[Report This]Date: May 11 2017 4:59 PM Title: New Digs
So, Tom went from hostage to guest. In a guest bedroom. He has food, water, and decent looking women after him. For most people, this wouldn't be so bad, but for Tom, the women in his life are like 11/10 so I'm sure he misses that.
Wait a minute. Is this the Omega Pi house? 3 different girls, represting the wristbands? Tom trying to find clues just like Oliver? Oddly similar.
Pace seems to be moving a bit slows lately and we meet one woman per chapter. I wonder when the family even finds a trace of where Tom went.
I also have this hunch that a big reveal is about to happen soon. Like Tom discovers something that he shouldn't be seeing. Just a thought.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Wouldn't that be funny, Tom winds up at the Omega house? What a crossover that would be!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 8:49 PM Title: Destination Unknown
P.S.---Okay! So I was wrong about it being Jessica Lindholm. But, now, I'm hoping that I'm equally wrong about Tatiana being a knowing accessory to this crime. Because, I agree with Tom's assessment. The girl proved refreshingly sweet when she had custody of him! As opposed to the domineering narcissist that Janine initially demonstrated herself to be.*
*Emphasis on "initially!"
[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 9:15 AM Title: Destination Unknown
Oh, man! I love Tatiana.
I'm guessing the innocence I love might be the problem. At least I hope.
Good villians showing up...bond girl flavored...my favorite.
Loving this Duggernaut...just loving it.
Peace
Pix
Author's Response:
Should I or shouldn't I? Is Tatiana actually a cold hearted calculating b*tch destined for inclusion in the Omega Pi sorority? :0
[Report This]Date: May 06 2017 1:35 AM Title: Destination Unknown
Actually, they are in a submarine. This woman has a Russian name but that doesn't make her related to Tatiana. Also, this woman actually loves him dearly, but doesn't want Tom to know that.
Janine actually knows where Tom is becuase she put some tracking ship on him while Tom was passed out one night. The reason why they don't give Tom food is so that he will hate them. Tom has been hit with a dart while he was asleep so he didn't remember anything. Smoke bomb was so the regular sized people could see them escape.
It is not a ransom becuase then these women would be forced to treat him well and not damage him. They do intend on keeping him, but we do not know for how long.
However, these women have a stronge fragrance that only tinies can smell very well. So the grandpa Tom will recognize the scent while the other women can't smell it.
Tom Sr has been in many wars, dealing with Russian spies and has traveled accrosss the world and can speak 7 languages. He has been in this same situation before on his adventures before he got rich and then shrunk.
Also, while Tom Sr lost energy during the experiment and is now weak, the boy Tom absorbed the energy and is now slightly radioactive.
If under stress Tom can blow up and destroy everything around him for a 3 mile radius but he will be unharmed. Only Janine can blow Tom up and she can activate Tom whenever she wants.
In addition, Janine also has a retrieve button which teleports Tom inside her vagina. She seduced a scientist to put a tiny teleported in there and can put Tom where he belongs.
Lina is aware of Janine's tracker in Tom, but Lina wants to retrieve Tom herself and gain the respect of Tom's mom again. Also, for the sake of the plot, we will see Serena again for this purpose.
Tom will be safe forever, he is just on another adventure and this drama that Lina and everyone is causing is to scare Tom's mom. It's a fake heist meant to glorify Lina when she gets Tom back.
I looked up Duggernaut's brainstorming notebook and found all this stuff. I thought it was fake, but after reading these last few chapters about these women kidnapping Tom, I think I believe it.
Of course some details found in this chapter don't match up, but I guess Duggernaut changed them. It's impressive how Duggernaut can create and plan such a brilliant plot twist and then alter it in ways that it can still make sense! Amazing!
(I made this review up, or did I?)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, Tom I swear sometimes you make me laugh. this was great! Now begins the odyssey of Tom/Odysseus trying to return to his true love Janine/Penelope - it only took our greek friend twenty years!
[Report This]Date: May 05 2017 9:17 PM Title: Destination Unknown
A-ha! So you did go with the Russian Mob angle, after all. To say this is going to complicate things is putting it mildly.
Author's Response:
Couldn't help myself, once people indicated they wanted more Tom, it was a natural fit.
[Report This]Date: May 04 2017 5:04 AM Title: Where There's Smoke
OK! One more thought for this chapter.
I just realized who could have given that mystery woman so much access. But, I don't want to voice that suspect's name, just yet. Just in case I'm proven wrong, again.
Author's Response:
It's okay, you can tell me, it'll be our little secret, ;)
[Report This]Date: May 03 2017 7:30 PM Title: Where There's Smoke
P.S.---almost 1.1 million readers????!
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Author's Response:
WHAT?!? Holy smokes
[Report This]Date: May 02 2017 9:31 AM Title: Where There's Smoke
Well, it looks like I was wrong. But, whoever really took him...they're in for it now!
Author's Response:
Lol, perhaps, or he might be IN deep doodoo
[Report This]Date: May 01 2017 8:54 PM Title: Where There's Smoke
What is the nationality of the device? And the chemical agent? Custom? What other incidents has it turned up in?
So the perpetrator left it behind....and didn't take the time to kick it under the bed. That means they were in a great hurry. Didn't have night vision and didn't want to risk getting the distinct scent on them. Sounds like security is mostly in tact, one or two well placed traitors at best. Since they had to pull it off with limited equipment. It might also mean they are close, or had an unrelaible means of egress, since they are taking steps to avoiding being trackable by dogs.
Better hope Serena is as good at this as me.
hehe.
Pix
Author's Response:
I modeled the device after once by the russians when they attempted to retake the theater. You do seem very adept at sleuthing which means I'll have to elevate my game. And here we go...
[Report This]Date: May 01 2017 8:04 PM Title: Where There's Smoke
Ok then. So my first prediction about Tom having a dream seems to be wrong and he in fact got taken of kidnapped by that woman last chapter.
So if this is not a dream, what is going on? Lol. This missing Tom thing came out of nowhere. Usually, I get dissapointed when a random twist shows up, but I tend to like the twist as it plays out so I think I will enjoy it soon.
What we know:
Tom is missing.
Held by some hot girl
What we don't know:
His location
Who the girl is
What she wants with Tom
What she will do with Tom
If she will care for Tom
If she will have sex with Tom
If she will feed Tom
If she will sell Tom
(Point is we don't know her purpose)
Clues:
Smoke bomb
Mission Tompossible. Lina, do you accept this mission? "Yes! Get me Serena!"
What if it's Miss Harwood's friend who took Tom? Lol, now that would be funny.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Mission Tompossible? I love it!
Date: May 01 2017 7:42 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Carycomic,
I am finally second in most reviews on this site. You're next. :)
[Report This]Date: April 27 2017 1:21 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...
I say it's Lina and Serena. They've arranged some kind of elaborate fake kidnapping. in order to keep him shrunken for themselves!
[Report This]Date: April 26 2017 8:16 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...
And again Tom demonstrates his resilience.... fortunately he's being held by a woman...let's see if his charm stil works under these circumstances, whatever the they are.
Great stuff Duggernaut. Mysterious giantess and mysterious situation. Gotta love it.
Peace,
pixl8ed
[Report This]Date: April 26 2017 6:37 PM Title: A Mind is a Terrible Thing...
This dream actually doesn't sound so bad. Sure, he has know idea what happened, but it does seem nice to wake up in the hands of a lovely woman who is very curious about you.
Tom doesn't like it as much because he cannot connect the dots do he is not sure whose side Evie is on. She seems friendly, but doesn't seem to give a shit about his needs.
Imagine waking up in the hands of Miss Harwood without any memory of her. At first you're scared of her, but then she seduces you and controls you to a point that you could only admire and love her. I would love to wake up to Katie like this.
Another thing is that this may not be just a dream, but also a part of the experiment. Perhaps this is a side effect and it creates a new reality in his mind.
Not sure where this is going, but I kinda like it.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: April 22 2017 9:08 PM Title: Tom's Story
@Ancient relic,
Haha, not yet. I felt like Duggernaut captured my imagination and my fantasy in this story. I just don't want it to end.
Author's Response:
Not yet pal o' mine, not yet :)
[Report This]Date: April 22 2017 11:23 AM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
I like very much the idea Tom is helpless under the control of a dominant woman. And I do not want this story ends soon.
So I definitely prefer the first alternative.
Author's Response:
As Zoltar would say, "Your wish is granted, the story continues." :)
Date: April 21 2017 2:18 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
The second one would tie the story up nicely, and the first one is an interesting cliff-hanger. However, I absolutely choose the first one, because I want this to continue, even after all that's happened.
Also, Tess fiddling with the machine needs to be developed and resolved. Unless that becomes a spin-off...
@TomSpeedy: Any other story ideas?
Author's Response:
Thanks Ancient Relic for offering some clarity to my too cryptic proposition. As you can see, the story will continue. Cheers
[Report This]Date: April 20 2017 3:20 PM Title: Tom's Story
After such a fantastic story, I do feel like it is time to retire this one and work on more masterpieces (The Ad maybe?). Perhaps combine the two endings? I would like to see Aunt Dona take out Tom in a sexy, devilish way. This way the story gets closure and we get some more awesome storyline. The shrinking reversal process could backfire and Tom could find himself very miniscule. It would be very easy to become lost in an orifice, sealed in a toy of some sort, or woven into a pair of someones panties. Whatever you decide, thank you for providing us with constant updates and excellent content.
Author's Response:
Thaks for sharing your thoughts. for the moment it would appear some haven't quite reached their limit of tom, so it will continue for the time being.
Date: April 20 2017 9:07 AM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
From what I gather it seems like the chapter title test to you plan on killing him off I'm not sure on how I feel about that granted this store is gone on for a long time and it might be time to end it considering all your other projects however I feel like the other might be a better direction to go if it's what I think it is that you're going to subjugate time to some women who are way more in control of themselves and not very support other than his Wiley and devilish antics it might be a good lesson for him. I don't know. you got me confuse bro which one's supposed to be with?
Author's Response:
My sincere apologies for the confusing way I put this out there. I think you might enjoy the new direction. thanks for making an effort to share your feelings!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2017 10:00 PM Title: Blackness, Blackness, Everywhere/Test 2
What was the middle part?
I have to disagree with Tom Speedy, it is very necessary to reach 1000 reviews. Very!
I would love to see the story continue, especially in light of the hints about new directions. When in doubt, the answer is always "more Tom's story." And more cowbell.
If you're done, you're done. Really, you should feel free to go as you like. My vote is continue, but really, my vote is "be happy Duggernaut." You've done plenty for us fans and I can't ask you to do more than makes you happy.
My real vote is a vote of thanks.
Peace
PixL8Ed
Author's Response:
Much appreciated. I am torn with tom, as with other characters from other stories, I find myself invested in the character and while I could tie this up, part of me what to keep going. "Easy, guys.. I put my pants on just like the rest of you -- one leg at a time. Except, once my pants are on, I make gold records."