Date: March 08 2017 6:43 PM Title: Misdirection
So the Janine, Tess, Sam lesbian orgy is off? Damn...I mean "Don't do it Tess, stay away from that toxic bitch."
Ya know, I felt sorry for her when we first saw her, but now I know why Janine was sitting alone. She's really in touch with her inner psycho cunt.
The insertion really works as a metaphor, cuz Tom's really getting to see how ugly she is on the inside.
Tess gave up and left the house a little too easy in my opinion, but what can you do. (besides knife the bitch and check her panties)
Lina is a great character. And it's great to see someone who makes Tom feel good, maybe even enjoy his perdicament.
And Tom...is that responsibility I hear...accepting that he caused his situation. Holy shit...I never would have seen that coming. Now if he could manage to imagine that Tess might be worried and maybe let her know he's still alive...then maybe he start to be less of a little dick.
Date: March 08 2017 6:57 AM Title: Tess
Okay, in this story I am totally with Tess. The thing about Tess is I don’t really see her as an enabler. I think at this moment, that’s how she sees herself, but that’s not really her motivation. I think she sees here action through the eyes of their consequences. She seems more motivated by sympathy (though she wouldn’t admit it) and as providing a pressure release for Tom, who seems to be a disaster waiting to happen.
She was probably feeling warned about this by his behavior during incest tease scenes. And sees him as having a need to have things “his way” since he has so little control over his situation.
There’s a lot of chapters to go, we’ll see if I’m reading her right.
BTW...his favorite band is Injustice? A band called Injustice? In your stories? HA! Is one of their songs “Little Man Say’s That’s Not Fair?” That is too perfect.
I do like how this chapter deals with real emotional fallout from Tom’s fantasy. Great work.
The grandpa mystery really has me. I gotta know! I gotta know!
Peace, and thanks.
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Hi pixl8ed,
Tess will continue to be, for want of a better phrase, the 'tragic' figure in this tale. i realize you're still wrestling with early chapter and much has transpired in teh year plus this story has been unfolding. As for Injustice, it was a fictitious band created for my story Fan Girls, where the band gets shrunk. there will be twists and turns and explorations aplenty yet to come. :)
Date: March 07 2017 10:09 PM Title: Janine
Holy shit! Tom is such a little dick! (How do you spell double entandre?)
And Janine is a psycho!
They kinda deserve each other.
All Tom really has going for him is he's Tess' brother. I really don't want Tess to feel responsible when the little dill weed gets his ass in trouble.
You really are creating an essential shrinking man story here. Great dialogue and charcters that are fascinating, maybe not likable...I'll see if they grow on me.
Get it "grow on me?"
Author's Response:
LOL, Tom is certainly a twerp and Janine is CRAZY! I get it, like a fungus, grow on you :)
Date: March 07 2017 7:35 AM Title: Back at the School
Okay,
This sort of feels like a sitcom called "my idiot shrunken brother"
A sit com that would win an emmy, the dialogue is chrisp and witty.
I almost feel sorry for Janine, sitting all alone. I wonder what she'll be really like.
Tess seems like she's the smart one, but I think she needs to learn how to say no and mean it, because Tom ....he's gonna get into trouble.
Peace
[Report This]Date: March 05 2017 2:41 PM Title: Test 1
Well, it says test 1, which seems like there will be a test 2.
I think Tom Sr. is fine, but the impact of that fear will make everyone reconsider this. Maybe Dona and Tom sr will get it on as well.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 05 2017 8:25 AM Title: Test 1
Hmmmmm! When you put it like that, Mr. Speedy, it gives rise to the possibility of a most interesting crossover. Imagine Duggernaut someday writing a story where Little Tom Wentworth III gets abducted by Clarice the Superwitch (as Mr. G might call her) for the purpose of giving Jack Dalton an apprentice. Although, strictly in the field of burglary!*
*After all, we don't to corrupt Little Tom's morals anymore than they already have been. Do we? ;-)
Date: March 04 2017 9:09 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic,
I read all of Duggernaut's stories. I even have reviews on the "contract". It's just in that story, the guys were being seduced by the women, and the burglary was when the guys were normal sized anyway. A shrunken thief would be very interesting, especially for a character such as Tom.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2017 5:11 PM Title: Test 1
I sincerely hope the poor little guy didn't wind up like one of those spacemen from FORBIDDEN PLANET. :-(
[Report This]Date: March 04 2017 5:06 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
@TomSpeedy: actually, one of Duggernaut's earliest stories was along that line. It's called THE CONTRACT! Give it a read when you have a chance. :-)
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 6:39 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
Hmm. This gives me an idea for another story. (Don't make this one. It's a joke.) Tom can be burglar and seduce women to get them to ease up. Also, if he gets caught, he gives them pleasure as his way of payment.
For this chapter, I liked the part when he said "we won't" confidently. Gave me a Batman vibe.
Even though Tom said that for effect, I have this feeling that they will be caught. We know all the women will be jealous except for Tom's mom.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 4:39 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
WOW!! To think that this chapter gets posted almost a full two weeks after Valentine's Day! Although, "carnal pleasure" and "true love" are supposed to be two different things. Aren't they?
[Report This]Date: February 22 2017 9:49 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute
This seems like the typical chapter in this story. We got the parents doing their own thing. Tom flirting again, Tom gets left alone with a girl, and he uses his strategy to seduce another woman.
Also, I'm not ready to be attracted to this girl just becuase of one sentence describing her beauty. Usually it's the dialogue that makes me like the giantess. Miss Harwood had the best comments that hinted at things. This girl just happened to be on Tom's radar and he is seducing her.
Hmm. I think I like it when the giantess seduces Tom rather than Tom seduces her. Or, maybe it's that this girl is new and I see her as a complete stranger.
Reminds me of Kandi from Omega Pi. I like that depth in a character before the action.
Other than that, this chapter is great. I wish the plane ride was longer. Dona seems kinky. Being alone with a doctor's assistant is hot.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I think your preference for a giantess is a self assured woman who knows what she likes and by that, I mean a little fella, then she simply takes what she wants, there may some witty dialogue, or not, she's in charge. She doesn't need to be seduced or convinced about the game, she's already two or three moves ahead, a la Miss Harwoord. Close? :)
[Report This]Date: February 22 2017 7:57 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute
Careful, Tom. You could be creating a Freya-stein!*
*Oh, come on! Stop groaning! You know I had to say that.
Author's Response:
I thought you might go something like, 'out of the freya-ing pan and into the fire,' tee hee
[Report This]Date: February 18 2017 5:09 AM Title: This Flight Tonight
How does the image of Serena still stay in his head? Dona is right there and he should be thinking of her. Sure, Tom doesn't see anything sexual about it, but we don't know what Dona is capable of.
If I was Tom, I would be thinking of Dona instead. Of course, Tom sees Dona as his caring aunt, but I see her as this sexy ravenous woman who might have some kinky tricks up her sleeve.
This is going to be a long flight. Tom needs his rest for some other activities.
How did Tom get last security? Also, what do you mean that Tom's seat was across Dona's? Were the seats facing each other. I'm picturing Dona with the window seat, Raphaella with the isle seat and Tom has the middle seat. I would like to know how they were seated.
What if Tom was just on an airline seat and some sexy airline hostess decided to sit down on him. The seats are comfy so Tom would be ok. Hmm. Or what if Lina teases him by almost sitting down. (Reminds me of when Katie almost sat on him. Sexy.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Tim the group left through private security. Yes Tom and Dona were seated across from one another. Getting sat on would have been bad
[Report This]Date: February 17 2017 11:24 PM Title: This Flight Tonight
"Maybe" is definitely putting it mildly. Serena's little tease routine, in the last chapter, somehow gives me the feeling she has unplumbed depths of sexual stamina that would make Janine look positively out-of-shape by comparison!
Author's Response:
I do believe your interpretation of the situation is very accurate.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2017 3:16 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
I absolutelly loved her teasing dominace :-)
Author's Response:
Not quite what Tom had in mind...
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 5:57 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
She has just given new meaning to the phrase "p***y-whupped."
Date: February 14 2017 1:40 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
At the end of the last chapter, Serena seemed like she was in Cassidy's position. Then she turned it around and left Tom defeated while remaining in complete control. Nice.
Author's Response:
Thought a little twist might be a nice change
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 1:17 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
Not what I expected, but wow that was sexy. I was amazed at what she did and I like it.
I think it was becuase what she did was new to me. She opens her legs to show that she was the one in control not letting Tom seduce her. Then she sat on his body, everything below his neck and that scene alone got me. From Tom's angle, Serena must have looked like a complete goddess. Then Serena walked away, leaving me wanting more.
Happy Valentine's Day to all of Tom's female friends!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 11:14 PM Title: Astraea
"What should she do?"
I would say...give new meaning to the phrase "amicus curiae!"
Seriously, though: does the chapter title refer to Tom now aiming at a new star in his libidinous universe?