[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, Tom, I find it refreshing that he had the courage to own up on the second try. Every shrunken man is entitled to err on the side of caution, and lie by omission, once. But, ONLY once!
Author's Response:
Umm, fear can be a wonderful motivator
[Report This]Date: July 09 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hmmm......My prediction was somewhat correct. Then again, it was expected. I just knew Hannah would think that it was a dream as she talks to Sophie.
Olivia Fetherstone is becoming an interesting character. Getting turned on, plus a desire for revenge! Perfect!
Theo trying to be vague as possible. Sophie getting suspicious. Relationship testing at its best.
Dr. Featherstone was thinking of Clayton and not Hans. I thought she wanted to humiliate Hans for stealing her ideas. In other words, why does she desire Clayton?
Author's Response:
Hans is her nemesis and there will certainly be some more discussion between the two. Clayton is safe for her to think about and dominate. The question becomes is she hot for clayton or the sense of power she feels knowing she is in absolute control?
[Report This]Date: July 03 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
For Theo's sake, I hope the GCR imparted some kind of latent accelerated healing factor. Similar to that depicted in the HIGHLANDER films and TV series! Although, for Theo's sake, hopefully activated by intense pain rather than violent death.
Author's Response:
Hmm... some type of hyper resiliency? I think Theo might have some explaining to do and earlier in the story there was some turbulent feelings between Sophie and him over Hannah
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
That scene with Hannah was creative. I mean, wanting a tiny person to feel your sensitive skin, and then claiming that it felt good, is a great way to start something special. (I'm tempted to try that too. Haha.)
Sophie will probably ask Hannah if she has seen Theo, and Hannah will reply "nah, but I had a dream about him" or something like that. Perhaps Sophie should introduce Hannah to the new Theo so she doesn't mistaken him again.
Now Dr. Featherstone has 2 tinies. I wonder if there will be some "distractions" during her work.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks Tom, we shall see how the situation unfolds between Hannah and her roomies and Dr. Featherstone and her tiny guests.
[Report This]Date: June 26 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm starting to like Dr. Featherstone. A beautiful, yet independent woman.
Is Hans the same guy as Dr. Brauer?
Sophie and Theo are having fun, and it was sooner than I expected.
Grace gave a hint of her seduction by referring to her nightie to Clayton. I really hope Hannah returns soon. I want to see her reaction to these tinies.
With this pace in the story, it looks like Sophie plays with Theo, Grace plays with Clayton, and Dr. Featherstone plays with Dr. Brauer.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter, not quite as you envisioned, but we'll see where it goes...
[Report This]Date: June 25 2015 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think you meant to say "...would be suspicious." But, you probably confused it with "...wouldn't be inconspicuous."
Author's Response:
I meant suspicious, more the facetious connotation. Perhaps i should have clarified some. :)
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 2
Theo is definitely taking advantage of the situation.
I wonder what happens when Hannah comes back. I hope she takes advantage of the situation as well.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, at least they made it to First Base.
[Report This]Date: June 22 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
"and they all fall down". (and shrink).
This story is refreshing and seems more playful compared to your other stories.
I think Sophie is an interesting character becuase of her rapid change in her emotions.
Theo seems like that guy that you just wanna knock out. I mean, he keeps messing things up and he doesnt care. However Sophie cares and she would be angry at Theo when she finds him.
Hannah and Grace are cool too. Lookin forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hey Tom, yeah a little less supernatural this time around. I contemplated linking this story to the others by having Charlotte (with Oleg perhaps) move into the house as this is the university she's going to, but decided against it, well at least for now. :)
Date: June 21 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start my friend can't wait for the next chapter! You should consider adding a bio page maybe with pics of celebs as references for the characters looks. I feel that always helps me get into a story more
Author's Response:
Thanks for the idea KushKing, I'll consider it. Hope you continue to enjoy thestory as it unfolds.
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
So much for German efficiency!
Author's Response:
We shall see if the teutonic Dr. Brauer has the wherewithal to remedy the situation using German ingenuity. Hmm