Date: January 25 2017 5:09 AM Title: The Big Game
I've only just come across this story but I have to say it's amazing.
I love how unrepentantly cruel Haile is to the tinies, with not the slightest bit of empathy even for ones she knows by name.
And the way that juxtaposes with her acting normally, even shyly, around people her own size is great.
For my own personal tastes I love the emphasis on shrunken women and lesbianism, which is fairly rare for a violent giantess tale.
I'm hoping there'll be a new chapter soon and we'll find out exactly what she did in the stadium, and whether Ali and Jasmin manage to survive.
Author's Response:
There will be something about the stadium eventually! I just couldn't resist dangling that bit of "information gap" in there, it's hard to do, trust me! Part I isn't called "The Monster" for no reason! Haile is truly something awful and I love her character with all my creative powers. As I've always said to other people, "Write the story you want to read." And that's what I'm doing with Haile's; although I feel like I've finally done enough "world building" and "character developement" so now I can concentrate on other things in Part II and Part III. Thanks for the review and I hope you like the next bit!
[Report This]Date: November 15 2016 9:11 AM Title: Enter Haile
Great story! Haile's sadistic personality is truly erotic. I was wondering, since Haile devours people so much, will there be a scene where she burps after eating a group of people? It was just something I noticed didn't happen much in the story and I wasn't sure if it had something to do with the fact about people from her world not being capable of using their stomachs. I tried to give you five stars but my stupid tablet says two in a half stars lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks, haha. It'll make my score look that much more dynamic! Anyway, there's a scene where she does in fact burp in the next chapter, but it's all a bit wishy washy. Yes, there's a lot of stuff going on in the background, and the social upper class doesn't need to use their stomach anymore due to technology. Blah blah, there's a lot I haven't gotten into yet because I'm still "world building" over several, several dozen thousand words. I don't believe in telling everything right up front, anyway. Hoho, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2016 4:28 PM Title: The Big Game
Brutal. That's the only way I can describe this chapter. I think all this blood and gore might be starting to get to me, I'm usually not a huge fan of violent but I put up with it if the story is good enough but this chapter really got to me. It doesn't help that you're desctriptions are so well written that I can almost hear bones being broken and flesh being torn to pieces. Haile is unapologetically evil beyond repair!
As for the tinies, one thing that's always struck me as odd about this story (and alot of violent stories lets be honest) is that the tinies either don't fight back or barely do so. You've mentioned before how Haile is basically a giant human with no special powers of any kind so I don't think she'd be invulnerable to a missle or something. It's just a thought, I'm sure you don't intend for people to take this story too seriously either way...
Anyway Im not sure if I'll continue with this story or not, it's up in the air, but I wish you the best! You're an great writer and don't let anyone tell you differently! It's just this story might not be everyone's cup of tea..
Author's Response:
I appreciate the fact that you've stuck it out this long. It is by far the most brutal story I've ever written and it too has gotten to me as well. But, Haile is a character and it's all within her parameters. There have been times she's been injured before and there will be times where she's injured again. People don't just take getting eaten lying down! But she does stack the odds in her favor. People taking it as serious or not, who knows. There's a LOT of little details here and there that are telling another story if you completely ignore all of the blood and gore, etc. For example, Haile's use of her phone to control information so that 'news of her' doesn't escape the city. And then her use of Electromagnetic Pulses help keep her 'crimes' hidden from public view. Of course none of this is outright said in the story, but it's all there in the text if you "think about it" and such. Anyway, if this chapter was too much then the next one will defnitely be too much; but it's the climactic conclusion to Part I of the story, and Part II will be completely different. Not trying to lure you into the next chapter or anything, but there'll be caution tape and such around the next bit!
Thanks again for your honest review and time!
[Report This]Date: November 14 2016 5:06 AM Title: Enter Haile
Oh my goodness, please take all of my yes. Haile is hotter than a billion suns all going supernova at the same time. This is officially my favorite story ever :)
Author's Response:
I hope it stays that way! It may get a little hotter, so long as it doesn't burn out! Hoho,
[Report This]Date: November 14 2016 12:27 AM Title: The Big Game
Great stuff.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the stars!
Date: November 13 2016 11:10 PM Title: The Big Game
Now THIS is a pleasant surprise! Glad to see you're still adding to this story.
Darn it, now I gotta go re-read Melanie and Kendra, they were some of the first stories I remember reading on this site.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hopefully I haven't messed them up too much. I deleted them in a fit of madness a long time ago and I'm reposting them with edits and additions. I hope it's not a memory ruined!
Date: October 16 2016 1:04 PM Title: Questionable Activity
Thank you, this is truly the greatest vore story I have ever encountered! Your gruesome and graphically detailed writing style perfectly encapsulates and mirrors every single aspect of my own fetish with a specific ferocity that I've never seen before. I actually paused several times while reading because I was so awestruck by how the situations and character you had painted with your story were so shockingly similar to mine, something that barely a handful of other stories have ever done before. Your writing of Haile is just absolutely perfect, juxtaposing the horrendously gruesome and terrifying situation the tiny people are trapped in against the giggling hunger of their salivating goddess. Your vivid descriptions of the gory open mouth chewing processes are second to noone, and coupling that with the nonchalance of your character to her food's tormentuous suffering you have successfully created my favorite giantess ever. In addition to this I sent you an email with a much more detailed and longer review, as well as an inquiry. I just wanted to make sure that you received it, along with my heartfelt thanks for this amazing story. Can't wait to see what's next!
Author's Response:
Yes, thank you kindly! It has taken me a little bit, but by this weekend the next chapter should be up. I appreciate your inquisitiveness and review, and welcome it always. I can only hope to continue to paint such a wondrous picture in the shadow of praise I have thus far received. Stay tuned, because things may just get messy!
Date: September 28 2016 8:49 PM Title: Enter Haile
This is a great addition to the realm series, which has had me following for quite some time. Haile is certainly unique, and the variations of hard/soft involving her are highly creative. It took me a long time to get into the hard/sadist type material but Haile introduces it in alluring ways.
Great chapters so far, looking forward to more. The varying size dimensions are an awesome way to explore different avenues. As always with The Realms there is an underlying love/lust connection that goes beyond mindless consumption. I consider these stories to be an excellent expression of what it means to be into vore, while The Realm of Haile peers deeper into the darker side of the fantasy. Excellent work.
PS my old account is gone forever, I'll just throw on a "2"
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! It's sad you lost your account but great you've got a new one! I'm always hoping to write something more than just "stuff". So definitely stay tuned for some more things, maybe boring to some, but the whole reason why I write what I write!
-Haile
[Report This]Date: September 27 2016 9:57 PM Title: Enter Haile
Haile is honestly the hottest character of All Time.
(hidden Youtuber reference FTW)
Author's Response:
Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad she has made such an impression! Stay tuned, things just might keep heating up!
-Haile
[Report This]Date: September 02 2016 5:35 PM Title: Private Viewing
There are few stories that captivate me, the way your Realm of ___ stories do. I honestly love them all. This last chapter was phenomenal. My favorite scene was the part where the little girls had to clean the mess from the braces, while getting swallowed one-by-one. Awesome vore scenes. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see an update!
Author's Response:
Hello again, Kosmita, thank you! I am thrilled to know you're enjoying the series as a whole! I can only hope to retain your interest and continue to push the bounds of the mundane and exciting with new and original content. I will admit, trying to do new things is hard but I am branching out, as you can see, and I hope it is all for the best! The Realm of series shall continue and will eventually throw such a wobbler I hope it'll be remembered for a long time! ^.^
--Haile
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 3:13 PM Title: Private Viewing
I actually do like this story. I'm not usually a fan of violent but for some reason this story keeps me hooked even though Haile's character herself pisses me off. I think this weird multi-size, multi-dimension world you created for this story intrigues me. I almost wonder if there are even bigger people from other dimensions out there. Even though the world and lore obviously aren't the focus, it still draws me in enough to enjoy this story. So kudos!
Author's Response:
Haha, I'm glad she has an affect on you at least! For better or worse. The world and lore is insanely thought out, dating back to nearly 4,000 BC; but I do have to come at it slowly as huge info-dumps tend to turn people away faster than anything else. So, each chapter has a series of small yet significant details about the world lore that, if you think about it and see them, you can start to put a bigger picture together. Thanks for the review!
--Haile
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 4:55 AM Title: Enter Haile
Still an awesome (and criminally underappreciated) story. Keep on doing what you're doing :)
Author's Response:
Hopefully some people can feel brave enough to submit a review! Thanks for following!
--Haile
[Report This]Date: August 27 2016 10:55 AM Title: Enter Haile
Not to rip off Kosmita, but I can't believe this only has six reviews. It's such an awesome story :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think it all has to do with visibility. Once I fall off the front page my views stop flooding in, and after 7 days go by they practically stop all together. It's a shame, I wish I had a better way to advertise! But not even posting to giantess city helps it seems. Oh well, we do what we can because we must! Thank you for following me!
-Haile
[Report This]Date: August 18 2016 7:34 PM Title: Enter Haile
How do I put this........
:)
Yeah, that's about right.
Author's Response:
I told you I'd do it! Took me a while, but things are getting better and I have more time to write! So, hooopefully you'll see even more stuff here soon! ^.^
Thank you for following me!
-Haile
[Report This]Date: May 14 2016 8:06 PM Title: Enter Haile
So this isn't being continued? :(
Author's Response:
It will be continued, I've got the whole thing planned out. I have a chapter I haven't released, for example. I just have had very little time to actually work on everything. >.< I'm sorry! Once I get moved into my new place then I'll be able to put out some more stuffs, I promise.
--Haile
[Report This]Date: June 23 2015 10:26 AM Title: Welcome Aboard
It just kills me that this epic story only has three reviews right now. This story is just so awesome. I love the little scenario you got going and Haile is a pretty great person in my opinion ;) I love her blase attitude to those she has kidnapped. Just so awesome. Please, please continue this story when you get a chance. I'm so hooked to everything you write!
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thank you, thank you. In fact, you'll be happy to know I've written most of the third chapter, I'm just trying to work out how I best want it to flow. There are a lot of little things I haven't brought to light that the world has in it, and I'm figuring out how best to bring them out; after all, it's no fun getting everything right up front, right? xD
--HK
Date: June 06 2015 7:30 PM Title: Enter Haile
Nice! When I read this story I think of this girl that I see everyday. :)
Author's Response:
Phenominal! I'm glad it sparks something so great. ^.^ Thank you for the comment! You gave me a great idea.
Date: May 31 2015 5:37 AM Title: Enter Haile
Wow this girl is amazing! Love her lack of compassion for everyone. Please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you! I've got literally an infinite amount of content with Haile as that is how she is designed. I just have to find the will to put it on paper! Thank you for your review!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2015 4:39 PM Title: Enter Haile
Fantastic work as always. Glad to see you writing a story about giantesses over tiny men.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I do my best! I hope that I have improved over the past decade!