en la casa. Interesting! It was certainly quite refreshing that she was scared of him, rather than lustfully attracted to him (like so many others).

I can't wait to see what Janine has in store for him. ;-D

Author's Response:

I thought it might be novel to have her respond a little differently than so many others, glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 8:16 PM Title: The House Janine Built

Or, failing that, Marta can be revealed as secretly being on the payroll of Jessica Lindholm. ;-)

Author's Response:

Lol, maybe

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2016 6:23 PM Title: The House Janine Built

Dear Santa,

I confess. I have been a naughty boy. I have requested a story based on my fantasies and what I liked. Hopefully, you will forgive me and see how my naughty ideas were used for good instead of evil.

Please let this Marta situation be just a decoy. Maybe let her play a role as leverage for someone else. I hope Miss Harwood bribed Marta to sneak off with Tom and then Marta gives Tom to Katie. Plot twist!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2016 6:00 PM Title: The House Janine Built

"Dear Santa: I have been enjoying Duggernaut's story a whoooooooooole bunch. But, for Xmas, this year, I would really, really, REALLY like Marta the Maid to get her shot at Little Tom in chapter 145. I've been super-extra good this year. So, I'm hoping that will persuade you to say 'yes!' "

"Yours truly: Carycomic."

P.S.--Merry Christmas, Dug. :-)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2016 12:26 AM Title: Where to from here

Yeah, it was touching, but everyone is still thinking about the next time they will have Tom. They immediately jump into stating how they can help.

Loved how they all have their own roles so Tom gets a chance with everyone. Not sure about Lina and Serena. Seems like they won't have much time with Tom.

I think Miss Harwood defiantely has the best option. If she is responsible for his education, that's a lot of time for some special attention.

Afterward, Janine is next and if she gets aggressive, Cassidy is ready patch him up. She won't patch him up too quickly since she wants some fun too.

Typical day for Tom:

Tom wakes up and has fun with Janine. Janine gives him a shower and takes him downstairs. Lina then makes him special breakfast while she has fun with Tom. She sends Tom with Janine to school where he is given to Miss Harwood for the entire school day! Miss Harwood then has her fun and takes Tom to his limit and she then gives Tom to Cassidy to nurse him back to full health. Cassidy takes her sweet time with Tom and having fun as well. Then he is given back to Janine to take back to the house where Lina and Janine have their way with Tom for the night. If things get rough, they invite Cassidy. If Tom gets confused, they invite Katie. Tom then goes to sleep dreaming about going through the cycle over and over again.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

We shall see how things unfold for Tom whilst they are all waiting for the upcoming trip. Might be interesting.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 9:32 PM Title: Where to from here

So, let me see if I have the passenger list right.

Tess, as his loyal sister
Janine, as his concerned girlfriend
Lina, as Janine's concerned mother
Serena, as Lina's concerned lawyer
Ms. Harwood, as his interim tutor
Cassidy, as his personal nurse.

Let's see how well I do by the end of chapter 144.

Author's Response:

We shall see... :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 6:37 PM Title: Where to from here

Tom is a tiny man with a big harem, and it looks like Grandpa is starting to build his own harem.



Author's Response:

Tom is a chip off the old old block. 

Reviewer: Rapha the ghost Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2016 9:41 AM Title: Katie

Dang it dude, you've got me on edge. xD

Keep up the awesome work! (^~^)=b

Author's Response:

Excellent! Thanks for the props

Reviewer: ILike Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 7:38 PM Title: Katie

one of the longest stories I read on here for sure lol



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to play along, I'm still not quite sure how this thing will turn out

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 6:46 PM Title: Katie

I don't profess to  be a polished writer


You're becoming one, though.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 4:42 PM Title: Katie

You have always been so great at including lots of detail, but the chapter titled "Katie" barely had the detail I expected. I thought this was the "hour of fun" chapter.

Good news is that Katie still has some kinky ideas for Tom.

Best line of the chapter:

"I would tie you from your feet to your head and smother you against my pussy for an entire evening of hot yoga for your little prank,” she threatened."

Sometimes, I just wish Miss Harwood had some sort of journal where she describes all the things she has planned for Tom.

Good news is that Tom is staying in the house for a while, and guess who else is also staying? Lina! I bet she has something extra special for Tom.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

I figured the title would light you up, I knew you would approve of Miss Harwood's detention time for Tom. :)

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 2:25 PM Title: Katie

@Carycomic: That would be a tragic ending. No more sex.



Author's Response:

I thought that was only if you got married

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2016 2:12 PM Title: Katie

Aw, shucks! I guess that means ch. 143 is the concluding chapter. :-(

Author's Response:

It's ending? Nobody told me...

Reviewer: arselover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 08 2016 3:58 AM Title: Reassessing the Situation

good stuff



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read this story and share a review 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2016 11:54 PM Title: Reassessing the Situation

Go Lina! I hope she eventually gets Tom. She has been patiently waiting for him and I think her plan is settling in.

I wish this was Miss Harwood's chapter. I was so excited that this story was updated. Well, I can save that feeling for next time.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Now it looks like Lina is back in the race. Things could get interesting 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 07 2016 11:19 PM Title: Reassessing the Situation

First off: congratulations on the 800 review!

Secondly: this might sound twisted of me. But, I think I'll be rooting for Lina, this go-round.

Last, but not least: I can't wait to see what transpires in that Swedish laboratory!

Author's Response:

Whew thanks 800 is crazy! The chief scientist is Dr. Holmstrom, Freya Holmstrom what are the odds she's a Nordic beauty? Um my leaning is ah yeah

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 6:51 AM Title: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

The librarian might have even shown him an Omega Pi chart!*

*This has been an unsolicited cross-plug.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2016 1:54 PM Title: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

hopefully this jumble of words meets your expectations.

*laughs*



Author's Response:

I shall take that as a vote for the positive, :)

Reviewer: Rapha the ghost Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2016 12:22 PM Title: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

Damn. Nice job man! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thanks Rapha, not quite done yet

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 03 2016 4:15 PM Title: When the student is ready, the teacher shall appear

Well, it could've been worse. The librarian could've found him! And, in the immortal words of a certain bumper sticker: "Librarians do it, studiously."

Author's Response:

Or, she could have shown him her DEWY decimal system. eh? Dewy?

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