[Report This]Date: June 14 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well done perspectives from the giant and the tiny lizards. Very sexy macro stuff. That was a suprising ending too, how nice of him not to just crush him after that. Is this the end or will there be a follow up?
Date: June 13 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
It seems to be a promising story. I will say I spotted a few errors here and there, but nothing too major. Other than that I look forward to the rest of the story. I won't rate it yet, as this is the first chapter, but I am intruiged by what follows.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Could you point out the errors? I've been trying to eliminate that type of thing for a while now, and spell check can only get you so far.
[Report This]Date: June 10 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good discriptions I have to say. ANd there isnt alot of lizard furry stuff on this site either. Although THe giant lizard that cam along, Is it femail of male (I can asum female becaus it is a" beutie"). And is it chothed o naked. Ether whay Good story and keep going.
Author's Response:
Thank so much for the review. To answer your questions, it is male, and it dosn't have clothes