Date: July 23 2015 10:27 PM Title: And There it Was...
So Vera's world seems to have little to no sense of community since she mentioned all of her people found it strange that humans work together.
I don't like how they keep calling Ellis Gulliver, like they're going to send him to the giant's world or something.
Date: July 23 2015 6:37 PM Title: And They Were Darker Still
Good chapter, and we got a lot of info this time, but I don't know how I feel about swapping one of the main two characters. Vera is one of the main reasons I read this, I don't know how interested I'll be in another giant...
Author's Response:
A valid concern! But, rest assure she won't be completely new to you...
Date: July 21 2015 12:33 AM Title: There Are No Words for That
Great series! Hope for the author to continue. What will happen next?
Date: July 17 2015 11:26 PM Title: There Are No Words for That
Still great but.....chapter 9 and no answers...
Author's Response:
I understand your concern, but I have this mapped out. I estimate a total twenty chapters and each will give more and more information, it will be revealed in due time.
Date: July 16 2015 8:51 PM Title: And There it Was...
A lot of back and forth but still the giants are a mystery although Vera managed to get Ellis to reveal how they can't kill her for the moment since they're running low on supplies for the gas.
Vera said she was conceived by a mother who smelled like dust, very odd choice of words there. Conceived would suggest a lack of maternal bond between Vera and her mother, whatever her mother is, that its a relationship lacking in love.
Date: July 11 2015 12:28 PM Title: This Cold Narrow Bed
Theres a weird kinship between them, or at least i get the impression...
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 6:09 PM Title: What Rage did Surface Then?
So they don't have any of the ingredients for the gas. I can't wait to see how Ellis treats this delicate information when his next appointment with Vera arrives.
aaron
PS I'm really enjoying this story and like the direction your taking. Also like how secretive you've been with the giants/giantesses origins.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've got a feeling no one will be expecting it either...
[Report This]Date: July 08 2015 1:55 AM Title: What Rage did Surface Then?
My God. If you don't keep writing this I'm going to flip. Great writing. Reminds me of some stories wrote years ago. Love the depth.
[Report This]Date: July 07 2015 11:18 PM Title: What Rage did Surface Then?
Its kinda hard to say whether Vera deserves some sympathy or not. I mean we have no proof that what she's said is true but even if every word that comes from her mouth is fact, that still doens't mean she's never killed humans. She even admitted to experimenting with humans as food.
It's really hard to feel sorry for a being that can talk so non-chalantly about having ended lives but at the same time be terrified for it's own life. These giants DO seem to value their own lives then, so they do have some concept of fear and pain!
So when they inflict pain, fear, and death upon humans, they know EXACTLY what they're doing. It really makes what they've been doing so much worse, at least if it was some brainless lizard monster going around killing and destroying, people could say to themselves, "well it's just an animal following it's base insticts without thought."
It's a different story with THESE monsters...Great chapter though, I'm eager for the next one, no doubt!
Date: July 07 2015 9:15 PM Title: What Rage did Surface Then?
I hate how every chapter is a cliffhanger but, I also realize how long this can take to write especially with life and respobsibilities. This is like a good book that I stay up until 3 am reading just to see whats next but it hasnt been written yet lol. It sucks :) I do understand though and I'm glad you are updating this in a far more frequent schedule than most so thank you for that.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it!
Date: July 07 2015 5:55 AM Title: Of That I am Certain
I think there might be some good in Vera, somewhere deep down but so far, neither of them will see it until Vera and Ellis are far away from the prison.
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 7:27 PM Title: Of That I am Certain
I dont know about Vera, my opinion of her has dipped somewhat in this chapter. Im starting to think that if Vera is the best the giants have to offer then maybe trying to reason with them was a bad idea altogether...For all we know Vera could be lying about everything shes said, maybe she was going around brutally butchering humans for no good reason before this.
It certainly doesnt seem, from what weve heard from her so far, that she cares about humans in any way, in fact she derives pleasure from their fear! I think in order for things to go further, some proof of Veras character outside of captivity must be found. Also cant the humans put a powerful bomb into Vera somehow? One that they could use to kill her if she started killing humans afterward?
Releasing her without some backup plan just seems really stupid. Great chapter though, this one was probably my favorite!
[Report This]Date: July 05 2015 2:34 PM Title: Of That I am Certain
Haven't seen this type of personal 1 on 1 interaction with a giantess of this size before. You tagged her mega so it would seem even if she tries to be gentle with people she can't help hurting them even from vibrations from her moving. Ellis seems kind of hoplessly optimistic about Vera, however the alternative probably wouldn't allow him to get as much information out of her. Very tense yet enjoyable read.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 9:09 PM Title: Then Sleepless as I Was
Is it tomorrow yet? :)
Date: July 02 2015 7:12 PM Title: Then Sleepless as I Was
Wish there was more Vera in this chapter, but it wasn't bad setup either. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks man! I plan to have the next two chapters between just the two of them
Date: July 01 2015 4:39 AM Title: Shut Out with the Light
Hm, maybe they will run away together. That would be fun. Or not. I eagerly await the next installment. Not much else to say really.
Date: July 01 2015 4:30 AM Title: When the Water Came
So many questions. But I am certain they will answered in due corse. This story like, you know, a drug. Ages ago I was writing a story somewhat similar to this and you've inspired me to continue.
Date: June 30 2015 6:54 PM Title: Shut Out with the Light
I admit I just kind of skimmed and will probably need to go back and read more thoroughly, but overall I'm very impressed with the character work you're doing here. Rare to see this much depth put into it on the site. Keep it up!
Date: June 30 2015 6:33 PM Title: And There it Was...
Fap fetish aside, this is actually fun to read. I'm really interested to see how this turns out. You seem to have really created personas' that are unique and interesting. I like your style man you've drawn me in.
[Report This]Date: June 30 2015 4:34 PM Title: And There it Was...
Really digging it so far, I kinda hope Vera breaks out just to see what she will do :). The way you've wrote Ellis is very belivable. He is scared to death, but passionate enough not to give up. I'm glad Vera seems to have taken a liking to him, I wonder what she would do with him if she escaped with him.