Date: April 17 2015 3:20 PM Title: The Crew
Haven't read this story yet, but after a quick skim it looks awesome and I'm very much looking forward to doing so. Didn't seem right for their to be only one comment, so now there are two.
Author's Response:
Well I hope you enjoy it when you get around to giving it a read through! Thanks for the comment as well.
[Report This]Date: April 14 2015 9:39 AM Title: Power Plays
This story is absolutely fantastic. From the gritty initial chapters to the unforgettable character of Lyria. This story seems to have everything. I especially love her attitude towards Sam. Honestly when I found out she was going to be taking charge of him as a tiny 3" man I thought great it's going to be like every other story here with some psycho who dominates some poor tiny fool. However, learning how she is I couldn't be more pleased with how this story has turned out. She has this kind of apathy in regarding Sam to make him her perfect pet(which is something I have yet to see written so well).
May I just say you've done a remarkable job in building Lyria as a character and Sam(my) as well. As such I cannot wait to see what happens next.
aaron
PS good choice with the blue nail polish and I hope there will be more of her pretty toes later.
Author's Response:
And here I was worried I made her come off too domineering and generic haha. Thank you so much for the kind words. I figured making her a little more passive agressive would be best as I favor slow build myself. She's most certainly more than a little psycho (her idea of a first date comes to mind), just a little less overt about it most of the time.
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PS Oh there will be plenty of time for that later.