Really enjoyed the story and the plot. Not exactly thrilled with the ending, but I can live with it. The suspense (though not quite to the level in 'Bang Your Head' was still quite good and I felt one of the guys could be eaten/squashed or perhaps worse at any time. Some innovation in here as well for the tinys trying to escape and I really like the 911 call idea. Well done.

This is a fine story. One unexpected occurance after another.  This will surely be a memory that these boys will never, ever forget! Especially since they get to survive it and remember it all. Excellent. Keep up the good work.

Not bad! Just one question, though. Which Bergin did you have in mind: Edgar; Candice; or Polly?

What an ending! (You should mark this story as finished then).

This was actually a feel good ending. I like it. In the end, nothing bad happened, the boys got a lesson, and the cop seems to indicate a part2 or something.

Of cousrse the cop knows Simone. Every super hot person in this story knows her and are friends with her. And together, they seduce boys to give themselves pleasure. Freaking genuises!

Haha, Blake missed all the fun. Ending your "simulation" to be stepped on is kinda lame. I think John had the best time, followed by Charles. Then Dustin, and of course Blake is last.

I wonder where Savvannah is taking them...(sequel?) :)

Man, what a great story!

Wait, is this the ending?!?! Such a beautiful story I've been following. I'm glad I decided to stick through with it.

Ooh. I liked this chapter. Submissive Charles.

This chapter could have been entitled:

"The Vagina Dialogue."

;-)

Author's Response:

More like a monologue, like Seymour in the little shop of horrors

If Simone had a husband, someone that she liked, then she would treat him just like hole she treated Charles.

I mean, she was acting like a kindergarten teacher, teaching him like a baby.

Also, I knew Charles was a virgin, but doesn't he know the parts of a woman's body? It felt like she was saying " this is a nipple, it's sensitive, touch it." Also it felt like she said " this is a vagina, a big hole the feels wonderful, touch it and describe it for me". And Charles was Ooohing and Ahhing like he never knew any of this stuff! I thought his friends would've described this stuff in their conversations here and there.

If you like a gentle giantess, this is the chapter for you. Also, if you did get shrunken down and captured by a girl like Simone. Then being treated like Charles is the way to go.

I prefer the way Dustin went, because I like it when the giantesses are in control, and this chapter, Simone, although she had complete control, it felt like when she was asking Charles, is when I thought she didn't feel that powerful. Nothing wrong with it, I think it's great for Charles. It's just different than what John and Dustin experienced and the variety of ways that Simone treats her subjects is awesome.

"It doesn't bite". But it does swallow.

She threatened to put him all the way inside her, but in the end, she did put all of him inside her besides 1 arm. Seriously, what difference does that make? Lol. I bet Charles is like "I thought she wasn't going to do this".

Well, now there are no more virgins. Hmm. I guess Simone is done giving what the tinies want. Now it's her turn to enjoy herself.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

He knows what they are, but remember he's never really touched them and now they are on a huge scale and yeah she got tired of his naivete and just stuffed him in there, so much for kid gloves.

For some reason, I have difficulty going down the stairs two steps at a time. I can go up 2 at a time but not down. Anyone else get nervous going 2 steps at a time down the stairs?

Haha, even with Dustin telling Charles to stop looking, he can't resist the beauty of Simone!

Man, that sucks for Charles that he doesn't have his glasses. Why is he still staring? Isn't she blurry for him? Charles should be able to resist a blurry, naked woman. If he had his glasses, then I don't blame him.

Whoa, whoa, whoa! She just repaired his vision like that? She could make a fortune of she did that to everyone! Then again, she doesn't need anything. Not even money. She can do anything she wants.

Dustin became the only one left. At first it was just Charles, but then Dustin got back into the game. Come to think of it, this story is a game. Losers have sex, winners escape.

Personally, I would prefer to lose. I'm with Charles, these girls are the only hope on making you grow and the time you spend with them is not that bad. In fact, it's incredible.

Dustin is probably thinking that he had enough playtime and it's time for business. He is going for the escape to claim victory.

The question is.....then what? If Dustin escapes, there's not much he can do. I have a feeling that he is going to turn around and find another way to get out of the house, becuase he first has to grow. It's no point escaping while being a few inches tall.

I think Dustin is wasting his time now. He should try reasoning with these ladies into unshrunking him. That's his only option to leave the house safely.

As for Charles, he is not wasting his time. He is going to have some fun and it will definately be worth it!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Charles did as Simone asks, she might treat him extra gentle. Maybe.

Simone's built-in Geiger counter strikes again. As for Dustin's arguement with Charles over ornithological nomenclature?

Charles was half-right. I have a neighbor who used to own chickens in his backyard. So he could have farm-fresh eggs right in the heart of the suburbs! But, he eventually had to get rid of them when they started going feral. Wandering this way, and that, over every street in the neighborhood...as if they were trying to further evolve an old joke.