Ok, thanks for making that clear. I thought maybe that big society changing thing would lead to an Alpha-Beta-Omega society.

I dindn't mean "misery" per sé, but in like Stephen King's Misery book/movie.

Is thisgonna be a 32 chapter story or a 10 chapter story? Cause I see some growth gonna happen soon. I have a feeling that it won't be Shrinkingly painful!!! Anyway! ENJOY!

It is great to see Carly 'happy' again. It would be nice if Carly could explain the reason why she destoyed the samples to Claire.  Is the device a shrinking/growing machine? Cause i think that would be better.... Is Claire gonna be an enemy? And will Carly an Jack join together to save the world? (▲.▲)

Yes, I can't wait. This series is getting better and better.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

I was just thinking, you could have made Jack struggle more... "Rigid as you are already, you let her do it without rebellion.“Please,” you beg quietly, already grasping the inevitable but trying regardless to salvage what remains of your dignity. Yourown physical resistance wasn’t even enough. This is all you’ve got left. “Pleasedon’t make me do this.” After this, Jack could have knelt down beside the couch, holding Carly's feet, begged for 'mercy'. He would then break out in tears and grip the couch. Then Carly would console him wiping his face with her feet.!!! Just a thought.... and tjen the story continues as it you have written it.

The plot thickens and our heroine is redeemed!

When it comes to sensually describing toe jobs I think you may have surpasses Cayce in my opinion.
This was definitely a chapter for me and it absolutely did not disappoint.

Although Dr. Felton seems as professional as all get out(partly why I like her character so much) I would like to see him(can't believe I forgot the protag's name) display signs of transference or displacement(can't remember the correct term). I learned about this from years of watching Fraser hahaha(still makes me feel smart to watch it). But I obviously have no idea what you have planned for your story but if the good doctor has a larger role then I'd like to see him start to have feelings for her but she will still try and keep things professional because she wants to help him. I just think that that would be a neat side story to have and maybe her having feelings toward him as well(subconsciously of course).
Anyways, sorry to go off on some weird tangent. I like this story and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks! That's definitely high praise. Interesting thought about Dr. Felton. That's not really the direction things are going with her (she's really there more to help the protagonist root through his mind) - that, and there's probably a fifteen year age difference between the two of them. Nevertheless I hope you like what's to come. The thought of displacement isn't terribly far off, either...

Actually made an account for the site just to leave this review. I really enjoy your work!Hit all the right notes with Jack's torment, and because of that, along with Carly's absurd ego, it hits cathartic notes in all the right ways when she has that taken away from her. You're definitely one of the better writers in about this stuff that I've seen :) You strike an amazing balance between traditional giantess torment, combined with the Jack actually winning out in the end (okay, technically it was Sophie that won, and Jack's still suffering for it in this one, but hopefully he can push through that!)

The shrunken victim (Jack) actually winning is such a rarity in these tales, but so amazingly satisfying when it does happen. Keep up the awesome work! I'll be watching.

I get the feeling Carly will regret doing that.

Good stuff, I expect Michelle will be briefed on how Carly likes her toes painted when this horrible nightmare is over.