Date: June 29 2023 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Joe
I wish all moms and milf were alpha and they become huge and sexy, so mini giantess moms rule the families
Date: June 24 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Play
Always love seeing GTS stories - it seems like they're outnumbered 10:1 by shrink stories. You've got a great start going here. I like the characters a lot, but I'm a little confused - in one chapter it's mentioned that the Alphas have a naturally maternal inclination, yet that's not quite what I'm getting from chapter 1 (lust) or chapter 2 (disregard for human life). Chapter 2 was very inventive, and well done all around, but I'd be curious to see what was done to the Alpha population to make them treat Betas as inhuman dolls. I kept thinking that even teenagers know better than to do that kind of thing to pets in the real world. I could easily see that scene with a group of 10-12 year olds though...
Hopefully I'm not being overly critical. I just like to understand the writer's perspective. Your story is great so far. I'm going to be keeping up with this one!
Author's Response:
Hello White Wolf! First off, thanks for the review! :)
Yes the Alphas here do have maternal instincts but there will always be different types of personalities.
Sam from Chapter 1 is still a woman with needs. In addition, obviously she has a huge crush on Joe.
About the disregard for human life, The Alphas are 13 feet, beautiful and powerful so they can't help themselves if they develop semi God complexes. Some Alphas just have more self control than others. Also, there would be a backstory between Sara's clique and Mike
Hope this answered your inquiries :)
[Report This]Date: June 03 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Play
I checked this story out as I spotted themajestic had favourited me as an author - I have to say I think it's a really impressive bit of writing that I hope will be expanded upon in the future.
I'm assuming that the premise is consciously very similar to my own New World Order universe in 'GH-X2'; the height differences and terms (Alpha/Beta) are identical but the origin story and various other elements are slightly different. It also seems to be much friendlier than GH-X2; Betas actually outnumber Alphas & all men are in the same boat with half the women, so it's not quite as dystopian or inherently bleak to be small.
Despite these niceties, you've depicted a really fascinating scene with Jane and Anne manhandling two boys and forcing them to kiss one another. It's exactly the sort of bratty thing I like about this kind of size ratio, so well done and thank you for writing it - I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Hello imagin8! Yes i am a big fan of your story and your poser work and would love to see more. :)
Also, thanks for the review and yes i have borrowed ideas from your story (hope you dont mind) since the size ratio is my favorite in giantess work. There isn't much Amazon sized stories as far as i know.
Date: May 01 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Play
Very nice chapter. I love where this is going. Please continue this great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment! Yup will do :)
Date: April 30 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Joe
Sam seems to be crushing on Joe, the way she drifts off whenever she is with him!
Author's Response:
Yup! She may have to put matters into her own hands in the future! :)
[Report This]Date: March 28 2015 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Joe
Seems promising so far!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)