[Report This]Date: July 13 2015 5:48 PM Title: Abel and Louise
This story is fantastic!
I love the chemistry between Abel and Louise. Very good details as well when describing the whole giantess experience.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've been itching to write something like this again, so thanks for the review.
Date: April 07 2015 10:31 AM Title: Abel and Louise
This is pretty good, how is it I have never gotten around to reading this? The characters are likeable and you keep it light enough to make the reader feel at ease, well done!
Author's Response:
I think I posted this in the middle of the night, and it got swept away by the morning. The two definitely have a fun thing going on. And thanks for reviewing, I find it really cool that you're liking this. It definitely motivates me to do another one.
[Report This]Date: March 18 2015 1:45 PM Title: Abel and Louise
We need much more of this light hearted and very good character development on this site. Please keep it up
Author's Response:
It would definitely be nice to see more of this kind of interaction, and I definitely want to return to more gentle stories. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: March 18 2015 9:02 AM Title: Abel and Louise
This is a terrific concept, the dialogue set a delightful tone to the whole adventure. I think meeting a girl in class and sneaking off to her dorm to explore her giant soles would be the most awesome thing ever.
Well if he's ever up for another foot adventure, I'd want to see Abel shrunk even smaller to do a similar expedition on Louise's freshly-painted toenails. Maybe pretend he's landing on the moon as he slowly dwindles down.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like to think that Abel gets more adventurous and eccentric with each time they use the shrink ray, so I'll definitely keep your suggestion in mind for the future.
Date: March 16 2015 9:00 AM Title: Abel and Louise
This was an extremely nice thing to see on my visit today. I'll echo Jack's comments on the dialogue, it made the whole thing really fun. Outside of that, I'm just pleased as all hell to have read such a pleasant tale of friendly sizeplay.
Author's Response:
It's nice that the dialogue made the story stand out for you. It was definitely fun to write, and I'm glad it translated into the story well in both the characters and the interaction. Thanks for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it.
Date: March 16 2015 8:45 AM Title: Abel and Louise
Very enjoyable. The playfulness of the dialogue made the characters feel lifelike. It would be neat to see a return for them; this is probably my favorite of your stories in terms of set-up.
Author's Response:
I'll definitely revisit the two soon, and I've been tossing around ideas for the next one. There's something about about a oneshot that's a welcomed change of pace compared to the long term commitment of a serial. Also it's totally cool to know that you like my stories enough to review and that they seem to improve as I go on. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: March 16 2015 12:58 AM Title: Abel and Louise
Pretty good story, I love the build-up and the characters. Do you think you can do a chapter featuring footwear or shoes? Maybe have Abel hand on to Louise's shoelace or be inside her shoe?
Author's Response:
Thanks! There's definitely some good potential for focusing on some footwear, but for the next one I want to move away from feet to keep it feeling fresh. It seems like a good idea to write about in the near future though.