Date: January 23 2016 11:05 AM Title: Forever
Wow, what a way to end the story. But Great story! would love to see more unaware stuff like this from you in the futrue. Maybe Rose shrinks like Thomas did??
[Report This]Date: January 22 2016 8:53 AM Title: Rose
Nice story. I see that micro unaware is your passion, soul and expertise. I also work at a place where the goal is to have a loaf of bread in every arm. ;-) Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, that's pretty much what I like, and just that. I'm glad someone got where the story is taking place, not that I was really trying to hide it, but I feel it does add depth you can only get if you know the ins and outs of the area. At least I think so, but that might just be me.
[Report This]Date: January 22 2016 3:40 AM Title: Making Plans
This story is amazing. It's the exact detailed unaware story I love. Your description of Ellen's running shoes in Chapter 2 and 3 made me feel I was right there. The cigarette scene? Just wonderful. This is easily now one of my favorite stories here.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I appreicate the feedback and everything!
Date: January 21 2016 11:11 PM Title: Rose
Loved this chapter! did you finally kill Thomas or is Rose going to do the dirty work? And like another author said, this is one of my favorite stories to watch out for in the most recent sections. Please continue the story. I love it. And I hope you will write more Unaware stuff in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I guess we'll find out soon! I do want to write more stories in the future, and have a few base outline ideas in my head about them, but that's just the first step, then there's writing them!!
[Report This]Date: January 21 2016 12:41 AM Title: Trip
I hope he gets someone to notice him.
Date: January 20 2016 10:46 PM Title: Making Plans
This is by far my favorite story in ages. Your writing style is amazing and I love your details! Please keep up this wonderful work. I check back on it every night. As an aside, will he ever have contact with the giants or just through extension? (Shoes, fork, etc)
Author's Response:
Thank you!! In this story...probably not, but I'm not going to rule it out. I haven't planned out all the specifics yet, and I am trying to make each chapter unique in it's own regard so it very well might happen, but I'm not actively seeking out for it to occur.
Date: January 20 2016 9:04 PM Title: Trip
Loved this chapter thought he really was trash. Is the girl Rose? At the very end? Love it. Cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was going back and forth on just how I wanted this story to go, and whether or not Rose would appear in it (part of why it took some time), but ultimately I decided that she wouldn't appear just yet. We will be seeing her sooner rather than later though!
Date: January 16 2016 6:23 PM Title: Sticker
Awesome chatper! How will Rose find him?? Or will he be trash forever?? Will be watching for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I guess we'll find out soon!! Thank you for the support!!
Date: January 15 2016 4:24 AM Title: Making Plans
I really hope Rose will make an appearance sometime soon.
Loving the story so far, keep it up. =)
Author's Response:
Not to spoil anything, but we'll be hearing about Rose in the near future!
Date: January 14 2016 9:51 PM Title: Cleanliness
Awsome chapter! Keep up the great work!! I love it.
Date: January 14 2016 8:25 AM Title: Discarded
Awesome chapter!!! Loved it. Now where does the story go? Cant wait to see. Will be watching for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2016 11:25 PM Title: Insignificant
Amazing amount of details. The world needs more good nano unaware plots like this. Just two things I have to critism is, one just a minor personal thing, it was a bad idea in my oppinion to take his cell phone away so fast but a simple stomp. It would have been way more interesting to keep it and him having an ironic call later in the story. The 2nd thing is, how the character is a bit of "industractable", I am not really a fan of those plots. Other than that, awesome plot.
Author's Response:
I can understand why some people don't like when the character cannot be hurt, but for me it's more of a way just to move the story along smoothly and let it flow. Thomas would certainly be dead or at the least pretty badly injured with everything that's happened so far, and to me, that just doesn't make for a good story. Now, I'm not really a big fan of "wishing away" stuff like damage people recieve, but in the context of stories like these, it seems fine and appropriate since it's already past reality.
Date: January 11 2016 8:44 PM Title: Insignificant
When you are talking about the shoes stepping on things and crushing this and that, itd be nice if you described each sneaker. Each tread. What brand, what kind? Adidas Gel? Nike Shox? Skechers work? Just a want, great story!
Date: January 11 2016 8:30 PM Title: Insignificant
Cant wait for the next Chapter!!! Hope it comes soon!
Date: January 11 2016 7:09 AM Title: Making Plans
What a cheesy chapter! Lol. How many employees does this shop have? What happened to Rachel and Ellen?
Guygonesmall, gonna finish Tiny with Melissa?
Author's Response:
There are thirteen employees at the store during the current time frame the story is going on at. We may or not may encounter all of them.
Date: January 10 2016 11:32 PM Title: Crud
Loved this chapter as well!! Cant wait to see what comes next. Please continue the story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I know I kind of vanished for half a year before, but hopefully that doesn't happen again, either way I want to finish this as well.
Date: January 10 2016 9:15 AM Title: Sweeping Crumbs
I absolutely love this chapter!!! I was so hopeing he would be ale to get out of the seeds but fate has him and he is swept up by Taylor. I cant wait for the next chapter to come out.
Hope to see it soon!!!
Date: January 09 2016 10:23 PM Title: Sweeping Crumbs
Oh my God! An update! I had actually talked with another author about commisioning them to finish this story for me! its been faaaaaar too long. So happy for an update amd hope somehow to see some sneaker crush
Date: August 06 2015 10:13 AM Title: Fully Staffed
Please please if not going to finish story, squish Thomas off unaware under these beautiful sneakers!
Date: July 15 2015 3:12 PM Title: Making Plans
Great story so far I do hope you continue. One of the best scenarios I've read!!