I kinda wish the main character wasn't as stupid as you made him but this was still a good story I just wish there was a way Karen found out it was him which would make the story a whole lot more interesting.

Hey :-) hope youre still out there!! If there was a poll or vote I would vote this story of the yer on here. I love it so much. I hope to see something again with transformation going wrong in some "oops" manner. I loved the other dog doll plot so much too.

hey man, really hope youll do another tf story like this again in the future. I just loved the tf into an anus idea so much, but also the dog doll one was amazing, especially being humiliated and giving anal by a male, cant imagine a more humiliating thing happening. pleae dont abandon tf plots, youre the best tf author on here by far... Id love seeing another tf into an ass/anus, or getting tfed into a dust particle and get lost into the abyss rectum, becoming glued into the walls and having to "live on" every day experience another bowl movement.

amazing story !! always looked for transformation plots like this, loved the bathroom part and how the guy literally got a shitty ending spending the rest of his life as the girls anus. would love to see more like this. keep it up.

Oh my god :' I hoped you would do another similiar story after A little Chew Toy, which was just fantastic and one of my all time favorite stories on this site. I love unaware transformation so much, especially when it has an ironic and darker sarcastic ending, with a scat insertion part or/and a toilet part. Actually one of my all time favorite plot ideas always was shrinking to tinier size and become butt lint, or to melt into a smaller amound of liquid and become the anus itself or the inner layer of skin in the rectum. My 2nd all time favorite idea is, and maybe as an idea for future stories, a guy accidentally/not like planed, becomes a tiny drop of liquid, like rain drop size, and gets absorbed into the fibre of a girls panties, on the back area, resulting in not just living as her new wedgie, but becoming butt lint as a tiny ugly particle and melt with the anus, giving the girl an annoying itch and get inserted, and then book trip on her next bowlmovement, or stay inside the rectal walls as dirt. I would give 20 points to this story if I could, just fantastic, what a surprise. Really great size, I love smaller shrinking/transformation much more, fantastic idea with the melting, ending/mid part was amazing <3 Love the irony and humiliation so much, how the two girls totally got it all wrong with the ticket, and how he couldnt do anything about it, couldnt talk, couldnt move, and litereally went crazy in his mind listening to their talk, and then the ultimate horror trip happened, where he would literally was sent to hell. I also loved how over time he even thought it wasnt so bad to be his former gf new gf shit hole and shit expeller. Totally loved the toilet part, would had loved it even more detailed or written out the moment when she stood and totally without a 2n thought slammed her ass together and leaving her anus relax in the soaked smell. Loved all the nononoonono... wai... parts. Just amazing plot, fantastic story. Would love seeing more like this in the future, as unaware transformation combined with ass insertion doesnt happen very often on here, it's such a unique and great twist. Lots of awesome plots could be thought through like it, I already loved your dog toy plot so much. I really love the idea so much, how a guy thinks it all through and it totally back fires, mostly because of actually him not thinking it all perfectly through, or because of some minor event, like the girl doing something in an "oops" way, like interpretating a letter wrong, or accidentally pouring over a glass of water, which was the antidote for the back-transformation, and so on. Keep up the amazing work :-)