[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 8:42 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
When Tom's mom was about to leave, Tom said for her to "cose" the door. (For both parts)
Also, after the texting with Janine, you wrote "Curling, he decided her would" when it should be he decided he.
As for which part to choose, I'm not sure. I want the story to continue but I can't tell which part is the one where the story continues.
The first part is confusing becuase Tom was watching videos and he is randomly confined inside something which made no sense to me.
The second part, I can't tell if Tom is dying or being transformed. If his heart stopped, I guess that's bad, and I want him to live.
I want the story to continue. I want Tom to maybe have a round with Dona, or at least more flirty things from her. I would love it if she told Tom what she did with grandpa over 2 years to tease him. Also, I absolutely want to see Miss Harwood get a chance to keep Tom for a bit.
Lastly, this is not necessary, but it would be kinda cool to reach 1000 reviews. Then after that we can find conclusion.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching all of my mistakes tom, I copy and pasted the first part of the chapters that's why the error appeared in both places. !000 reviews? Who'd've thunk it?
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 8:01 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
Personally, I'm fine with you continuing. The story is well enough written that it's easy to stay with it. Besides, what man wouldn't want to be the object of affection of many different women, especially while he's still young?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your input. I honestly cant think of a one, but sometimes being wanted and being had are two entirely different things. thanks for sharing your input.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 7:09 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
Part 1: I'm voting on the culprit being the research assistant.
Part 2: I'm voting that either Dr. Holmstrom or Aunt Dona revives him with some GTS mouth-to-mouth.
Author's Response:
Hmm, maybe nostril to head, nah, too gross. Guess i'll just have to keep this one rolling along then.
Date: April 19 2017 5:51 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
I prefer Test 2. As much as I've liked this story, I think it's time for it to end. I always root for the tinies, and I would really like a resolution where Tom is restored permanently and can live his life, hopefully with Janine.
Author's Response:
the general consensus seems to be leaning to continuing, so for the moment, Tom's journey will continue. the trick will be to make it reasonably feasible. Thanks for sharing your thoughts!
[Report This]Date: April 13 2017 4:08 PM Title: Family Affair
I like where this is headed. Dona has a wicked personality! As always, thank you for the update and I look forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to share some positive feedback! It is always much appreciated. :)
[Report This]Date: April 13 2017 7:07 AM Title: Tom's Story
As for "Carycomic-like puns?" Mr. Speedy should be glad chapter 21 wasn't entitled "Nothing Could Be Finer Than To Be In Karolina!"
Author's Response:
Nicely played sir! I defer to your genius
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 9:56 PM Title: Family Affair
Holy hell!
Even the aunt can't resist....what ever Tom's got, they should bottle. I'm not saying put him in a bottle...he's been through enough.
How can a scene be that sexy....and that wrong...with no sex? Must be the master at work.
Great work again Duggernaut. Thanks.
Author's Response:
Lol Tom is an agent of chaos and the author of his own misadventures. Next chapter Tom will ruminate on what just happened between him and his aunt. Thanks for the props!
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 9:30 PM Title: Family Affair
3rd line you said "Toom Sr."
Also, this chapter title was used when Tom was teasing Lina for the first time. Running out of clever titles are we? :)
When Dona started talking about her fun with Tom Sr, I began laughing. Also, I love it when a giantess teases Tom like that. Making him connect the dots is fun to read.
Yes! I love this Dona! Usually I despise an aunt relationship, but ever since Dona kept Tom Sr for 2 years, I made her an exception. I mean, she took on this role for 2 years! I would love to be with her then!
Ok...the "but" and "come" joke just made me smile. Dona outplayed Tom like a pro. You bet she had so much fun with Tom Sr making jokes and making love.
Wow! After all this teasing you put this cliffhanger and end the chapter....just as the good stuff was coming.
Next time Dona should put Tom in her panties and return back to her sister and tell her that Tom is in his room, but actually he is serving her.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hey Tom after 150+ chapters I hadn't realized the chapter title duplication so I changed it! Also I fixed the Toom. I think it's easy to forget Tom is still a teen with not a whole.lot of real world experience so his exchange with the aunt shifted from him to her very quickly. She has had TWO years to experiment with all the way a woman might have fun with a tiny. Forgive the Carycomic like pun - in over his head is where Tom would find himself.
Date: April 12 2017 9:00 PM Title: Tom's Story
Hey Duggernaut, what do you think of my fanfiction in my previous review? :)
Author's Response:
Sorry bud been tied up with some real world stuff. I love danfiction and am both amazed and humbled that people have engaged the characters . I happen to know one of your favorites is Miss Harwood. Your depiction of her expresses her dominance which we saw in spades with her interaction with Tom. With a peeper I am reminded of botched when one of the robbers wanted to watch a girl go to the bathroom so she shrunk him and put him in the toilet to watch. Similar in your tale. You want to see? Get up in there! The Katie Cassidy relationship was fun because of the how the two interacted together and played with Tom. I should write a story about the two of them on a road trip with the shrink ray! Thanks for writing. FYI the girls are in the dorm so a teacher could possibly stroll by...
[Report This]Date: April 12 2017 5:59 PM Title: Family Affair
Yeah! Don't test her, Tom. This story has been proceeding very nicely without any graphic examples of the I-word. There's absolutely no legitimate need to introduce it at this late date.
If you need catharsis that badly, I'd rather you have a wet dream about the campus librarian, back home! P.S.---I know that, as a fictional character, you can't hear me.*
*But, it saves me from getting verbally sand-blasted for yelling at the author. ;-D
Author's Response:
I know your stance on the 'I' category and it's been teased before...teased. this story is about to take a hard left, but not that way :)
Date: April 07 2017 8:43 AM Title: Tinkering Back Home
So, Tess is fiddling with the machine with the girls around. This could go in all sorts of fun directions.
Author's Response:
Right? If she jury rigs the device and gets it working...
[Report This]Date: April 07 2017 7:19 AM Title: Tinkering Back Home
What a nice way to both prolong suspense and further develop the supporting characters: quality female bonding time!
If--however unlikely--Tom doesn't get restored to normal size, PLEASE don't reintroduce the librarian! Because she'd only wind up filing Tom away and forgetting about him.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2017 2:40 AM Title: Tess
this story rocks, can't stop reading
Author's Response:
Awesome thanks for taking the time to give this little story a read and review!
Date: April 06 2017 9:10 PM Title: Tom's Story
900 reviews! Let's go!
You know we want 1000!
Best story ever! Long live Tom!
[Report This]Date: April 06 2017 9:07 PM Title: Tinkering Back Home
Whoa! Why are these girls even bothering to fix the device? Sam is right. Let Tess's grandpa fix it.
Even if these girls are allowed to fix it, they should be supervised since it's kinda dangerous.
Tess kept saying it was broken, worn out, and then these random batteries just make the whole thing work again? Lol, really?
Janine trying to find a new toy while Tom is gone. Janine, pick me! I will gladly replace Tom while he is away. I can be your Tom!
Tess dropped the hammer on those girls. "None of you would have gotten to know my brother". Wow! I love the silence after it! Perfect!
Also, knowing the style of this story, you know someone will take that device while the girls are away.
Plot twist: Miss Harwood was on her daily jog when she recognized the voice of Tess. She approached the house (Yo Duggernaut, where are these girls, exactly? Which house? The dorms?). Anyway, Miss Harwood waits for the girls to leave and she retrieved the shrinking device. When no one is nearby, she tests it on a rock and it works. Then she tests it on a squirrel and it worked. Katie smiled with her new toy and decided to have some fun. Miss Harwood reached her place without finding a cute guy to shrink. She decided to resume her day and do some stretching outside when she noticed a pair of eyes face her from the corner of her eye. Being very fit, she ambushed the area and found a guy with binoculars in his hand. The boy looked like he was a late teen trying to spy on her. She gasped and grabbed his wrist and pulled him toward her house. He tried to pull free, but Miss Harwood was too strong. She dragged him upstairs to her bedroom and easily tied him to her bed. This boy had no idea what was coming. Katie began to strip, a smile on her face as she watched the boy watch with mixed emotions. She then ripped off the boy's clothes and left him humiliated and being tied up as he was, he couldn't cover himself. Miss Harwood laughed at the mere sight of his genitals and approached the bed, and crawling on top of him. She then sat on his face and forced him to lick her and worship her. She orgasmed on his face multiple times and soon she got bored. Miss Harwood pulled out the shrinking device and aimed at the boy. She pulled the trigger and he shrank to a few inches, same height as Tom. Katie giggled with delight, but then frowned as the boy began running to escape. He was free of his bonds for the moment and he did not want to find out what plans she had for him. Miss Harwood easily captured him since Tom had tried to trick her countless times. This boy was a novice and very predictable. The boy struggled in her grasp and Katie smiled very seductively, knowing what she was going to do very soon. This boy was spying on her, his eyes filled with lust. But now they were filled with fear as she lowered him to her private area. The began shouting soemthing, but Miss Harwood ignored him. She didn't care what he wanted or even to know his name. He was a creep and she was putting him in his place. Katie shoved the boy inside her, as far as she could until she could no more. His voice became muffled and soon, it was gone. She didn't care for this boy unlike Tom, so she didn't mind leaving him in there all day. After all, she could always shrink a new guy. Desiring more pleasure, Katie took a dildo and thrust it inside herself completely. She had no idea where the boy was and hoped he was deep inside her. With the boy and dildo both inside her, Miss Harwood put a smile on her face. Feeling satisfied, she put on her lace panties, her extra tight yoga pants and continued on with her day, always ready for Tom to be back in her hands, or pants.
Date: April 06 2017 8:00 PM Title: Tinkering Back Home
Why's everybody so nervous?
Ha ha ha ah ha!
This is just a great little moment.
Date: April 03 2017 9:58 PM Title: The Waiting Game
Oh...the hot Aunt is stealthy...I picture games of cat and mouse with Tom Sr letting her hone her skills.
Yeah, what the hell are they doing at the rest of the institute? Inquiring minds want to know.
Great stuff Duggernaut. You are creating a cornerstone, a benchmark of SM fiction here. Thank you.
Peace,
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Tom definitely wants to know, but it doesn't look like he'll get the chance to slake his curiosity thirst. Thanks for the positive input! :)
[Report This]Date: April 03 2017 7:12 PM Title: The Waiting Game
Now that's what I call "comic relief before the stormy re-enlargement."
Bravo! :-)
Author's Response:
Just a little bit longer...
[Report This]Date: April 03 2017 6:17 PM Title: The Waiting Game
For a second I thought his aunt would play with Tom while the gramps was getting treated.
Then I noticed that she smiled when she said Tom Sr regained consciousness.
Wow, Tom can't resist these ladies even if he doesn't know them. He wants to show these girls his skills and get more people to love him.
If Tom wants an adventure, I want one too. I also keep picturing Miss Harwood too. But instead of her being naked, I picture him being held by her panties as she walks with him unnoticed by others.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Auntie is only in her mid to late twenties, so who knows?
[Report This]Date: March 23 2017 1:37 AM Title: Ruffled Feathers
Pussy/boob action is amazing.
Still love every chapter and I always look forward to reading more of this amazinc story.
Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the props!