Man, forget Oliva and Clayton. That Hannah and Tom scene was fantastic!

My favorite part was this descriptive phrase where you said she pushed him until her 3rd knuckle or something was left visible. That gave me a really good picture of what was going on.

Theo is now playing along, but will he start enjoying it and teasing these girls like the "old" Tom in Tom's story? I always found it more exciting when the little guy was fearful of her pussy. Them changed right when I didn't want it to.

Still, very good chapter.

I can't wait for the next one!

Nice to see Theo is finally wising up, and starting to play the game, maybe he will survive for a bit. Also hoping that one of the men gets stockholm syndrome, and wants to stay small (thinking Clayton).

This story is awesome keep it up

I think this is a point where the plot is going to get a bit too deep.

I liked the interaction of Sophie, Theo, Grace and Olivia. Even the addition of Ted was good.

However, I think this proposition thing just seems like this story is going to get big, and I'm not if its time yet. It may be too soon.

I was kinda hoping for playtime chapters with all these characters. We got plenty from Sophie and Olivia. Grace had nothing so far, and Hannah is just getting started.

I think once each character has had a decent amount of play, then we can push this proposal. I just think this proposal will distract everyone one from their fun.

I like the story, but I'm not sure about these characters getting involved right now. In my opinion, laying low and acting normal seems the best way. Perhaps Olivia feels that this proposal risks her losing focus on Clay.

I hope there is at least a compromise where these ladies will have their fun while dealing with this project.

Author's Response:

Hey Tom, thanks for the review, I've been contemplating wrapping this story up and the proposal was a step in that direction, cleaning up some of the growing list of loose ends that are getting harder and harder to reconcile within the context of the story. 

Like I said, earlier: RIP, Theo. :-(

Author's Response:

He will never ever be the same but honestly speaking if it were one of us I think it would create a healthy and wary respect for feminine wiles.

I hope Olivia reneges on her agreement with Elliot, perhaps restoring his size only large enough to cast his injured foot {assuming any cast would remain full size like their clothing does} about 18" to 24" tall like a small pet dog {even forced to crawl on all fours to keep pressure off of his foot} then possibly back down again after it heals or even kept pet sized and led about on a leash by Olivia.  The women are much sexier as all powerful and self-centered in their desires.

 I like that Clayton is simply kept in Olivia's panty; kinda like he's not so much a human anymore or a sexual plaything as he's been reduced to Olivia's living panty liner.  After all she was never really attracted to Clayton, why not just keep him as a panty prisoner just because she can and enjoys that power aspect.  Olivia always has Wiley to shrink to become her sex slave.  If she does reduce Wiley, will she keep both tinies in her panty or will Clayton be relegated to some other body part, like Olivia's butt crack and just left there {would he beg her for this so he can stay with her so he can start to worship Olivia, even tucked deep in her butt crack rather than not be in her presence} or perhaps given to one of the other women?

 Theo and Hurricane Hannah sound like they are about to go for an interesting and very sweaty jog together.  Is Hannah showing her butt to Theo as a taste of things to come?  Does Theo actually have a new owner?  A new home?

 Don't know Georgia Hawthorne's future; but will she or Theo's mom - Ted's wife be the first woman to shrink? Either?  Both?

 Wouldn't it be interesting if either Sophia, Hannah or Grace get confronted by their landlord William James about a rent payment he actually just misplaced, becomes belligerent with her and ends up shrunk and kept in a small hanging bird cage in their apartment living room or her bedroom and forced to sign over the deed to the Victorian mansion and all his properties to her? {Kindly note that is being submitted to Guinness for the record of longest run-on sentence}  Grace would be my first choice, Sophia a very strong second. 

Uh-oh! Something tells me this new woman is going to throw a monkey wrench into Ted's workings. :-(

I like redempition storys. 

I hope Sophie think how she will feel in Theo shoes and realize she have feelings for him. and try make this up to him 

This is not how I expected this chapter to be, but I actually like it.

He agreement was one sided. You got to be kidding me. Theo agreed to that shit? There's no way he is going to win.

First of all, she just asked for an effect which of course means an erection which after 2 seconds he will achieve.

2nd, of all 3 girls, Hannah has always been the sex crazy girl and there's no way she can't put an effect on Theo. She is too good and sexy.

3rd, just copy and paste the 2nd paragraph:
"Task complete, she paused to examine herself in the full length mirror on the wall. Dressed for her morning run, she was wearing tight black three quarter length pants and a snug sleeveless faded pink top with white lettering that said, ‘goddess’ over a jog bra, and pink trimmed white ankle socks. Using an elastic hair tie, she pulled her long blonde hair back into a ponytail and grinned at her reflection. Turning to the side, hands on her slender stomach beneath a confined but still prodigious bosom, she nodding approvingly at herself."

If she is dressed like this, it's game over becuase she is in fact dressed like that and that outfit is irresistible.

Point is, he can't win. (Unless he wants to lose. That's what I would do becuase getting vigorously fucked by Hannah sounds hot.)

Now, we have to wonder how she will fuck him. If it's what I'm thinking then, she will tie his hands and legs somehow, maybe with tape, so he can't move, then she puts him inside her.

Or she can see him to her panties,(little loops of thread around his wrists and ankles and forcing him spread eagle on the inside of her panties. Then she goes for her run, crosses her legs, sits down, and stretches repeatedly, and massaging his head to her clitoris.

She can also tie him to a dildo and force him deep inside her. Then during one of her thrusts, the ties break loose and he is stuck deep inside.

When she says fuck him like never before, I'm thinking of a little bondage because Theo already has been inside Sophie's panties and already inside Sophie. So, I think bondage will heighten the experience. (I like giantess bondage, so this next chapter seems exciting). I could be wrong about this whole idea though. Regardless, I'm sure it will "bend my mind". (I hope.)

I really, really, really, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Of all the girls in the house, Hannah is the one who is the most sexually aware and experienced, should she elicit a response from Theo, no telling what things she might do with him

Greater counter-punch line (lol!).