Date: January 26 2023 7:48 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Hey. So, it's been a long time since this has been updated, and I don't know if you're still around, but I wanted to say this is one of my favorite stories on the site. I'd love to see more :)
Date: February 26 2020 10:20 PM Title: An Introduction
So will Jay just keep on shrinking or will his sister give him the correct pills?
And also when's the next chapter coming?
Date: August 19 2019 3:20 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Can’t believe it’s almost been 2 years since the last update. How time flys by. Idk how many I’ve reread this story but it’s still one of my favorites. This whole chapter with Mrs. Smith was awesome!
Don’t know if you’re still active here but just wanted to say that this story is just amazing. Hopefully all is well with you 👍
Date: December 25 2018 10:34 PM Title: An Introduction
Loved the story! I hope you plan to continue it.
I was really looking forward to a scene (or scenes) with Lauren.
Great writing - I hope you return
Date: November 06 2018 12:12 PM Title: An Introduction
Really enjoyed what you have so far, any possibility of continuing the story?
Date: March 19 2018 7:19 PM Title: An Introduction
Easily one of my favorite stories, read it weekly. Hope this continues at some point, if not, then thanks for some awesome chapters!
Date: February 07 2018 11:06 PM Title: An Introduction
Just read chapter twenty and I can't wait for more. I'm so excited!
Date: October 07 2017 6:49 PM Title: An Introduction
It reminds me of a Netflix show. Instead of short/medium chapters every couple days, there's like one really really long one every couple weeks/months. Still very well written though
Date: August 28 2017 1:55 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Love each chapter of this. It's going in the right direction with Jay getting more and more helpless. My favorite parts are the ending of chapter 11 with Jay accidently sucking on Darcy's breast, and chapter 10 when Darcy and Emily undress Jay. Being controlled by two younger girls nicely emphasizes how helpless and vulnerable Jay is at his diminished size. I would love to see more interaction between Jay and Darcy and Emily. Maybe they should teach Jay a leason by "giving in" and not making him wear a diaper - instead, they should just leave him naked, an even more embarrassing situation than wearing a diaper and baby outfits.
Date: August 24 2017 3:48 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Great chapter.the breastfeeding was glorious. Greatly enjoyed this chapter.
Later,
Diesel
Date: August 24 2017 2:48 PM Title: Mrs. Smith
Haha! That ending! I don't blame Jay, once you live out your dream like that, you start to look at boobs differently.
I was hoping Mrs. Smith would have made Jay lick her pussy and force him down there since his dick was too small for her.
Still, I loved the dominance that Mrs. Smith displayed in this chapter. Love how she toyed with Jay in the beginning, and then became horny as Jay was in her arms.
At one point, you said "Ray" instead of Jay.
I hope we get to see more of Mrs. Smith. I want to see her be a bit more creative on how to handle him. Maybe she should keep him swaddled so Jay can't move. Maybe, she can hold him from his crotch area so Jay gets teased. She can playfully sit on his face gently as a reminder of how big she truly is.
Best chapter so far, and I can't wait for Jay to return to her!
Author's Response:
Thanks for catching that Ray instead of Jay. Should be fixed now. I haven't had a chance to proofread this chapter yet so it's probably littered with typos
Date: August 19 2017 11:15 AM Title: An Introduction
One of my favorite slow shrink stories! Please continue! Thanks for your work!
Date: August 16 2017 3:40 PM Title: Midway
Loved how they handled him like a baby. This was the best chapter yet. Mrs.Smith is awesome. Fabulous story.
Date: August 14 2017 1:58 PM Title: Sleepover
He's sooo small. Like a child. Excellent.
Date: August 14 2017 1:43 PM Title: No contest
She switched the pills. Awesome idea.
Date: August 14 2017 3:30 AM Title: Not all bad
Valery is awesome. Will he regret it though?
Date: August 12 2017 2:29 AM Title: Still Shrinking
Ugh oh, recognized. Great chapter .
Date: August 12 2017 2:04 AM Title: Prescription Filled
Love the spanking.
Date: August 11 2017 4:15 PM Title: Pinned
Fun chapter, looking forward to the shopping.
Date: August 11 2017 4:08 PM Title: Can only hide so long
Cool chapter. He's really feeling the emotions of losing height. Andrea looks cool. I am sure Lauren will see him when he's the size of a child. Will he run into adults when he's the size of a child?