Date: June 09 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story so far. I can't wait to see more of this. I love the movie and comics. I feel like the movie was very good with the source material. I would love to see more. I would love to see Todd having too worship envy or one of the girls. Knives being a giantess would be fun to see.
[Report This]Date: June 09 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ha! I like Scott Pilgrim and had the chance to meet the author once before it became big.
The story is well-written and gets to the point. In your next installment, if you don't mind the suggestion, it might be nice to have another scene with Knives in Envy's stomach, before she gets returned.
That said, if you wanted to have the part about the victims re-materializing just be a lie on Envy's part, and have the prey consumed and permanently digested, I certainly wouldn't complain. ;-)
Date: June 08 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
Also to Jacksmith: Roxy would make an awesome giantess! I can't believe I didn't consider her sooner! Thanks for the suggestion. :D
Date: June 08 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1
I appreciate macro fics that respect the source material while still having some fun with it. I feel like I remember Todd turning into coins in the movie, but could be wrong. Regardless, good stuff. I'd happily read anything else you wrote with the other characters. Roxy might be fun to see.
Author's Response:
He did, yes. However, the creator of the comics explained in an interview that those defeated by Scott just woke up in their rooms the next day, none of them permanently died.
[Report This]Date: June 08 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wowie! I wanna have a giantess goddess mistress to worship too:(
Envy seems so lovely. I can't help but ENVY the little girls! *Badum tssh*
No but really, nice story.
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks!!