Date: June 30 2015 1:53 PM Title: The Madness Begins
Farts pls :)
Author's Response:
It's funny you should mention that hehe
[Report This]Date: June 29 2015 10:32 PM Title: The Madness Begins
I hope he gets mistaken for a bug and crushed soon :3 Very good story.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, yes, he will x3 May even happen in a chapter this week xD
Date: June 25 2015 2:39 PM Title: Slightly Hungry
Not bad! Some of the tags aren't really my thing, so I'll probably bow out before he's digested, but overall it's a fun and straightforward little action tale. You could probably bulk up some of the descriptions a bit since the chapters are so short, but that's just a stylistic preference.
Author's Response:
I'm considering adding more descriptions in the upcoming chapters. It all depends on the day honestly. Sorry to hear youre not a vore fan. I like it well enough, but feet are my favorite. Thanks for the review though!
Author's Response:
I'm considering adding more descriptions in the upcoming chapters. It all depends on the day honestly. Sorry to hear youre not a vore fan. I like it well enough, but feet are my favorite. Thanks for the review though!
Date: June 23 2015 5:41 PM Title: The Madness Begins
Love the tone so far. Seems like there is a lot of potential for different "fun" senarios. Jogging is a good way to get the blood pumping and the sweat pouring. Plus it sounds like she went to bed without showering showering or brushing her teeth so there is probably a whole nother layer of grime. Really looking forward to what horrors our hero may face inside her mouth. Might even find some leftover pizza in there ~_~
Chapters are short but if they are coming out this quick that really isn't a problem. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have plans to put him into many different "fun" scenarios. Oh boy, is the sweat going to pour, good thing he can't drown, or this story would end fast. Nope, she sure didn't, she's a bit lazy that way, which will make things oh so fun for our friend Nathan. I'm looking forward into exploring some vore, and seeing where that heads. x3
I'm definitely going to try and release on a semi-daily basis. It all depends on how much time I have, but I'm looking forward to posting more too c:
[Report This]Date: June 23 2015 2:20 PM Title: The Madness Begins
Can't wait for the butt action to start!! Chapters could be longer though.
Author's Response:
I'd be interested in writing longer chapters, but I'm not great at busting out super long chapters in one sitting. So I'd rather break it up into shorter chapters with semi-daily updates. And the butt action will be coming, don't you worry :3
Date: June 23 2015 2:07 PM Title: The Madness Begins
I love this story! Chapter 3 soon please :)
Author's Response:
I'm actually going to try and get chapter 3 up right now :)
Date: June 23 2015 12:24 PM Title: The Madness Begins
Hmm... I wonders what happens next in this story. Keep it going.
Author's Response:
I'm actually just about to add another chapter. Prepare for action x3
Date: June 22 2015 11:37 AM Title: The Madness Begins
Looks like its off to a good start!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Truth be told, I have a bit of a background in roleplaying, so I am channeling that along with what I know about giantesses to write. Chapter 2 should be coming soon.