Date: July 17 2015 11:39 AM Title: 12
Story looks good! Only thing is, the last chapter is the same as the previous one
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing that out for me. It seems instead of uploading chapter 11, i had uploaded chapter 12. When I was uploading the real chapter 12 it appeared the same because of that mistake. Don't worry, it's all fixed now. Please take the time to reread chapters 11 and 12 as they will make a lot more sense now that they're set straight.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2015 8:33 PM Title: 1
Forgot to give a rating, my first review.
Author's Response:
No problem. Thanks for the great rating!
Date: July 12 2015 8:32 PM Title: 1
Would like some long foot action with Lauren, maybe make it unaware too? I'm loving the story so far, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Probably will make feet w/ Lauren when I do it. Unaware might work too. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: July 12 2015 1:48 PM Title: 11
Personally, I would very much like to see some feet action. I don't really have any preference on what character.
Author's Response:
Feet will be included. Not sure whether it will be just plain feet or involve footwear. Could even be both! I'm still planning that chapter...
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 2:54 PM Title: 9
Perfect
Lauren can discover them and be a little evil. Farts would be cool.
Author's Response:
Sorry, but I'm probably not going to include farts :P hope you're not too upset.
[Report This]Date: July 02 2015 10:05 PM Title: 9
Kinda confused with the block chapter. Usually you space out you paragraphs perfectly. But this one is just a block of word, and it's not very fun to read.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that happened with chapter 8 too but I fixed it before it became an issue. As far as I know, its a copy/paste issue between word and giantessworld. I apologize for that. I hope you'll take the time to reread the chapter and hopefully enjoy it more this time around.
[Report This]Date: June 28 2015 3:39 PM Title: 8
I'm honestly loving this story. But I am salivating at the thought of Lauren finding the two of them... Or maybe she won't? It's your story and only time will tell but I'm itching to see more interpersonal character interactions. Anyway, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Well dont salivate too much, chapter 9 is out! Hope you enjoy reading it!
[Report This]Date: June 24 2015 4:13 PM Title: 7
Great tale.
I thought they would fall on her breasts, then would be crushed, very good ... I'm anxious as Lauren and Stacy will find them.
Author's Response:
Dont be too disappointed. There will be more with Lauren very soon. Just keep reading...
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 1:56 AM Title: 6
Loving the story so far, love to see what happens next! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Stay tuned theres a LOTmore to come...
[Report This]Date: June 20 2015 3:40 PM Title: 5
continues the story
I can not wait...
Author's Response:
Lol, I hope you are enjoying each new chapter! Tune in and I'll keep to my schedule of 3-5 days between uploading.
[Report This]Date: June 15 2015 10:52 PM Title: 5
I'm really loving this story. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
That's all I could want!! Thanks and I will try to keep it great for you! :D
[Report This]Date: June 12 2015 3:10 PM Title: 4
Very good!
Who will find them? A person good or bad??
Put enough breast and ass in this story.
Author's Response:
Can't tell you that but keep reading and you'll know very soon! And trust me, I don't write my stories without enough boob action. Butt action is included just not anytime soon so be patient...
Date: June 03 2015 5:17 PM Title: 3
I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I am most certainly a foot guy, so I'm excitedly waiting for when we reach that point. And I really want to know more about the mysterious orb.
Author's Response:
You're in luck! There will be a lot of orb-related stuff as well as some feet in there as well. Btw, I still need suggestions as to whose feet it will be my the story (that part isnt written yet :P ) Leave suggestions please! :D
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 8:05 AM Title: 3
This looks great. Can't wait for the next park.
aaron
Author's Response:
Much appreciated! Be sure to check back every 4 days or so for the next chapter. :P
[Report This]Date: May 24 2015 11:09 AM Title: 1
AHHHH!! I'm ready for the good stuff! Lol I'm biting my nails here lol ready for booty action!! 😍😍
Author's Response: I appreciate your continued reviews! Dont worry I promise what you are waiting for will be included. Im sorry to say that its going to take a bit of waiting because that chapter is somewhere around chapter 16 I think. I hope youll review every one of my chapters!