[Report This]Date: February 03 2023 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story thus far and well written. I'm not typically into willing vore, but I liked Flavius' episode. Also liked the nice array of personalities amongst the giantesses. The personalities of the Romans, outside of a few, were pretty bland, however.
Giving it an 8 rating, though, due to it's being incomplete.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 5
Lily acts more like a Venus man-trap. :-(
Author's Response:
I think I kight use that exact language in my next update for the Contract!
[Report This]Date: July 29 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
What! These women can change sizes?!! Or just Hilde becuase she is of a different spieces?
Hilde is smart and devious as always, picking her toys one by one.
Simone, Lily, Hilde, Serah. The whole gang is coming together.
What I learned this chapter was how young Serah is. She acts like a little girl, while Hilde acts like a 40 yr old and everyone else is in between.
So Lily has always been cruel. Men are expendable in her eyes. She must also be good at catching humans, becuase 4 is a lot. The other girls show off even one tiny, but Lily doesnt care. She doesnt brag; she just does what she wants and seems to always get what she wants.
Great stuff, and I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 18 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
Maybe, as her first love, he still has "Agrippa" her, emotionally.
X-D
Author's Response:
Nicely played
Date: July 17 2015 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Heh! I could have sworn I didn't read that part until either ch. 20 or 21. You sure you didn't do some mischievous re-editing?
Author's Response:
I actually had to go back and find it to reference it in my response. Now the question is how did she acquire the items and why does she still have, displayed prominently no less. Hmm..
[Report This]Date: July 17 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 4
Once again, Selene and Vanessa never cease to amaze me. The way they use their bodies to use their men is incredible.
I mean, that was some good play time. Very well described.
Then the second half was with the soldiers.
I agree, Agrippa may be the only one to escape this hunt, but everyone else is dead meat.
Valerieus has no chance to escape, but I feel that he has a chance to live. Most likely a girl will pick him up, and save him until he wakes up. (No girl wants to swallow an unconscious man, right? They love the way they struggle in their throat.)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: July 16 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
You mean, Hilde's psychic detection of Cade's visit to her apartment? That occurred in a later chapter. The visit, itself, comprised the entirety of ch. 19.
Author's Response:
Cade had been here, in her house. A smile touched her face and she nodded approvingly. She hadn’t anticipated this move. He had taken the game to a whole other level and in so doing, he’d inadvertently cleared the articles of the Covenant, permitting her to now play with him as she wanted, no restrictions. Dropping her keys back into the purse, she walked down the hall and set the bag on the kitchen table. Closing her eyes, she allowed power to flow through her. In her mind’s eye, she could visualize the policeman’s movements through her home, like a heat signature of everywhere he roamed after he had violated her private sanctum. Following the spectral image of Cade, she traced his path, looking where he looked to see what he might have seen. She wondered how he processed hi s information, what did he perceive, interpret the elements of her long life? She knew he lingered at Agrippa’s helmet and sword.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
Ah! The blissful ignorance of the knocked-out-cold.
Still, if there's anyone with a good chance of CONSCIOUSLY eluding pursuit, I feel it's Agrippa the scout.
Author's Response:
Chapter 19, The Contract - Unlawful Entry. Might be an interesting re-read, :) (Agrippa)
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love prequels that serve as origin stories! Bravo on using this one to tell us about Hilde
Author's Response:
Thanks Carycomic, there will be a bunch of origin stuff on Serah here as well. Find out why she is the way she is in the contract
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
After reading about 50 chapters from this one universe, I can't tell if there are lightbulbs lighting up inside me, or if there are knots forming in my head.
I mean, so many people!
While all these connections may be an overload to me, I finally understand that this story is where it all began. This story seems to take place before all the others.
So Hilde was once an outcast, locked in a cage? Wow! And in your other stories, she is like the most superior woman in that group. She must have done a lot of impressive things to get promoted.
Selene and Vanessa love toying with their men, so I'm excited to see what they do to them.
Clarrissa appointed Hilde. And will probably promote her too.
Ohhhhh! So Lily is Selene's sister! That's why they know each other in the "contract". Also Lily is selfish, wanting things for herself. First Jack Dalton, and now this hunt. (Technically, the hunt came before meeting Jack, I believe.)
Tanaquil and Adeline are new. They must only be teachers, I guess.
Let the hunt begin!
Author's Response:
Hi Tom. sorry I've woven all of these stories together, even I get befuddled from time to time. Hopefully by the end, everything will make sense.
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
I will be definitely be tuning in to see what happens next. Great story.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks Aaron, hopfefully I can keep the story tight enough to maintain your level of interest
Date: July 03 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
@Carycomic, thanks!
Date: July 03 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
@ Tom Speedy: Vanessa's the redhead with green eyes. Selene is the sultry brunette with the violet eyes.
[Report This]Date: July 03 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Now, this is _my_ kind of historical gts-fiction. Devoted as much to suspense as action!
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Selene and Vanessa. Lovely Names. I couldn't really tell who was who. Was Selene the dark haired one, or was it Vanessa?
I know Selene is very playful, but they both were playful.
That double kiss must be heaven. I mean, these men thought they were gods, and to be embraced by them is definitely an honor. Flavius got lucky. All the others, not so much.
I understood this chapter much better. I even think I'm starting to keep track of these soldiers names. But then they died. So now it should be easier to keep track of the fewer remaining people.
I would love to see some more "foreplay" before a soldier gets swallowed. Perhaps, they are expendable now, but as they die one by one, these giantesses have to take their fun a little slowly.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have no idea what is going on, but it seems like another promising story.
I guess I have to be patient with this tale to understand it.
I'm curious about the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hang in there Tom, hopefully I can bring it into focus for you.
[Report This]Date: June 27 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
An awesome start! I just hope you have more chapter-by-chapter reviews than I got for MTOCC.
;-)
Author's Response:
Historical fiction doesn't seem to quite captivate the way deviant angst ridden teenagers do. Hmm, go figure
[Report This]Date: June 27 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like this story. It reminds me of Gladiator and Centurion. Along these lines check out my story the Legend of Julius Marius it is similar to this one in some ways.
Author's Response:
Thanks Hank, yeah I used Centurion as my inspiration for the ambush. Your story was way more thorough and researched than this one. Very cool. Hope I can keep your interest.