[Report This]Date: April 23 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
I've been wondering something.
I think you've made it somewhat clear that wizards aren't really allowed to mess with humans by using their magic. (considering Roxy's punishment from her parents at least) So why is it that this isn't really stopping Grace from doing things to him?
Author's Response:
Fair question. Grace has never really had to face consequences for what she does, through a combination of intimidation, sweet-talking, and outright lying, so the threat of such a thing doesn't make her question the danger. She's good enough with magic that there are ways around being caught in the act, even as she's blatantly picking on people. But as this story may (or may not) show, she can't just go on like that forever...
[Report This]Date: April 20 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
I wonder who Grace should be scared of most, Roxy or Roxy and Allen's mother.
I mean, they both seem pretty protective of Allen.
Author's Response:
Roxy and Allen's mother would have the easiest time at stopping Grace, but Roxy herself can get pretty creative when the people she cares about are in trouble.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
Very Weak!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
Yeah this story is like Julia and Blackmail 3 mix together, with its own twist. Hopefully Grace doesn't do anything bad or at least Roxy get back soon.
Another good chapter:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Interesting to picture it as a Julia and Blackmail 3 mix; hopefully it's not as dark as those 2!
[Report This]Date: April 19 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
Grace better be careful, i'm thinking Roxy won't be happy if Grace harms her brother.
Bet he wishes he had gone with his sister shopping right about now.
Author's Response:
He's probably wishing a lot of things, mostly that Roxy would hurry up with the shopping now.
[Report This]Date: April 19 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
It's ok! Maybe she just wanted to ask for a favor! Or she just has crush on him! Or he's fucked.
Author's Response:
If it was one of those first 2 things you suggested, the story would probably end much faster than it's going to.
Date: April 19 2015 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
it's gonna be less enjoyable for Allen I guess.
Author's Response:
Much much less enjoyable.
Date: April 19 2015 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 8: Uninvited Guest
Does Grace make it a habit of breaking into houses of other members of the magical community and harrassing their children?
Author's Response:
She actually didn't have to break into any houses in that first story, but in this case, pretty much yes.
Date: April 15 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 7: Most Important Meal of the Day
Keep it coming, one of the best setups I've read!
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is on the way
Date: April 15 2015 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 7: Most Important Meal of the Day
Author's Response:
Thanks. Julia probably will not be returning for a while though. I'm planning to finish this, Size Matters, and a short new Omega story first.
it's cool ! Still looking forward...
Date: April 15 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 7: Most Important Meal of the Day
good funny moment. Looking forward and don't forget Julia lol
Author's Response:
Thanks. Julia probably will not be returning for a while though. I'm planning to finish this, Size Matters, and a short new Omega story first.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 6: Tuck In
This story keeps getting better and better. Roxy is cool, she can raise hell. And be nice at a single moment.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Roxy is definitely someone not contented with a single identifier.
Date: April 07 2015 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 6: Tuck In
Allen should know that campy sci-fi movies are truly the gift that keeps on giving. I'm loving the interaction between the two. It's nice seeing Allen enable Roxy's playful behavior, better him than some random person on the street.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to hear their interaction is working.
[Report This]Date: April 07 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 6: Tuck In
Another great chapter. It seems being that small has it's advantages, at least when it comes to making food last.
Author's Response:
Gotta think on the positive side!
Date: April 07 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 6: Tuck In
I didn't understand the bet on pizza guy ? Can someone explain to me with simple word ? But I get that Roxy is bad loser as she shrunk him futher. 1 cm?
Author's Response:
The bet was that if Roxy couldn't magically create a pizza then she would pay the pizza guy for a real one. And she shrunk him to 1 inch. So about 2.5 centimeters.
[Report This]Date: April 06 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5: Game On
Another great chapter.
It seems like the event with Elisara really affected her, though it also sounds like Elisara didn't mean any harm.
Author's Response:
Thanks! It did affect her, though really more just for the general humiliation of it, since Roxy feels so comfortable now with being empowered. And Elisara was just being a kid, albeit a fairly gigantic one.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2015 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: Game On
Seems to me like her experience with Elisara was what triggered her interest in that kind of play to begin with.
Now I wonder how Roxy and Allen's first size-difference playtime went. Was he scared and humiliated like she was for hers? Or was she more gentle, and slowly advanced into more risky stuff over time. I want to think it was the latter, as she seems like she wouldn't want to scare her little brother, and would rather he have fun as well so that he'd be more willing to do that kind of play.
She is really going to need to find someone at college who would want to do that kind of play, as there will be less and less play with her brother the older they get. Especially once he moves on to college, and on to live his own life.
Author's Response:
It's very possible Elisara had something to do with Roxy's penchant.
Despite how bratty Roxy can seem when she's joking, she does care about her brother's feelings, so more than likely their first playtime was a gentle one that gradually included riskier stuff once she knew they both had fun with it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 03 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 1: Homecoming
good chapter, so Roxy made the video game world into a real one in the past??? good to know somebody kick her ass!
Author's Response:
Thanks, though Roxy didn't make the world. It's just a fantasy video game.
Date: March 30 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 4: More Apologies
just adorable!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: March 28 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 3: Hide n' Seek
Very good.Roxy could put his brother in panties.It would be nice.
Author's Response:
Well that would certainly be an interesting turn.