Date: March 21 2017 7:21 PM Title: Maternal Instincts
Hmmm.
I really don't think the sould go. Not because I want Tom stuck in his situation. They should wait at least the time it took for the last solution to "relapse." Just seems like a good caution.
Poor Tom has been through enough and deserves his stature back, but it would be really hard on him to endure another failure. And kind of tragic if he was bigger for a while and his Janine wasn't there.
Peace
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Waitng seems like a good idea to see if there are any lingering effects... then again a lot of things can happen when you are a stranger in a strange land.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 8:18 PM Title: Maternal Instincts
First of all, glad you are back. I'm guessing you had some sort of spring break or something.
Second, I'm glad you deleted that horrendous spam review. It shows me that you care about your reviews once again which is awesome.
Wow! Even Lina has changed as a character and I love it. The way she was thinking about Tom and realizing what experiences she had with him, she realized that Tom will have many opportunities with her and Lina doesn't have to go after Tom all the time. She can show that she can control that urge better than the other ladies and I like that. Her gentler style has also affected the way she talks to Tom and that's awesome.
Janine and Tom are bound to be a couple. Like Ken and Barbie. You just want to ship them together.
Tom has made another great point. If everything goes as planned and Tom is big again, how does his relationship with Lina change. I mean, if Janine marries Tom and Tom decides to have fun with Lina one day, usually that would be messed up. However, I just have this feeling that Janine would laugh it off if she caught Tom with her mom. They all been through so much that this craze for Tom just makes it so special.
Now I'm trying to imagine Tom with everyone when he becomes normal. One day he shops with Lina, they do it in the changing room. Gets injured, does it with Cassidy on his bed. Gets in detention and has fun with Miss Harwood. What a dream come true.
So is gramps normal sized or is he tiny? His condition seems to be fine but his size wasn't mentioned. Also, it sounds like Dona is going to have fun with Tom Sr once he is better.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Busy training and am just about done. Yeah, don't know where that weird review came from - good riddance. Although it has been a year and a half for us, it's only been a couple of months story time, so while i wanted to show dynamic character evolution, I didn't want it to be too unbelievable. Right now Tom's grandfaterh is full sized but out for the moment. toying with a couple of plot devices right now...
[Report This]Date: March 20 2017 7:00 PM Title: Maternal Instincts
And the poignancy continues. Bravo!
Author's Response:
Graze, ah graze!
Date: March 11 2017 11:13 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hi TomSpeedy,
I felt the need to do the label thing because so many chapters have the same title. Not criticism to Duggernaut, but there are a lot of chapters titled "Tom" or "Tess" or "Lina." So to make it clear, I put name and number. But thanks for telling me, I appreciate you having my back. I hate making Faux Paus...paz..how do you spell that?
Date: March 11 2017 4:22 PM Title: Tom's Story
@pixl8ed, we can see which chapter you review from at the top of each review so you don't need to label it yourself.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 12:22 PM Title: Improving International Relations
Chapter 138. Improving International Relations
Okay, for some reason my first review of this chapter disappeared, so I'm gonna try again (and that's why it's out of order.)
Tatiana is so sweet. I have to admit I'm a little smitten. I hope we get to see more of her.
Ya know, all those uber controlling dom-types Tom has been dealing with lately don't know what they're missing. You get out of the way and let the little fucker work and woo hoo.
I really have to compliment your writing of Tatiana's experience, how you used terms and images that you would usually use to describe a "Tom experience." Like she's inside her own love cave, experiencing herself the way Tom experiences her.
Simply brilliant.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 9:38 AM Title: Aftermath
Chapter 157. Aftermath.
Okay, kinda with Tom here. I'm not saying it's a good idea to hop under that gadget right now, but the two women are being kind of bitches about it. Basically saying, "We won't give you a choice about what you are willing to risk to get your life back, but we will give you choice as to how you react to our not giving you a choice."
"Lina, Mom, go fuck yourselves."
Fortunately, Tom is a little fucktard when pussy shows up. Odds are a little go round with Lina and all his worries will evaporate. But maybe not, this has been a rough journey for Tom, he's clearly ready to see its end.
The problem is, they're out of guinea pigs.
Now, this is not the SW fan in me talking, not just anyway. But if the women who've gotten so much fun at Tom's expence got their resources together and got gradpa's gadget up and running. And one of them was willing to take the huge risk of being shrunk. Who? Well, it might make a good payoff for the "Janine moment." After all, she would generate the most urgency toward getting results.
Now I don't think for one fucking second that Tom would let her go first, but think of the suspence.
Just a thought...
Boy this has been a great read. I really am root for Tom now and I still think Tess deserves her own happy ending. Just great reading great work like this is its own reward.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 8:40 AM Title: Habeas Corpus
Chpt 152 Habeas Corpus
Uhhh....a social justice warrior and a lawyer...if you had any sense that rat would be looking pretty good right now.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 8:34 AM Title: Astraea
Chapt 151 Astraea
Okay, Tom, buddy, have some standards. Or atleast if you're goinig to sink to the very depths....don't go right to the bottom all at once.
I'm sure there's a rat or a cockroach around her you could fuck before you fuck a lawyer.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 6:57 AM Title: From Russia with Love
Chpt 135 From Russia With Love
I've always been curious about Tatiana. She's been called a russian mob princess, but that could just be speculation.
Right now, there seem to be two types of gals in the story, Keepers (the ones who want to keep Tom as an object) and Helpers (those that want to help.)
Is Tatiana like a russian mobster? Taking what she wants. Or is something better? I'm kinda glad I came to this show late...I just gotta read to find out.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 6:41 AM Title: Just an ordinary everyday Tuesday
Oh god! Grandpa shrunk...I know it.
Tom! Janine! ( I can't belive I'm saying this) Go quick! Do the deed! C'mon, no regrets!.
Totally hooked...I'm totally hooked. Again...
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 6:33 AM Title: The New Pet Rock
Chpt 132. The New Pet Rock
I kinda gotta wonder, how many of those girls are imagining a tiny girl in there?
Give your little doll tits and long hair and you're good to go.
I bet Miss Addison did, only her's have wings.
Just sayin'.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 5:41 AM Title: Nocturnal Emissions
Chapt 131 Nocturnal Emissions
"so caught up in Janine he had forgotten Tess was still there" Kinda sums up how Tom was.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 5:36 AM Title: Monday Night
Chapter 130. Monday Night.
Awwww....Tom is a lucky guy. The new Janine is nice...I'm a little disappointed she never had to "sweat" to earn people's trust, but I guess the lesson her is the world opens its doors for a pretty girl.
Tess...still the best person ever. Best sister ever....
Still...I've got a bad feeling about this, R2.
[Report This]Date: March 11 2017 5:29 AM Title: Not Feeling Lunch
chpt 129 Not Feeling Lunch
Okay...you know that scene in the horror movie? The psycho/monster is lying there on the floor, surely he's dead. But the film keeps going?
I'm feeling kinda there right now.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 11:29 PM Title: Thursday Night - Heavy Petting
Tess and Janine having "good girl sex." I don't know what to say to that.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:53 PM Title: Four's a Crowd
106. Four's a crowd
Ya know, it's Tess who's right here.
Tom don't have the sense god gave a worm. He's been in danger, not emotional, and what saved him was luck a big part of the time. Miss Harwood may be able to master the art of hyper-rationalization but the truth is; if Tom winds up killed or cripple or something worse, a lot of them are going to have their own "Janine moment." Tess most of all...she's invested the most in keeping him safe. She gets to spend the rest of her life thinking she failed her little brother.
So, no. Miss Harwood can preach her "erotic existencialism as an excuse for objectification" till the cows come home, but there could be real consequences. And none of them are prepared to live with it.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:31 PM Title: Tess
Chpt 104. Tess
Alright Tess!
She's standing up for herself. She's done being an emotional punching bag. Good on her! She has bourn the brunt of everybody else's craziness and she's done. I say good!
And she seems to be inspiring the nutty women around her to see Tom as a human being. (I'm not sure in Lina's case.) Good going girl!
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:20 PM Title: Lina
102. Lina.
Ya gotta admit...when your own mother is suspicious of your tears...you've been a cunt.
Good luck Janine.
[Report This]Date: March 10 2017 10:15 PM Title: Catlike Reflexes
101. Cat like reflexes.
Okay...uh...that was pretty intense.
And it kind of seemed real.
....Did you know it was possible to survive jumping off the golden gate bridge?
It is. Your odds aren't good, like 2 percent, so don't try it. And besides, you aren't suicidal. But, do you know what 100 percent of the people attempting suicide describe the second they let go of that bridge?
Regret.
Every fucking one of them, they see clearly that they have made a mistake and regret smacks them in the face.
It could be that Janine's actions are an extension of her selfishness, she wants to keep her toy. But wow...you captured that moment. That...not clarity...that moment of overwhelming regret.
I have to admit...I would see Janine as having burned every bridge between her and Tom. Litterally being, at best, the embodiment of Depraved Indifference (willing to use him to the point of his death...infact revelling in the idea) is a pretty black mark against her.
But wow, what a moment....
I'm not going to hold my breath to see if she can develop anything resembling compassion....so far she doesn't seem to have the toolkit...but maybe she can start with something like guilt...again, not holding my breath.
Of course it could also be this is like the hospital tears...a drug induced (in this case, stress induced) anomolie. I'm really not to prepared to invest in her emotionally, but if she does start to seek some kind of...trip on the road to redemtion...I'd be with her on the journey....
You are an incredible writer...this is so...true. A 10 rating is not high enough.