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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 28 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing! The ending is perfect too, leaving the reader knowing whats going to  happen but not "directly" said in the story.



Author's Response:

Guess you could say it's a bit of a...

 

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Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great story, I really enjoyed it. I'm usually not into this size in a story, but it was written very well, and I love both of the characters. I am a big fan of the Renee and Cora stories, and I hope we see more in the future.



Author's Response:

Oh rest assured, the commissioner is not done with these two yet, and neither am I - not by a long shot ^.^

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