Reviewer: Big_n_evil Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awesome stuff.  Some really interesting fetishes that, IMO, don't get enough page-time in this community.

One nitpick though, it feels like you run out of steam near the end and start to rush chapters, which is a shame because some of the best stuff is near the end!

Also, using the chapters function might help people in navigating a really long story like this.

Anyway, I really hope you keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Yeah I pushed myself a little too much to get it finished. I'm being more careful with my pacing now so hopefully my future works won't suffer from the same thing.

 

I'm glad you liked it.