[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 1:01 AM Title: Ultimatum
really liking his story so far
[Report This]Date: February 23 2016 1:01 AM Title: Ultimatum
really liking his story so far
[Report This]Date: October 16 2015 2:04 AM Title: A New Mission
THIS STORY PLEASES SLAANESH!
One of the better stories I've read here, between body exploration, vore, footplay and possesion all against the will of the giantess this story covers all the bases while still staying interesting.
Also good job on applying this fetish to the Warhammer universe, it's got so little content let alone good content which this more then makes up for.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, and it is true sadly. Not much size stuff for Warhammer though its certainly fun to write. Originally was thinking of something with the Dark Eldar but Slaaneshi corruption was just so much more enticing.
Date: October 14 2015 2:52 AM Title: The Travelling Trio
I'm afraid there is something terribly wrong with this story. A huge flaw that I came to witness, Completely unforgivable I might add.
That is that the story is incomplete! What a travesty! Finish this sick little piece of art and do the whole community a favor!
But seriously, Awesome story bro and this is not the first one I liked. It is the first one I felt I needed to log in to comment on though. Keep it up
Author's Response:
Well, not finished but added a new chapter so wish (sorta) granted haha. Thanks for the review.
Date: August 28 2015 9:18 PM Title: A New Mission
Oooooh boy. Okay, so. First things first, anyone who's reading the reviews trying to decide whether or not to read this: This one goes dark. If you feed on suffering, this one is going to be a diamond, otherwise maybe think twice?
Right, so. I do enjoy the slow build at the start. It help establish our protagonist and means when the main, uhhh, 'Action' of the story we'll call it, begins it hits that much harder. The vore and body exploration segments are, without going into detail, very well written, incredibly evocative and kinda horrifying. Much like our actual protagonist, I find I'm one or two parts enjoying this, five parts kinda disgusted at myself for enjoying it because, and I cannot stress this enough, this one goes to a dark place emotionally. That said, it's still absolutely worth reading in my opinion.
Would recommend, bearing the above caveats in mind.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2015 5:21 PM Title: The Travelling Trio
I love the variety you've been giving us with your story setting's and characters. I'm very intrigued to learn more about Qora. At first she seemed concerned with freeing Adella from her indoctrination, but after the attempted stragulation she seemed more in a punishing mood. I'm not familiar with Warhammer 40k at all so I don't know which factions are evil or not, but I'd assume there is some corruption and depth within all of them.
I kinda have a thing for big muscular warrior women like Adella once and a while, so your descriptions of her are definitly adding some heat to this this story as well. I wonder if we will see some more willingness from Adella in the future as well. Or if there will be a telepathically forced lesbian sex scene at some point. Lots of potential in this one!
Author's Response:
Oh, Warhammer is pretty... black and grey across the board. Technically Qora is the more evil of the two as she serves one of the Chaos Gods who are the default 'bad guys'. However, the Sisterhood itself is mostly comprised of indoctrinated religious zealots who'd probably kill a guy if he said a prayer to the God-Emperor wrong so really take your pick of who is more evil. I did wonder what it might be like to approach this story as someone who knew little about 40k, so good to know it doesn't keep it from being enjoyable!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2015 9:41 AM Title: Buried Desires
This story is very interesting. Cannot wait to see more of Adella aka "sister bigfoot" and her tiny sister. I always like it when a tall woman is a giantess or those around her are shrunken. This Qora seems quite sexy and should be a staggering challenge for Adella to resist her. At any rate I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
aaron
Author's Response:
Hey aaron, happy to see you around this new story. I'll still be updating 'Toxicity' naturally just wanted to try my hand at this, hopefully you will enjoy it as much as you have that one.