[Report This]Date: July 13 2015 10:58 AM Title: Please?
A terrific story with wonderful detail. I do hope you haven't stopped your updates. It would be a pleaure to hear more.
Date: June 03 2015 1:24 PM Title: Ivy Heart
Sounds like a pretty racy website. At least Ivy's smart enough access it in the privacy of her home and not (like me just now) on a phone during a crowded bus commute.
Date: May 31 2015 10:44 AM Title: O Captain, My Captain
There's always a bigger fish.
Author's Response:
By mathematical induction, this implies that there are an infinite number of fish forming a countable set. Since fish do indeed have volume, this again implies infinite space. While the argument may hold, assuming an infinite number of worlds that do support acquatic species similar enough in nature to be called fish, in the relevancy of one planet, it is inherently flawed.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2015 10:27 AM Title: O Captain, My Captain
Now this is a good chapter.
Lots of fun and happiness. I was smiling as I read this.
Cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Patience is a virtue, and while the introduction and plot development of multiple characters is not always sexy or thrilling, I plan to make it all worth the read.
Thanks again for the reviews.
[Report This]Date: May 31 2015 10:11 AM Title: Please?
Hello,
First of all i would like to say nice writing skills.
I have read your bio on your gtsworld profile and you dear writer say you can accept requests,if i read it true?
Before i go on detail about my request. I would like to say that i gave you 10 for your writing skillz.
As for my request,can you consinder writing a new whole story from its start to end if possible.
My story details are about a cruel teenage girl soccer players enslaving a teenage boy at their sweaty,unwashed corn chips smelling like feet.Just writing the details made me a bit hot,dam.well basically i want a nasty smelly sweaty and what not feet oriented story that focuses on nasty teenage girls.I would be so damn glad if you could consinder my request as intriernet itself doesnt have stories,collages,videos etc.
Please consinder my idea,thank you.
[Report This]Date: May 30 2015 2:57 PM Title: A Hasty Exit
Tale is going well.
But he is losing the emotion and losing Focus on Kal and Anna.
Back To speak of Kal and Anna.
Date: May 29 2015 5:50 AM Title: A Hasty Exit
Swimming is an excellent pasttime. Improves lung capacity.
[Report This]Date: May 29 2015 12:05 AM Title: A Hasty Exit
A hasty exit?
haha, that exit took an entire chapter!
Things are getting interesting. Lots of relationships, and potential customers to be shrunk.
Cant wait to see what happens next!
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 4:22 PM Title: Tongue Dive
Very good tale.
After all, like Sarah, Ivy and Rachel will come with small Kal??
[Report This]Date: May 28 2015 1:03 AM Title: Tongue Dive
This chapter was refreshing. Glad we returned to this relationship.
Kale seems to have stopped talking.....almost as if he is just a doll to Anna.
Submarine fun? Hmm. That actually sounds like fun. He can dive among the other girls and between their limbs.
I'm interested in a Cherry visit. This chapter was cold. Things could be spiced up a bit. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 27 2015 5:21 AM Title: Jigsaws
It's always the Plain Janes that go unnoticed until it's too late. I wonder just how diversified Candy's investment portfolio is.
Date: May 27 2015 3:24 AM Title: Jigsaws
These last 3 chapters feel like a start to new story rather then a continuation of what this story was originally about.
Rachel, Sam and Ivy seem to be lost in their own adventures respectfully. (im getting kinda lost too. Im not sure what exaclty is going on.)
Im really curious as to where you are going with this.
Loving the frequent updates. I cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: May 26 2015 2:15 AM Title: Please?
This is actually really great I eagerly wait for you to update more ;)
Date: May 24 2015 10:15 PM Title: Dragon's Delight
wow great chapter. though when he was being pushed out part of me hoped that she had strapped on a diaper and was expelling him that way. keep up the good works.
Date: May 24 2015 2:50 PM Title: Dragon's Delight
I wonder if full-size Kal ever put any part of himself into Anna's rectum. If not, this was a helluva introduction. I'm looking forward to Rachel's and Ivy's and Sam's reactions when (if?) they hear about this latest descent.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2015 2:17 PM Title: Please?
Probably one of, if not the best story on here. That is all. Chapters 23 and 24 are incredible; Kal is a very lucky man!
Date: May 24 2015 6:37 AM Title: What Awaits Within?
While I'm glad that Kal's opinion wasn't even solicited for this encounter, I did miss hearing his tiny voice being suddenly muffled as his face crossed the threshold. That's always an auditory money shot for me.
Author's Response:
Shame the little guy can't make a peep. They are probably better off that way. Never was one for last minute screams, just a nice wiggling toy slowly disappearing under the weight of a finger.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2015 11:03 PM Title: What Awaits Within?
Playful, mysterious, yet seductive.
Why cant all giantess' have a similar personality? I would love to see Anna act like this the whole story.
She gives riddles, analogies, references, which make it more fun to read.
Hmm. I guess Anna is starting to like this idea of a shrunken boyfriend and is now at the next level and probably has exceeded even Kal's expectations.
I think the turning point in this story is when Anna said that Kal didnt have much of a choice. She is not asking Kal for permission to use him, instead she is using him regardless of what he is saying.
I cant wait for the playful yet sadistic side of Anna. (after all it was Kal's idea to enjoy it and this is waht anna is doing.)
Ending of this chapter was a good cliffhanger. Something about a dildo for later use.
I cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully you won't be left hanging too much longer!
Besides it's probably getting tight for poor Kal.
[Report This]Date: May 23 2015 12:17 PM Title: The Din
Very good...
What will happen with Ivy?
[Report This]Date: May 23 2015 11:18 AM Title: Please?
Great story! I can't wait to see where it goes!
Author's Response:
Always nice to hear a positive review. I'll do my best to keep you reading.