Date: December 02 2015 3:52 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
Well that was a fun read. I'd be bitter too. Yeah, who needs to be a someone? People who crave attention are so sick.
[Report This]Date: December 02 2015 11:20 AM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
That wad one of my favorite chapters of the year on this site. I think we have all been dying to see Vera escape. To see Ellis approach her even knowing he might die was very emotionally captivating. Vera isnt a "good" person, but I feel like she will try her best to protect Ellis no matter what happens. I don't know how they will take on 3 giants though. This is going to be an explosion of action I would think it works well since your charachters have been literally pent up for so long. Sonce your story is in such a bleak dystopian world, i think Ellis and Vera simply surviving would be a very happy ending. Id like to see them together though.
Date: December 01 2015 10:09 PM Title: And There it Was...
Amazing chapter I don't really know what to say, Vera and Ellis have the most complex relationship of any two characters I've ever read on this site. I think that they DO care about eachother though, I guess I should ask: is this the last chapter?
Author's Response:
No its not! Rest assured there will be at least 2 or 3 more chapters
[Report This]Date: December 01 2015 8:17 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
YEEEEEEES! UPDATES! ACTION! RESOLUTION! I'm really happy to see your still writing this. It's is a great story. To be honest, I had hoped my rather crude remarks had not dissuaded you from writing more, for which I apologize. Everytime I check this site I look for this story's updates first and, 'Saturn Seven' second. I feel like I received an early Christmas gift now that your back at it.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And honestly I needed a bit of a kick in the ass last time. I have been dragging this out longer than its worth because I've been trying to fit to some weird schema I had designed for myself. I don't know, I think that with all of this in mind I can bring it to a more satisfying conclusion.
Date: December 01 2015 7:37 PM Title: It Makes Nothing Happen
Aha, they were here before! Seems they have long lives too, since millenia on our world is just a decade on theirs. I am disappointed in Vera, I really thought she'd be different but now... she isn't. Her decisions now will be crucial to the conclusion. Elois may die, Im pretty convinced of it.
Date: December 01 2015 2:06 AM Title: One Cage into Another
Though you stated you felt parts of this story were rushed or not as exciting as you had intended, I must tell you that this story has been the single, most amazing writting series I have personally read throughout the entirety of this site. I can't wait to discover what happens when I read the final chapters, and I implore that you continue with your fantastic work.
~E.K.
Author's Response:
Wow! Thanks I appreciate it and I'm really glad you enjoy it! I think, since the response has been so positive, especially given my hiatus, I'll definitely work in a new story when this one is complete.
Date: November 30 2015 10:35 AM Title: And There it Was...
Well, okay, send away. My e-mail address is link on my proflie. If you click on the contact button. I had actually already started something. I think the hair will be the most annoying. And the lighting looks like it needs some fine-tuning too.
Author's Response:
It is done. Just a little reference material, you by no means need to use it, I just thought it might help understanding precisely where I derived my inspiration. Thanks again by the way!
Date: November 30 2015 9:23 AM Title: And There it Was...
I know that Vera has umber hair and cerulean eyes, but what about Ellis? I can't seem to find where his features are described. I think was just going to give Vera a simple set of clothes and sane with Ellis.
I think I can do do something with the Asylum Room I have. I scale that up, and the two characters, perhaps some lighting too. And that's pretty easy. I'll post it to my Deviantart.
You implied to read multiple chapters of my own story; how far did you get? Since you only left one review I don't know. There's fifteen chapters now by the way.
Author's Response:
Ellis' appearance is avoided for a reason, I won't say much more but he is pretty generic looking. A little unkempt, disheveled, that sort of thing. For Vera I actually have based her appearance of a real person, I can send photos if you like. As for your story I read the first three chapters.
Date: November 30 2015 8:34 AM Title: One Cage into Another
Thank the gods you're back! As you can clearly, some unfortunate things happened during your time away. The new website design has so many errors. I've managed to keep myself busy with my own story, as you may be aware, and I quietly hoped that you'd return
I feel like making a render or two of Vera and Ellis, but I'm not sure if I have the right envioment. We'll see. I also want to do more renders of characters in my own story. Too many things, not enough time...
Author's Response:
That would be awesome! Glad you are sticking with it. I'll have to go back to your story when I get the chance, I really enjoyed the first few chapters!
Date: November 29 2015 8:54 PM Title: One Cage into Another
WOW, your first chapter after so long and now we learn even more! I wonder if the Titanomachy and Jotun myths, the ones you brought up were inspired by an earlier invasion of these giants?
Author's Response:
Ooooh, you are onto something. I won't say any more ;)
Date: November 29 2015 7:53 PM Title: One Cage into Another
Great chapter! I'm so glad you're back! I'm wondering how Ellis is gonna get out of this bind? This guy is thrown around like a ragdoll by life itself, I'm surprised he hasn't gone completely insane by now! Also, a giant admitting they love someone!? And does Amora have some kind of escape plan or something? The questions keep coming!
Date: September 15 2015 8:00 PM Title: Through an Earthly Shackle
I've touched on this before but I would pay to see the end of this because there is absolutelty never any conflict resolution. It seems like more of the same over and over. You addressed my concern awhile back and, it feels like like this story is stuck in a time bubble. Ellis goes here and one is upset, Ellis goes there and another is upset....over and over again.......FINISH THE STORY dude. If it needs or you feel its worthy of a sequel write one but this innane repetetion.............Its like an animal you should put to bed.
Author's Response:
fair enough! I will say you do make a good point. I think perhaps that I have been staving off the ending because I feel like the readers need a lot of exposure to both of them. I've slowly started to realize that the complexity of the characters is not aided by the extended look at their lives but rather hindered by it. I do, hopefully, to end it within the next three chapters. Thank you for the criticism! It drives me to improve!
Date: September 15 2015 12:23 PM Title: Through an Earthly Shackle
Woah, Amora didnt do herself any favors by saying shed massacre more people if she ever got out. Whereas Vera is intelligent and cunning, Amora seems like the type of person thar just blurts out what comes to mind without filters...I dont know if id go so far as to say shes an idiot but shes not very bright.
Date: September 09 2015 4:22 AM Title: And There it Was...
Ellis fell for the trap.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2015 1:41 PM Title: The Will of Good and Evil
Honestly, Ellis's state of mind is starting to scare me, is this guy slowly becoming someone who could care less about their own life? Sometimes he seems afraid for himself but at the same time he goes out of his way to put himself in dangerous situations! Who in their right mind does what he did in this chapter JUST to tell someone they're leaving? Maybe he's starting to go insane a little, I wouldn't blame him after all the shit's he's been through.
Date: September 08 2015 1:26 PM Title: The Will of Good and Evil
Must be so uncomfortable sleeping on the floor. No pillow(s) or a blanket. Zoo animals recieve better treatment.
Date: September 08 2015 10:55 AM Title: The Will of Good and Evil
I see something coming up...
Date: September 03 2015 4:15 AM Title: And There it Was...
So far we hear so much about the giants being monsters YET it is the humans who are monsters for most of the story.
Date: September 02 2015 7:35 PM Title: Pyrrhic or Otherwise
Holy fuck.
I ain't even amd about how late this was.
Author's Response:
It only gets better from here!
[Report This]Date: September 02 2015 3:42 PM Title: When the Water Came
I still have a long way to read in this story, but, I am already greatly enjoying it! It is a unique atmosphere you have created for us readers, and I like how you write the speech of the characters. It makes them come off the page (or screen!) quite well. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it thus far.