Reviewer: KimMadCock Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2015 2:38 AM Title: Bitch

I got an Idea for a short sequel:

Another Sorority emerges on campus and the head is not nice to Kira. Kira asks Candy if there is a way for a toy to taste her shit everytime she must go, but not like Leo. Candy gives her a buttplug, to widen her anus. She explains it will be getting tight again, after her prey is inserted.

Afte Kira catches the head of the rival sorority and shrinks her, she puts a ring into the shrunken asshole to held it permanently open. Then the tiny toy is inserted into Kiras ass. The head remains outside.

After a few days, kiras anus is tight around her rivals neck and her shit is snaking its through her rivals backdoor, through her intestines and is ready to emerge from her little mouth. When that happens, she will show it to the members of the rival sorority.

Like it?

Author's Response:

I definitely like it.  I always worry about how many boundaries one should cross within the genre, and then cross them anyways.

As to whether I'd use the idea in a sequel, or in another short story in the future is hard to say, but it's the craziest ideas that make the best plots.

Gratzi.

Reviewer: Maximus Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 8:43 PM Title: Trash

How did I miss this story, great read, love the ideas and treament of Maria!

Good development, you set the scenes up very well, easy for readers to put an image to the story.

Need more stories like this on this site!

Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2015 2:24 AM Title: To Bake a Cake

really interesting so far wonder where it will go :')