Wow

Wow, this story is deep.

If I had to give an award for best story of the year, this would be it. Even though its not even finished, I enjoy the suspense and details of it.

The names are all related, and im glad they are related in a way that i can remmeber them. Clare, Clarice, Clarrissa, Angela, Angelica, then Hilde.

Its also very realistic, the guys are so confident prior to shrinking, and once they shrink, they are helpless. The women are confident becuase they can always shrink their enemies.

Also, after reading the first 8 chapters at once, the 1st chapter felt box-office, as if it was in a movie. It was that good. Then the mix between sexy and maturity of the girls is incredible.

I also love a story where things are not obvious. I didnt expect Tony to be swallowed, I didnt expect Clarice to actually let him go, and I didnt expect Hilde to show up at Jack's apartment.

The mother seems to have so much control in this story, but she finally got some attention just these last few chapters. I wonder what she has in store for Jack.

Man, this is arguably the best story that I have read in a long time. Keep it up. I cant wait for the next chapter!