Date: March 07 2017 7:35 AM Title: Back at the School
Okay,
This sort of feels like a sitcom called "my idiot shrunken brother"
A sit com that would win an emmy, the dialogue is chrisp and witty.
I almost feel sorry for Janine, sitting all alone. I wonder what she'll be really like.
Tess seems like she's the smart one, but I think she needs to learn how to say no and mean it, because Tom ....he's gonna get into trouble.
Peace
[Report This]Date: March 05 2017 2:41 PM Title: Test 1
Well, it says test 1, which seems like there will be a test 2.
I think Tom Sr. is fine, but the impact of that fear will make everyone reconsider this. Maybe Dona and Tom sr will get it on as well.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 05 2017 8:25 AM Title: Test 1
Hmmmmm! When you put it like that, Mr. Speedy, it gives rise to the possibility of a most interesting crossover. Imagine Duggernaut someday writing a story where Little Tom Wentworth III gets abducted by Clarice the Superwitch (as Mr. G might call her) for the purpose of giving Jack Dalton an apprentice. Although, strictly in the field of burglary!*
*After all, we don't to corrupt Little Tom's morals anymore than they already have been. Do we? ;-)
[Report This]Date: March 04 2017 5:11 PM Title: Test 1
I sincerely hope the poor little guy didn't wind up like one of those spacemen from FORBIDDEN PLANET. :-(
[Report This]Date: March 04 2017 5:06 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
@TomSpeedy: actually, one of Duggernaut's earliest stories was along that line. It's called THE CONTRACT! Give it a read when you have a chance. :-)
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 6:39 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
Hmm. This gives me an idea for another story. (Don't make this one. It's a joke.) Tom can be burglar and seduce women to get them to ease up. Also, if he gets caught, he gives them pleasure as his way of payment.
For this chapter, I liked the part when he said "we won't" confidently. Gave me a Batman vibe.
Even though Tom said that for effect, I have this feeling that they will be caught. We know all the women will be jealous except for Tom's mom.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 25 2017 4:39 PM Title: Stockholm syndrome
WOW!! To think that this chapter gets posted almost a full two weeks after Valentine's Day! Although, "carnal pleasure" and "true love" are supposed to be two different things. Aren't they?
[Report This]Date: February 22 2017 9:49 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute
This seems like the typical chapter in this story. We got the parents doing their own thing. Tom flirting again, Tom gets left alone with a girl, and he uses his strategy to seduce another woman.
Also, I'm not ready to be attracted to this girl just becuase of one sentence describing her beauty. Usually it's the dialogue that makes me like the giantess. Miss Harwood had the best comments that hinted at things. This girl just happened to be on Tom's radar and he is seducing her.
Hmm. I think I like it when the giantess seduces Tom rather than Tom seduces her. Or, maybe it's that this girl is new and I see her as a complete stranger.
Reminds me of Kandi from Omega Pi. I like that depth in a character before the action.
Other than that, this chapter is great. I wish the plane ride was longer. Dona seems kinky. Being alone with a doctor's assistant is hot.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I think your preference for a giantess is a self assured woman who knows what she likes and by that, I mean a little fella, then she simply takes what she wants, there may some witty dialogue, or not, she's in charge. She doesn't need to be seduced or convinced about the game, she's already two or three moves ahead, a la Miss Harwoord. Close? :)
[Report This]Date: February 22 2017 7:57 PM Title: The Gustafson Institute
Careful, Tom. You could be creating a Freya-stein!*
*Oh, come on! Stop groaning! You know I had to say that.
Author's Response:
I thought you might go something like, 'out of the freya-ing pan and into the fire,' tee hee
[Report This]Date: February 18 2017 5:09 AM Title: This Flight Tonight
How does the image of Serena still stay in his head? Dona is right there and he should be thinking of her. Sure, Tom doesn't see anything sexual about it, but we don't know what Dona is capable of.
If I was Tom, I would be thinking of Dona instead. Of course, Tom sees Dona as his caring aunt, but I see her as this sexy ravenous woman who might have some kinky tricks up her sleeve.
This is going to be a long flight. Tom needs his rest for some other activities.
How did Tom get last security? Also, what do you mean that Tom's seat was across Dona's? Were the seats facing each other. I'm picturing Dona with the window seat, Raphaella with the isle seat and Tom has the middle seat. I would like to know how they were seated.
What if Tom was just on an airline seat and some sexy airline hostess decided to sit down on him. The seats are comfy so Tom would be ok. Hmm. Or what if Lina teases him by almost sitting down. (Reminds me of when Katie almost sat on him. Sexy.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hi Tim the group left through private security. Yes Tom and Dona were seated across from one another. Getting sat on would have been bad
[Report This]Date: February 17 2017 11:24 PM Title: This Flight Tonight
"Maybe" is definitely putting it mildly. Serena's little tease routine, in the last chapter, somehow gives me the feeling she has unplumbed depths of sexual stamina that would make Janine look positively out-of-shape by comparison!
Author's Response:
I do believe your interpretation of the situation is very accurate.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2017 3:16 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
I absolutelly loved her teasing dominace :-)
Author's Response:
Not quite what Tom had in mind...
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 5:57 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
She has just given new meaning to the phrase "p***y-whupped."
Date: February 14 2017 1:40 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
At the end of the last chapter, Serena seemed like she was in Cassidy's position. Then she turned it around and left Tom defeated while remaining in complete control. Nice.
Author's Response:
Thought a little twist might be a nice change
[Report This]Date: February 14 2017 1:17 PM Title: Habeas Corpus
Not what I expected, but wow that was sexy. I was amazed at what she did and I like it.
I think it was becuase what she did was new to me. She opens her legs to show that she was the one in control not letting Tom seduce her. Then she sat on his body, everything below his neck and that scene alone got me. From Tom's angle, Serena must have looked like a complete goddess. Then Serena walked away, leaving me wanting more.
Happy Valentine's Day to all of Tom's female friends!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 11:14 PM Title: Astraea
"What should she do?"
I would say...give new meaning to the phrase "amicus curiae!"
Seriously, though: does the chapter title refer to Tom now aiming at a new star in his libidinous universe?
[Report This]Date: February 04 2017 4:28 PM Title: Astraea
Sentence him to life in pussy!
Tom has pleaded guilty! Arrest him! Punish him! Make him serve justice to the law!
Tom has been guilty of extreme seduction, sexy grins, charming deameanor and for creating a new drug for women, himself.
Well, I never thought Serena would actually have time for Tom, but I guess it just had to happen.
I still wish Lina had him again. Boy was she stunning.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: February 04 2017 2:46 PM Title: Astraea
I wish I were this smooth at seduction. Instead, I live vicariously through Tom.
[Report This]Date: January 31 2017 8:32 AM Title: Lina's Last Dance
OK! Being serious, now. Even though being serious makes me feel like I'm ruining someone else's good joke by over-analyzing it.
I like how you've put the proverbial shoe on the other foot with the Lindholm ladies. The first time around, Little Tom was at their arguable mercy. Although, in Lina's case, his first time with her was comparatively gentler and more voluntary. Yet, this time around, he was the one mostly in control of them! Using what he'd learned from his previous experiences to get the proverbial upper hand.
I shudder to think of what he could do to that poor librarian if she ever got _her_ inexperienced hands on him!
[Report This]Date: January 30 2017 11:19 PM Title: Lina's Last Dance
Please tell me that the afternoon is not over. That scene felt somewhat quick compared to the other women. I think Lina deserves a round 2 for how much time she waited.
Tom probably went right to the chase becuase he was tired from last night. After a rough night with Janine, Lina will present that lovely recovery to aid Tom as he relaxes.
I can't wait for the next chapter!