[Report This]Date: October 19 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
I got an interesting idea for that Theo/Hannah part.
Sophie goes to Hannah's room, and finds some tape. Sophie smiles and decides to mummify Theo with the tape, so he can't move or talk. (There is a tiny gap so he can still see.) Sophie then places the immobile Theo on Hannah's bed and writes a note stating "I bought you a sex toy. Enjoy! -Sophie." Then Sophie tapes Theo to the note so he can't roll away. Sophie leaves, Hannah arrives and mistakens Theo for a sex toy. She then puts Theo in her panties and inside herself during the day.
That's my wish. Your cliffhanger basically was asking for an idea. I hope my idea gave you an answer. (Or at least influenced it.)
I can feel my idea happening soon. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
We shall see what things Hannah might be inclined to try.
Author's Response:
We shall see what things Hannah might be inclined to try.
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
I noticed that Clayton was eager to please Olivia. What happened to his fearful behaviour? Putting him in her panties was supposed to be a punishment. How is he happy? This reminds me of Tom's story and how Tom enjoyed being swallowed up by pussy. However, I thought he would get scared of it and he would be forced to enter or please it. In other words, will any tiny man be scared of a non-teen's vagina. Lina and Olivia have both been gentle, a little too gentle. I think it's time for them to step up their game.
Meanwhile, Sophie gets sexier every chapter. The way she said "morning boys" shows that she is enjoying her control over these guys. First of all, saying boys over men makes them less worthy of her. It belittles them. Also, I still love that chapter when Sophie forced Theo to please him and then told him that he was going to spend all day in her panties. Just that sexy diologue about control with her private parts just makes me excited. I wish you write like that with every giantess. You put a great attitude on Sophie. Love to see more of her.
I almost forgot. It's been 1 month since the last post! Wow! It's been so long, I forgot who Clayton and Ted were and I had to go back and read about them. Haha. I'm glad you are continuing this story. Of all the ones you took a break from, this was the one I wanted to see back up again, so thanks.
I doubt Ted will succeed in getting the answers he wants. Sophie is too smart. Besides, what info will actually help Ted? I have no idea. But I guess it's worth a try, so I wonder what Ted will ask.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah so many stories sometimes hard to keep them all moving evenly. It's easy to forget who is who without rereading a big chunk of the story
[Report This]Date: October 07 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Theo, Theo, Theo! When are you going to learn that you can't have your sweetie-pie and eat it, too.
:-|
Let me (try to) rephrase that...
Author's Response:
Or get eaten by your sweetie's pie :O
Date: September 01 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dark Writer's ideas are fantastic! I never even thought of Ted's wife coming along. I love the idea of having her take Ted home in her panties. That's a great idea.
If anyone is going to do the butt insertion, I bet it's either Sophie or Hannah. It would be interesting if Olivia puts Clayton in her pussy and Wiley in her butt. Sophie should teach her.
Author's Response:
Hmm we'll see Tom m'boy where this little flight of fancy takes us. Thanks for all your continued support across the vast number of stories I have in the go it is always nice to know someone out there is enjoying it :)
Date: September 01 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
I love how Ted took a big drink of Sophie's "nectar". Seems he's quite happy to accept Sophie's demands. Is his wife, Theo's mom to be involved, and at what size {wifey tucks tiny Ted away in panty and goes home leaving Theo, thus family problem solved; OR wifey shrunk and joins the family in servicing Sophie and again family problem solved}
Sophia may be the sex addict; but Olivia is by far the sexiest with her sexual frustration being taken out on Clayton and hopefully soon Wiley. Don't know your plans for them; but Clayton permantly tangled in Oilvia's pubes, perhaps spread eagle facing in, head stuck up her clit hood and legs spread on each side of opening to allow access for Wiley. What ever you decide I'm sure it will be as great as the rest of your story.
Am curious, any tiny going up one of the lady's butts for an extended stay? Of course Olivia would be my first choice; but there's always Grace and Hannah. Only curious, please, just go with what you're doing.
Keep up the terrific work!
Author's Response:
Thank you hopefully I can continue to keep it interesting. Thanks for the input I'll keep it in mind as the story progresses. Muwahaha
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
A short but sweet chapter!
Ted is what people would call an expert.
His arms, so bulky that his touch can send shivers to your spine.
His strokes, so powerful, that a wave of forces affect you.
His body, so muscular, that women prefer him over any other.
Ted is the giantess's favorite toy. A man who knows how to please a girl without having been told what to do.
So, Theo just watched that whole thing, right? He might feel jealous. Like doesn't he want to be the one to pleasure the girls right? Well, now he knows, now he knows. Ted surely is the man of the tinies.
What I also like is how the older person is more experienced and has a creative way of making pleasure. You did it perfectly with Ted, and I would like to see that in giantess MILFs. (Karolina). :)
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yes, sir! That Ted is one pragmatic Dad. He doesn't "duct" responsibility, at all.
;-D
[Report This]Date: August 28 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hmmmmm! It's hard to tell whether Sophie or Ted was the more "bushed."
"Just mow the lawn." LOL!!!!!
[Report This]Date: August 27 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm starting to like Ted's attitude. Do exactly what these women tell you to do! That's their only hope.
I agree, I'm jealous of Clayton. Olivia seems to be the sexiest person there.
Sophie obviously has the sexiest attitude. Love her action with Ted and Theo. She literally broke Ted down. I like the new Ted.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 26 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 14
Been catching up on your recent additions and I must say they are all fantastic!!!
I love the direction this story is taking and I'm a little envious of Clayton.. man that chapter was awesome. Thank you for all your hard work..
Author's Response:
Thanks! It is always appreciated when someone expresses positive feelings and reception for a story! As for clayton, um, yeah poor guy, not!
Date: August 21 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Perhaps Clayton is on the verge of obsession, even Goddess worship of Olivia. There's nothing wrong with getting tangled helplessly in place in an overgrown garden; like some type of kinky "rope" bondage, maybe made more constricting by struggling like Chinese handcuffs.
Would Olivia really be interested in untieing him from her pubes; not to mention the shower Clayton would get every time she went pee.
Wonder if Warren would get down on his hands and knees and beg to be shrunk and owned by Sophia, be her little pet or dedicated minion. Hmmm, Olivia and an army of minions, perhaps if she shrunk all the homeless guys (and gave them a bath, maybe in her toilet)
[Report This]Date: August 21 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
This will probably sound like deja vu. But, narcissistic boyfriends like Brad make me glad I'm a stick-in-the-mud bachelor who stays home on Friday nights.
Because it looks like the reward increasingly ain't worth the risk!
Date: August 21 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
You see, once upon a time, there was this really funny actress named Lily Tomlin who did these two great movies. NINE TO FIVE and THE INCREDIBLE SHRINKING WOMAN?
[Report This]Date: August 20 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
So Clayton doesn't mind his situation. I think Olivia needs to pick up the intensity.
Sophie knows a lot about breaking down men. She made Bryce melt. Olivia should be lucky she has a friend like Sophie.
Olivia should've just shrank Bryce like normal. No need to try something new. Now Andrea is sad. Well, his ability to please her makes her happy. Problem solved.
Each woman has a man. Now what about Grace, Theo and Hannah? Who gets the man and who doesn't? It's going to be a fun soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, that was an incredible chapter!
Olivia finally did it! She finally decided to use a tiny for her own pleasure.
I was kind of surprised at how awkward Olivia seemed as she put Clayton in there. I thought the older woman would know a little more about how to use a tiny man rather Sophie.
I mean Sophie discovered it a few days ago, and now seems like an expert. Theo was part of her training and Ted is her first test.
I can't wait for Bryce to shrink. Sophie is even toying with him by playing with Ted in front of him. For all he knows, Bryce is probably thinking that Sophie likes him and is touching herself because of it. He has no idea that there's a man in there. I wonder what his reaction will be if he finds out.
Such a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Sophie is blooming while Olivia has been closed off for quire some time, but she is a quick study.
[Report This]Date: August 16 2015 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
You know this chapter would make for a great movie starring--and written/directed by--Lily Tomlin: "Five to Nine Inches."
[Report This]Date: August 14 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Terrific so far. Really starting to come along.
How about the machine being able to shrink people to different sizes; such as Olivia mentioning the different size capabilities and Andrea asking for Bryce to be shrunk down to an inch.
Could you add some long term panty / thong wear, with a tiny in the front or back {both}
Perhaps Hannah gets addicted to using inch or two inch guys as perminant suppositories {perhaps the machine can be calibrated for a particular woman's genetic make-up, so they can live and get stuck up her hiney living off of her poop and breathing in her farts forever}
I'm not sure what Olivia plans on doing with Elliot or how she's going to punish Clayton; maybe she can stuff each one underneath her breasts {like living underwires} and decide to keep each one under their particular breast to drink her sweat and eat dead skin. Of course they'd have to come out to go to the bathroom or for her to change their mini-diapers; but then right back under her breasts they go. I don't know if you said Olivia's breast size; but for this Double EE would be a nice crushing weight to keep them both securely in place even without a bra.
Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dark Writter for taking the time to read this story and provide a review, you've provided some excellent ideas to incorporate into this story to keep it moving forward. I hope you continue to enjoy
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Of course Olivia has yoga pants. Is she going to get Wiley along the way?
At this point, there is going to be a lot of tiny men in this story. First, Theo, then the doctor whom Olivia killed. Then Clayton, then Ted. Soon Bryce and soon Wiley. That's 5 guys for 3 ladies. Actually, I forgot about Grace.
Let's play match ups:
Sophie-Ted
Grace-Theo
Olivia-Clayton and Wiley
Andrea-Bryce
So now this device will be portable. Will there be a lot more toys, or was it made portable just to shrink Bryce?
I hope there won't be too many tinies. Then it will be hard to track who is who and the main characters won't have their fun together.
After the exchange of Ted, I'm curious what is going to happen next. Everyone who can stop them is shrunk and now at their mercy. I don't think there is anything left for these women to do except to play with their men.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Around and around she goes, where she stops, no one will know, well, except me I guess, ;)
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow! I'm impressed most authors don't usually do these big fixes to their previous chapters. Then again, you are not most authors.
Your explanation in your response to my review was sufficient, but this is incredible. Now it all makes sense. Now I'm curious about Grace getting acquainted with Tom. (I mean Theo. Both these guys are lucky.)
Dr. Featherstone should keep the tape on Ted. I like him being encased. It makes the future events much more interesting.
Good update.
Author's Response:
Hey Tom thanks for your insight in chapter ten. It reads better now. I'm not going to go shrink ray crazy because it does get confusing. Like how complicated the contract became. It might be time for some more tinies to shuffle off to tiny heaven. We'll see
[Report This]Date: August 12 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Nice rewrite.
Author's Response:
Thanks. That's the value of reviews Tom pointed out some inconsistencies and I was able to do some damage control. I think it comes off better this way. Humbly speaking of course