I really cant wait for that anaeversity story. I wonder what will await Simon after Tommy finds out, maybe Tommy uses the shrinkray on him, even by accident or just out in a word fight it shots at Simon without Tommy noticing, and Tommy just thinks Simon left in anger, but unfortunaty he become shrunk. I also saw the shrunk size was 1/4" for the agent here, I wonder if the shrink ray could even shrink smaller like having a knob for the shrinking level, maybe shrinking up to 1/128" which would be the size on an amoeba size. Seeing the movie Ant-Man the idea popped into my mind from the words "going sub-atomic". Even amoeba size of course would be way larger than atomic scale, it still would be so tiny, that the human eye couldnt see it of course. A single rain drop would be like swimming in an large sea. A plot could be awesome where Simon becomes so tiny, that there would be no chance after all Tommy would even see him anymore. And the only chance of communication would be through Simons cell phone and calling Tommy. But Simon would need to come over his own ego calling Tommy, where he hated him right now. A cool idea also would be Tommy not believing Simon on the phone or getting him wrong, or just ignoring him. Or another cool idea Tommy wanted to tease Simon of putting him into a situation where he would be eaten, totally out of anger about the cheating which took place, but it was just planed as a "lesson" and Tommy would save Simon in the last moment, which unfortunatly goes totally wrong. I also loved how Tommy just stood there looking at the micro agent without doing anything to help him, and then just didnt even say anything when Emma took the bottle.

OMG what a superb finish!! Loving the Tommy chapters the most, the best part was where he shrank by accident the agent, landing on his butt and having a confused look of where the guy went to, then stepping forward and noticing the tiny guy at the bottle opening. I loved the fact so much how Tommy must have leaned forward with a confused face expression, the tiny screaming for help, and then Emma just taking a gulp, and Tommy standing there dumbfoulded just be like "Uh...", so great! And the ending is great too, leading to very interesting plot twist, I guess Tommy wouldnt be too amazed to find out about what Emma recorded.

what a great story, loving it, love unaware vore the most also when the micros become nano size around dust particle or ant size. keep up the amazing work. also I like fun plots like this with some touch if irony, how the two ended in that bitch belly lierally was amazing.

cant wait to see how its continuing, enjoyed this a lot so far, especially how the girl is a total bitch, would be so badass to see tommy not making it in time or messing things up. one litle plot hole I think though was the time window from the detention to the girl meeting her friends. shouldnt the two be digested by that already, dont know it seemed like there was some hours in between that. but still great work keep it goin dude

Hi!
First of all, I must say that your stories are fantastics! I am mostly a lurker, because English is not my first language and I find it a little difficult to express myself, but you are so great that I just made an account just to congratulate you.


Another thing is that I think that your stories have become too predictable. I know that you started making the bad girl get eaten to make them different and to stop giantesses get away with eating people, but now they always finish the same. I think that you could get with more variety (I must say that I got quite surprise at the end of The Huntress, I thought that she will end up in a belly at the end). Don't take as a "boo, you are repetitive", but as a "hey, you are great, but more plot twist and bad endings could make this more exciting".
Just my two cents.

Omg!! What a fantastic surprise!! I dont know how to say it, but I think, even this is just a first chapter, it's mostly your best work so far. I think one of the "problems" with your older stories always was that it began really "slow", and even after a few chapters the main plot hadnt done far, which is a problem for a story when it just has a few chapters. But this is a total differen approache. Im so curious already is Simon and Jenny will be digested and book a one way trip through Emmas bowls, with the next step the bathroom, or if something still rescues one of them. Hope to see more Tommy interaction, hopefully he'll stay unaware about what happened. Great start into a new story, loving it already.