Date: February 15 2018 7:06 PM Title: Episode 9...Fixer Upper Pt. 3
I really enjoyed the fixer upper series. Something about giant women who exterminate planets as a job and casually crush or eat billions on a regular basis just appeals to be. That and they can alter their size for plenty of different interaction.
Date: December 24 2015 10:39 AM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
Hi, I was reading through my reviews and saw your comment and apparently there's no way to make a direct response to you, so I'm writing it here instead.
Anyway I wasn't criticizer the Title I was criticizing the Description.
I've never seen any of the Godfather movies, just so you know. But my point wasn't that I didn't understand her position, I understood it just fine. My point was that I can't muster up any sympathy for someone who gleefully dishes it out but then breaks down when they get blowback.
It's a like Kratos from God of War. He bitches and moans about his family while he'd been slaughtering other peoples families left right and center for years. He get's a small taste of his own medicine and he can't handle it. Because, you know, he's a shitlord. Witch is why I never finished that game ether.
Now I'm not saying that you can't/shouldn't wright a story about this kind of character, but that it's not for me and I wouldn't have started reading if it had a more in depth description.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2015 9:33 PM Title: Size Zone the Movie pt. 4
Whew. Hell of a long read, but definitely worth it. Great job once more, and I can't wait 'till Season 3!
[Report This]Date: October 18 2015 6:45 PM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
Great stuff. Finally just tried reading this last night and finished. Will be starting the first size zone tomorrow. The Greek gods one is my definite favorite.
Date: October 17 2015 6:23 PM Title: Episode 9...Fixer Upper Pt. 3
This was... well, amazing. Quite long, but as writer27 said, well worth it. The fact that everyone except Mellie felt compassion for the humans, and the fact that Aura was willing to be raped for Mellie, well, that's the type of loyalty and kindness that the everyday world lacks. This story has touched me in a way that few stories have until now.
It makes me think of all the messed up things in the world, and how we are often caught up in our own greed and selfishness that we do not bother to fix them at all.
The ending was quite a twist, and honestly, I felt like it was an appropriate ending for this story.
[Report This]Date: October 17 2015 1:26 PM Title: Episode 9...Fixer Upper Pt. 3
That was a long read but well worth it. I liked how they started as mindless killing machines but as they fatigued became more human like. And the ending was awesome. Whoopsie lol
[Report This]Date: September 25 2015 12:01 PM Title: Episode 8...Somewhere I Belong Pt. 2
Very enjoyable story. I like the type of giantess character Lucy/Juliette is, strong and good. The little people aren't helpless either. That's a good thing.
This Size Zone(Twilight Zone with size change/difference) deserves a om TV-show. I could watch that 24/7.
Author's Response:
Hehe...I'd only i could get it made into a series.
[Report This]Date: September 08 2015 4:50 AM Title: Episode 7 Pt. 2...The Giantess Writer
Wow!
That was truly a spectacular Size-Zone story! :)
A story within a story, I gotta say this has easily been one of the most clever fantasy meets reality style giantess stories that I've ever read.
Very good job with that, mate ^_^
Author's Response:
Thanks! I always try to push my limits. I'm surprised as you are it worked out.
Date: September 07 2015 2:00 PM Title: Episode 7 Pt. 2...The Giantess Writer
There are no words to describe how I feel right now. But perhaps my rating can show just a bit of how much I enjoyed this update(s).
Date: September 06 2015 9:40 PM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
Lovely, Zara no longer became the villain she was before but now she is reformed and ready to move on from her past life.
Date: August 22 2015 8:54 PM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
Something about the ending, when she chooses to hang out with Kevin and Beth touched me, seeing Kevin so happy and Beth too was great to read.
[Report This]Date: August 22 2015 7:23 PM Title: Episode 6...Friendship
This was fantastic. I absolutely loved the whole Greek mythology aspect of it. I would love to see more of Clea and her newly acquired friends: Nadia, Beth and her new boyfriend Kevin. Would be cool to see them grow up together. I also thought your portrayal of Aphrodite was superb and would love to see her again as well, maybe she could give true love another chance.
aaron
[Report This]Date: August 22 2015 5:53 PM Title: Episode 6...Friendship
Holy shit that was amazing.
I loved the ending. 10/10 like usual with your stories :D!
Date: August 22 2015 5:10 AM Title: Episode 6...Friendship
Cautionary tale , goddess Clea learnt a valuable lesson here. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: August 19 2015 10:59 AM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
I think this story needs a better description. I stopped maybe a page and a half in. The main characer talks about taking revenge on "The Order" but it's hard to feel sorry for someone who goes around murdering people.
I wouldn't have looked at this story if it had a preper description.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry you feel that way. The title is appropriate because she did go home. Home isn't just a place but a state of mind. For her to have a semblance of life and to keep her family safe the order had to go. Revenge is never a clean business. I wanted the reader to feel sorry for her not because she was nice but out of pity of her circumstances. After all eating meat doesn't make someone a bad person and if you read further they addressed that. You really needed to read further to get all of the perspective. I actually got inspiration from the godfather if you can believe it. Take Micheal Corleone. At the end when he said he's wrapping up unfinished business. That's what my character was doing taking out the organization that killed her father. Was Michael Corleone a lovable character? Probably not. Could we understand him? Yes. Why? Because we as the viewers understand that this is the life he was born into just like how my character was thrust into her life.
Date: August 12 2015 9:13 AM Title: Episode 5...The Survivors
It really is a travesty that this story doesn't have more reviews.
Date: August 11 2015 11:56 AM Title: Episode 5...The Survivors
12,595 words of perfection.
Author's Response:
Wow...thanks!
[Report This]Date: July 30 2015 9:55 PM Title: Episode 4...The Humites
I'm a gigantic fan of your stories, and this chapter was no different. The cruelty. The love. The betrayal. I can't believe it. Damn man, you're good! I have to say what I always say: keep up the good work and definitely keep on writing.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! The truth is when I write stories I have no clue on how they will end. Seriously. I write 2 pages a day so that's why my updates come about every two weeks. During the break between writing stuff pops into my head. I'm shocked just as you are how good a story comes out to be. Case in point my earlier work Invasion. I never intended it to be that long but more stuff kept coming into my head and I had to write it. Hopefully I can keep riding this inspiration train ^_^.
Date: July 30 2015 9:18 PM Title: Episode 4...The Humites
Gruesome stuff, their bodies were their greatest weapons! I never expected that.
[Report This]Date: July 16 2015 11:00 AM Title: Episode 1 A...The Apprentice:Homecoming Pt. 1
Wow! Amazing stories! Keep it going! Can't wait 'till the next one.