Good job on making a lurker come out of lurking. I hope that you find the inspiration you need to continue this story given that the characters in this story are some of the best written characters in my opinion.

Will you ever come back to us?

I recently played Shdowrun:Dragonfall and was really impressed by that games storyline and setting. Too bad it had no romance or any sexual parts though...

Well nevermind.;) Glad to see a story here based on that setting. Really enjoy a shrinking story with some more story, than what you get usually here.

Personally I was a bit turned off by some females shrinking and being tortured too though, since I like it when that kind of treatment is solely reserved for us lower males. ;P  But well just my personal taste and I still enjoyed the parts greatly when Sammie is used by his elven owner.

Really looking forward to the next chapters now and I hope our "hero" will further work on his skills to please his owner and well her female friends when required. :)

I am still waiting on your next chapter.. and I would like to know what you have planned.

I also want to know why Lyria was so afraid of anyone finding out, if she could convince them that they were in deserving of their punishment.

So, you're saying that Lyria is being completely honest? Acting like she's the victim here? Or did they have a good reason to screw her over?

I mean they can't help it if it's their job, right? And how does that justify Lyria's actions?

So, my problem with Sally is that she can accept her partner's sociopathic actions, so simply, and not feel even remotely conflicted. If she had simply killed them, then I would have seen how Sally could have understood that.

But she has tortured them, brutalized them beyond belief, even eaten them out of pure spite! Is Sally almost as sadistic as she is? That's the only she could rationalize Lyria's actions, in my opinion.

As for Sam, I can get that he would be subverted. But to this degree is impossible. He was one of the devoted loyal Shadow Runners, right? He would not became her slave through some twisted form of love. The only way, he would serve her is through fear. In fact, I figured that he could take advantage of Lyria's weakness towards him, her sick affection for him as a human dildo.

So you have him turn down freedom for nothing.

How much more are you gonna go, already? I have enjoyed the suspense of the prisoners. I have beared the constant masturbating, the vore and the reckless abuse that Lyria has inflicted on her victims... but enough is ENOUGH!!!

You've already milked the sex slavery of its worth. Now it's all cut-and-dried and I don't see it being anymore fun if Sally joins in.

It's time for a change in setting, and a change in dynamics. Have them escape, have them get eaten, have Sam finally break free of his desire to be Lyria's doormat.

Anything but the same old, same old.

Well Lyria sure wormed her way out of that situation, with Sam's help of course. Now I'm worried about how Sally might "handle" Sam though. Its uncharted territory for him and Lyria going forward. I feel like Lyria is less and less likely to really abuse Sam, but Sally is an unknown quantity.

Wow, Leth's gone and we hardly even knew him. Now I'm curious if the same is to come for Winona or if we are going to get to see her go through a dramatic character change. Wasn't expecting that so soon, Sam being opposed to it, but agreeing in the end shows his true devotion to Lyria. He must be feeling relieved he never tested her limits in such an overt way as Akane or Winona.

I'm a huge shadowrun fanatic.  I've pretty much sworn off of most other RPGs for SR.  I must say you are doing the shadowrun setting justice.  There are things I could nitpick, but overall it certainly feels sixth world.  If you don't mind me asking, where have you been getting your setting info from?  I know Yamatetsu changed their name to EVO in the later versions of the game which is why I ask.  

As for the story.  Loving it.  Loved the vampire character.  Loved the initial shrinking scene and examination.  Even the non fetish stuff in the beginning is as exciting as any of the shadowrun novels I've read.  Keep it up and I hope this story lasts a long time.

Aww, I kind of expected that Sam's feelings were starting to evolve in that direction towards Lyria. Instead of being in the friend-zone he's in the pet-zone. I was glad to see that Lyria is at least treating him with a more tender touch now. What a tough spot he's in though. I can't wait to see where you go from here. 

Whoa.. What an intriguing turn of events. This story has it all, literally. From the cryptic way Lyria speaks about how she'll handle this insider(s) situation I have a feeling like she'd enjoy shrinking this person or persons down like Sam was. If it's any consolation I hope one of the saboteurs is that Asian woman who first handled Sam at his shrunken size(that is purely me thinking of what I'd like to see though).
Personally having Xana kill the guy who's giving Lyria so much trouble would be fabulous. That prick deserves some kind of negative karma coming to him at any rate.

I'm still get a kick out of the dynamic of Lyria and Sam's characters.
This story is absolutely fantastic and my only regret is not commenting more.

aaron
PS I also like the sensual foot/toe play.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, aaron! Good to see I managed to keep up the interest in the story. Heres hoping I can keep it with the future chapters to come.