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Reviewer: Realmlord Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 02 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A Whole New World

It's very interesting. I don't know if you are limiting the pages to such a tiny amount of story just to get us hooked but you are doing a great job at it. Keep it up! I'd love to read more. 

Reviewer: io1908 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3 - A Whole New World

Sounds promissing and is well written. Keep up

Reviewer: Slapageek Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Intro

I think this is a great start. I would really like to see more. Good luck:)

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