In some twisted, perverse, yet surprisingly in line with the characters, you managed to write something that made sense. From Ritsuko's ideas, Misato's attitude, Kaji's distance, Shinji's spine, Rei's compliance, and of course Asuka's need to be #1 - this really held true in a fetish sort of way.

And any out of character extrapolations can be the result of the chemicals. I acknowledge your pushing aside the techno babble that essentially had Asuka do a "Rei" towards the end of Evangelion, in a sense.

You also really seemed to capture Asuka's fractured mindset. From the labeling of dolls, her vacillating acceptance of not going back to normal to enjoying herself, how she wants to help but enjoys the destruction, her musing with the adults, her belittling of Shinji but insatiable need to have him near her, and her interactions with the people. This was quite a character study.

Oh and the sex was great, too.

I hope this isn't your only story. If I ever need well written fetish driven fanfiction then I must seek you out.