[Report This]Date: November 11 2018 5:57 PM Title: Prelude
Awww, why is it that all the best stories on this website are unfinished and forgotten? I was so engrossed in reading the story, that I didn't take the time to look at it's time stamp. Until I had finished. And now I'm very sad. Because this story has such a incredible atmosphere. I would have loved to have seen it played out to it's fullest.
Date: May 16 2015 11:53 AM Title: Prelude
Great story. I love detail and you really provide it! Looking forward to see where you'll take this
Date: May 15 2015 7:20 AM Title: ". . . You Need Either Inspiration or Desperation."
Great story so far
[Report This]Date: May 14 2015 11:01 AM Title: Prelude
Wow, I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this story. It's amazing so far.
In terms of constructive feedback: I like it that you're descriptive, but as you already indicated in your reply to Nostory, it might be just a little on the "much" side. Dial it back just a little, and you'll be in the sweet spot, I think.
Or, just write however it makes you happy to write. That's the main objective here.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the honest feedback! I was worried my writing might have been leaning a little too heavily on the "too much" end of the spectrum, and I'm glad you were honest enough to say so! The next chapter is up now and I tried to edit with a little more of a heavy hand this time. Please let me know what I can still do to improve my own writing when you have the chance to read it.
And I am trying to write how it makes me happy, but I'm also looking to improve my own writing style and skills so I'm extremely open to constructive criticism.
Date: May 14 2015 9:47 AM Title: Prelude
One of the best written stories I have read on here. Looking forward to see how this continues
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind response! I have every intention of keeping the story going and honing my writing as I do.
Date: May 13 2015 10:54 AM Title: "There Are No Secrets That Time Does Not Reveal"
Very well done I must say, you certainly are good with describing stuff. You take your time with it, I tend to rush but you don't.
Plus you do convey his fear and elation well.
Date: May 13 2015 9:20 AM Title: Prelude
Read the first chapter and I must say that you're more descriptive than I am, good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. Longtime lurker, longtime fan of yours.
I hope it's not too descriptive, but I plan on using descriptions to try and make being small seem more real and vivid. Second chapter is up and has more giantess content if you're looking for that. I'll gladly take any and all feedback you can offer me!