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Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2020 5:28 AM Title: Enter Haile

Not sure if you read these, but I think this chapter singlehandedly made me really understand just how much BETTER shoewear crush can be than barefoot. And I say this as a lifelong foot fetishist.

I haven't read the rest of the story (and I haven't even read a story this long ever on this site) but I certainly intend to.

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Date: March 13 2019 3:05 AM Title: Private Viewing

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Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2017 9:43 AM Title: Morals and Desire

And here's another great Chapter!

The part in which Haile says she has no one that could feed her made me feel a little sad for her.. I mean, she has tons of followers, lots of money, thousands of tiny slaves.. but if it wasn’t for Sarah, she would be alone.

I sensed from the begin that Sarah and Haile would come back together eventually, and I’m very happy to see I was right. Even if there is still some kind of tension between them because of Haile’s diet, I think they can make it work again.

The scene in which Sarah fed Haile was impressive and full of emotions. I think you exposed Sarah’s feelings incredibly well.

I also liked a lot the beach rampage and the fact that Haile was searching for a companion for her future rampages. :3

PS: Allí has been disposed in front of Jasmine’s camera and you didn’t showed us? How could you be so mean to us? ;)

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2017 2:38 PM Title: What Matters Most

Finally some explanations!
Now I know how tall Haile is, how her passion grew inside her, and how she started her carreer as giantess. :)
Also, now I know that not all the worlds are easy for her to subdue. They can hit back  pretty hard.. almost deserved I'd say XD, but this is another of the many things that makes your story so good. *clap*

I’m really amazed by the care you put in describing Haile psychology from when she was a little girl to the day in which she entered her first scaled universe.
Everything is very well thought, plausible and explained well. I loved how Haile disliked the humans’ taste and had lots of troubles in making her body able to process human bodies and clothes.
By the way, it’s curious that you made her “unable” to eat naked people, it would have been much more healthy.

The technology and the life in her world seems part of a very good sci-fi movie and I really liked to read the details about how you sorted everything up. For example I find rather cool the idea of the “translator worm” XD

The last part was is very romantic and enjoyable.. and now that it's over, I know how Haile slowly developed into what she is now.. a terrifying monster and a beautiful killing machine. ;)

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2017 12:44 PM Title: Home Depot

This first chapter started with a terrifying gruesome game but it was terrific as always.

Anyway, since from the begin there are a couple of things I needed to point out.
First of all, it’s clear that Haile is hungry due to the low amount of food she had to eat in the last weeks, and in fact you say she’s very hungry.. Isn’t it a shame to waste part of her food by just killing them and leve them into the box?
The second thing is personal, so feel free to ignore what I’m going to say.
The tiny people into the first box stares helplessly at their “friends” dying horribly one by one. That’s something terrifying to say the least, so I expected to see you deeper exploring this situation, pointing out the anguish they feel and the extreme contrast with the careless emotions of Haile.
Though, I have to say that what you did later with the 2 twins was so cool and well done that made me wonder if you read my thoughts. :D

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2017 6:02 AM Title: The Big Game

It's hard to describe this chapter, I mean.. it’s perfect!
I won't change a single word in it.. it's an exemplary piece of art that explains a devastating rampage in deep details.
I rarely read things like this, capable of summoning so strong images in my mind and for sure I’ll come back to read the improved version once you will have published it. :)

If I really have to find an issue in this chapter, then here it is, but first a preamble: In the end, I realized that Jasmin is 1/3 of Alli. That means that to her, Haile is between 750 and 800 feet tall.
I didn't realized it until the end. I don’t know if it’s my fault, but I thought Haile was still 250 feet tall for the tiny people.. and for this reason some aspects seemed a little inaccurate.
In the end though I realized my mistake.
Maybe you should add more size comparison in the first part that makes the reader fully aware that we are in a different sized world, where Haile is much bigger and powerful than usual.

As for the rest.. AWESOME WORK! **claps**

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2017 8:13 AM Title: Questionable Activity

Now.. this was what I call a slaughter.. literally. Even Allison had her amount of nightmare and by now she looks quite broken.. I'm curious to see if she will "crawl out" of it and which will be the mental-health toll to pay for it.

Haile is ready to move and I guess she will do it soon.. and with it she'll have to go to a new series of rampages in order to populate her new house.


She's a monster indeed.. but a terribly sexy one. o///o
What is really amazing, exciting and utterly terrifying is the total carelessness for the people smaller than her and the awareness that no one is safe around her.

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2017 8:11 AM Title: Private Viewing

Now, this was  the apotheosis of the vore fantasy. There was evrerything, literally!
Once again I can't help but be amazed by the amount of details and passion you put into it.. I also noticed that just like me, you tend to be repetitive in certain moments but I know that you do it because you deeply enjoy those things. ;)

The teeth cleaning part is a classic and I'm glad that unlike many other writers, Halie didn't swallowed them all, I'm learning a lot about her by reading this. :)

Finally Alli.. she's smart and I like her cause she does exactly what I would do XD.
Still.. I don't understand the fact that basically only Halie knows how to "eat" and digest.. not to mention that judging by the frequency and the amount of people she eat she must have another kind of modification in her body that prevents her to get fat reguardless of the amount of food that she eats. ^^;

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2017 8:09 AM Title: Boring Adult Stuff

At first I had the feeling that what Haile did to the electric plant in the tiny world had had a consequence in the real world.. if that's the case, it would be really awesome.
It means that there is some kind of interconnection between universes, something that ties them in a mutual unpredictable relationship. :)
Alli is very cute and rather brave considering the situation, not many people would act as sh does but I can relate to her, because for her it's basically a fantasy that became reality.

The glowing stomach is a conveninent way to explain how you can take shots insiede it, but I can't imagine anyone offer himself for cameraman work and doing it decently, knowing that by doing so, they're going to die after a slow and terrible agony.

The barefoot crushing scene was my favourite by the way, It was well explained and full of details.
Considering your skills when it comes to vore, I think you could do better.. but anyhow I really appreciate your effort. I totally understand the difficulties you're facing in doing that. I guess It's like when I have to deal with vore scenes in my works. I try to do my best, but I know I will never be as good as someone that has a deep passion for it.

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2017 8:05 AM Title: Welcome Aboard

The start was very cool, how she explained them their new lives and ho she made a sample out of the smaller girl.


Alli seems cute and if I was a tiny in Haille's home, I'd like to be in her place rather than with the others. As far as I saw, Haile treats tiny people more or less like we treat our livestock. It's not impossible for Alli to get the status of pet instead of food if she can please Haile properly... at least that's what I think I would do in her place.


Unfortunately it seems that Haile is not fond to guys.. ;P
Anyway, the last part is totally vore centric and despite it's not my cup of tea I wish there would be one day a story writer that could write something so wonderful and sensually about giantess-foot interaction. o3o

Reviewer: Tiny-Mk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2017 8:03 AM Title: Enter Haile

I love how casually and carelessly Haile disposed of the people, cars and houses.
Personally I'm not really into vore but when it comes to it I love when she chewed them.
Finally the way she casually steps on crowds with those deadly sneakers is super cool.
You descrived everything incredibly well and clearly making me feel like if I could actually see it as if it was a movie. :)


Even if you didn't mentioned it, judging by dhe descriptions I'd say that Haile is around 250 feet tall (80 meters), am I right?

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 7:55 AM Title: Enter Haile

Omg your back! Yes! And not only with another chapter but a short story to boot! :'3 So you were Haile along, huh? I didn't see that  plot twist :P I think it's awesome that you've been writing on this site for so long. Your definitely one of my favorite authors so I hope you know you've got a fan out of me cuz I wuv your work! :3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Yep, I was me all along. ^_^ I write pretty slow, but I'm still here! But I hope to eventually be able to change that. Thanks for coming along with me on this crazy ride, we've got a long way to go hopefully you're up for it! Hoho

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 01 2017 3:30 AM Title: Morals and Desire

Oh man, you're e-p-i-c!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: Dolphinslash Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2017 10:44 PM Title: Enter Haile

this was very detailed and a lot of fun, i'll def check out more of youre stuff!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I'll be republishing all of my novels including new stuff and things never release before on my new penname, Haile. Thank you for reading and for the comment! 

Reviewer: tinykev49 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 7:16 PM Title: Enter Haile

good so far!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comment! For every person who comments there's at least 10 people who never will; so I sincerely appreciate you taking the time to say something! ^.^

--HK

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 11:08 AM Title: Enter Haile

So now we see Haile at a vulnerable state. Can't say I feel bad for her after all the carnage this cute/sexy monster has caused. Strange how I actually said, "Good for you! Ya messed with the wrong world!" But at the same time my macrophilia contradicts and says, "this is so so wrong, but Haile is so so hot!" Blast you for making me feel like this! And German, your not alone. I'm a weird fucker too -_- Anyways, another great chapter. I agree with you that this may have been your best one yet. Descriptions were on top, you did a lot of explaining about Haile's bloody path to her career as an "entertainer," we meet another character, (Sarah) and overall this was a really lengthy chapter. Ten stars cuz you know my... situation with my rating already lol

Author's Response:

Huzzah! Thanks for the ghost stars, I sincerely appreciate them! ^.^ It's always good to know when someone likes your work.

I don't go in for the whole weird designation, after all, we're all here aren't we! Ho ho. I'm glad you liked the chapter! I think it's a sign of a good author being able to elicit such a wildly varying response from their readers (at least, that's what I feel about 'good authors' I follow, anyway, haha). Yes, Haile's a cute, sexy monster that causes such massive wide spread death and destruction and, oh no, she's really only just human after all and she bleeds just as easily as somoene she rips apart with her bare hands. It's quite a thing to think about.

I wish I could do more lengthy chapters, 10k words per chapter would be ideal; but sometimes I just don't have the content in my head. Oh well, we'll see as we go. I am thinking I'm going to like writing Part Two of this story a lot. :D

--HK

Reviewer: geeman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2017 10:42 AM Title: What Matters Most

Finally this bitch gets an asswhooping. It's funny how cowardly and worried about her own life she is but she turns around and does worse to countless others for no real reason. I suppose sociopaths are always hypocrites. As always I mention that I have a love/hate relationship with violent giantess. They are sexy as heck to me but I hate them as characters at the same time, they piss me off. It's weird, I can't explain it really. It's like I'm attracted to them, perhaps even more than gentle giantess but when something bad happens to them I love it. Man I'm a weird fucker, lol. Anyway enough of my bs, I love the story either way. I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Well, she's so cowardly and worried about her own life, because, you know, it's "What Matters Most", eh? eh? Haha. She's not so invincible after all! She's definitely "Still Human" too. I'm all over the significant names this time! Woo. Again, as always, thanks for your words and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Hopefully I can keep you on your toes through out several more chapters! The story is about 1/3 done I'd wager; but only time will tell. ^.^

--HK

Reviewer: Haruau Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 10:32 PM Title: What Matters Most

Very interesting, lots of world development. Which I'm ok with. :) I do love this story and the character.

By the way I tried to find you on Patreon and I can't find you.

Author's Response:

Hey, thank you for your time! Comments and feedback are what drive the amateur author like myself and I certainly appreciate it!

 

I probably won't get into trouble for posting an actual link, so here you go: https://www.patreon.com/hkorhal Essentially you just go to the Patreon website and you look for me, hkorhal. I'm around there somewhere! Thank you again. ^.^

--HK

Reviewer: Springer Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2017 8:51 AM Title: Home Depot

This latest chapter was incredible, I think Haile might be my favourite giantess ever. She's so sadistically cruel to tinies and yet seemingly a perfectly nice person around others her size. When she started talking about blood making everything prettier though, you got the sense that she has some real issues.

Personally, I hope things stay at this level of "intensity" as much as possible. This is one of the best written violent giantess stories I've ever read, and Haile is such a fascinatingly perverse character I'm wary of any major changes in tone in the next chapter.

 



Author's Response: Thanks! She does have some issues, you're right. Don't be too wary, it's not a completely new story. In fact, I'm about to post the next chapter so you can let me know what you think about it. The main thing is the story is moving on, because too much of the same thing can be boring, and as such Part 2 will be written a bit differently; but will still show the same Haile that everyone has come to know and love, or is love the right word? Who knows. Fear perhaps. We'll see! --HK

Reviewer: Nothingness Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2017 1:10 PM Title: Enter Haile

Hey! So glad to see ya back! Hope life is treating you good. Haile forcing the twin blonde girls to kiss, eating them and THEN belching on Jasmine like it was...How the heck do I express this sexiness without sounding like wierdo lol. Haile still having sympathy for people of her size when she was watching the news was very interesting considering all the carnage she's committed to the tinies just shows that she really does regard them as merely her food and toys. BTW did it appear like you received five stars from my last review on your scene? Just curious.

Author's Response: Your last review as 2.5 stars, or a 5 Rating, and this one had none! Gasp! Haha. This site really is showing its age, it's getting soooooo old. I'm worried, because if it goes, where will we go? :o All the other Giantess sites are kind of poo imo. :/ Anywho, thank you again for the words! She's definitely different. I'm quite fond of the story as well and I have to admit she surprises even me at times! --HK

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