Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22 2015 12:57 PM Title: The Din

If Ivy weren't so intense, she'd be adorkable. Knowing Rachel, she'll short-circuit the awkward first date cliches so we don't end up in a rom-com, "He's Just Not Into Your Esophagus."

Reviewer: subiectum Signed [Report This]
Date: May 18 2015 8:57 AM Title: So Sweet

Oh my! This is so great! I love it! I wish I could be a tiny man with a big girlfriend like him so badly! 

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 11:53 PM Title: So Sweet

Now this is what I'm talking about. Every other girl is influencing Anna on what to do and this time its Ivy who looks like she succeeded in convincing Anna do be this naughty.

Shoving him in there would be quite the fantasy come true. I wonder if Anna is going to ask Kal of he wants it or not, or if she will decide on her own and shove him in. I prefer the latter.

Sooner or later, Kal is gonna make Anna pissed off and then she should punish him. I like insertion in the ass, but I think Candy might have other ideas.

Candy might tell Anna to sew Kal to the front of her panties. I think it will bring both of them pleasure despite it being a punishment.

I'm really curious on this next chapter becuase things definately seem to be heating up.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 10:57 PM Title: So Sweet

I suppose it could have been worse; Anna might have brought home Mexican takeout.  Seriously, the issue of the authenticity of desire affects everyone, but fetishists come in for the worst of it: do I truly desire this, or does it haunt my every waking moment only because I saw it on that website?  We spend far too much time policing our desires, but their origins don't really matter in the end (pardon the pun).

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 2:21 PM Title: Cloud Nine

That exchange between Anna and Ivy was very nice.  It's one thing to share your desires with the person you hope will fulfill them, and it's another to share them with someone who will at best give you advice and at worst judge you for them.  Add in the surreal novelty of shrinking people, and the conversation becomes much more fraught.  I'm genuinely apprehensive to discover what Ivy has come up with.

On a much more banal note, it seems that Ch. 19 'Awaken' and Ch. 20 'Head in the Clouds' are identical.  I do hope you didn't mistakenly overwrite a chapter.

Author's Response:

Indeed a small oversight, and I appreciate you pointing it out.  Naturally, more is always on the way.  The story may have some twists and turns yet.

Reviewer: stargate1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2015 10:06 AM Title: Please?

This is a wonderful story!  I love how you describe different things on the store.  Hopefully she experiments with several!  You have many interesting ideas, like the shower handle in the other story!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the story thus far.  Never fear, I'm sure that the delights in Cherry will have the girls coming back for more.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2015 3:36 PM Title: Bubbles on the Brain

I like the but plug idea and lint cleaner!!

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 10:32 PM Title: I Hate Mushrooms

I have to admit, I've been refraining from posting any more reviews of this story because I was afraid I would jinx it.  My initial review was rather sarcastic; based on your other stories, I had expected Anna to very rapidly escalate from "You asked for this!" to "Now you're my butt plug--sucks to be you!"  Not that I have a problem with that; I wouldn't have read your other stuff if I did.  But I could not be more pleased that the pace and direction you have taken with the story has defied my expectations.

I love the slow "awakening" of desires and possibilities in Anna, and while it's great that Kal has given his enthusiastic consent (for everything so far), I'm glad that his voice and opinions are (literally) muted.  This is Anna's journey, and the liberation of desire is (for me) the whole point of being a giantess.  Rachel is clearly farther along the spectrum towards dominance, and Candy has a profit motive for encouraging Anna to regard Kal as property, but I like that Anna is taking things step by step and deciding what she really wants.  Once Anna has pushed her own boundaries futher, it would be interesting to hear what she might say to another "gi-curious" customer wandering the aisles, wondering just how gentle she would be with a tiny dude.

I was also very gratified by the "Knight's Quest" chapter, which I expect will have high replay value.  Not only was it a rare example of mutually-consensual vaginal insertion from a female perspective, the action and the imagery and the dialogue were all fresh and compelling.  I know how tough it is to work over the same familiar anatomy and try to find a new take that gets the juices flowing, and I admire how you've brought out the details of Anna's sensations and emotions.  I particularly cherish her attempt to describe to Rachel what it felt like to have Kal in her pussy.  I'm looking forward to board game night.  I wonder if Rachel has a boyfriend whom she might like Kal to "convert."

One part of my first review was sincere: I am insanely jealous of Kal, even if Anna eventually decides to rent him out to Rachel and friends for use as toilet paper.

Author's Response:

I have to admit, this review must have taken some serious forethought.  I appreciate such detailed and intellectual feedback.  Indeed, this is uncharted territory for me, but it's quite refreshing.  Not every giantess must be cruel, in fact most are probably not.  One dimensional characters and intense imagery are gratifying, but not sine qua non.  I fully intend to slowly immerse Anna in more colorful characters and circumstance, but something so new to her will take time to share, especially in open fashion. 

Reviewer: GalvanizedSpruce Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 3:35 AM Title: Please?

Your writing style is spectacular, and the content is even better. I love that you show the character development and bring some reality to the fantasy rather than just delving right into the smut.

That being said, I would love to see more mouth play and feet but mainly I just ask that you keep the story going! Thanks for a great read!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are enjoying the tales of Anna and Kal.  It's the kind words that keep the fuel burning late at night.  I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Peterparker Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2015 2:11 PM Title: Please?

Still no booty so far.. Lol I'm biting my nails haha