Reviewer: timeturner Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2020 1:52 PM Title: Prologue

This is one of my favourite stories on this site . I hope sometime you get back to writing these, it’s a great concept

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue: Moctezuma's Revenge

Fun story. The drinking from the swimming pool was pretty funny. And I like that after everything they did to each other, Linda still jumped to Bianca's rescue.

I feel like there should have been some consequences for all the mischief the girls were making. Then again the cops couldn't do anything to them. That was the part of this setting I couldn't quite wrap my brain around. The big people can do whatever they want in this society. It's fine for some basically harmless spring breakers but what keeps more malicious people from running amok in the tiny countries? Or prevents a giant land from conquering a smaller one?

Ah well, I'm probably over-analyzing this (I tend to do that). Bottom line, it was a good story!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you liked the story. And you're not over-analyzing, I understand this story has many problems of that kind. However, it'd be super hard for me to make things so that no one would abuse their size. I mean, in our world, countries attack other countries, and they're all the same size. I know there should have been consequences, but I wasn't sure of how to handle it. I guess I didn't think this story needed it, but I'm definitely doing something about it in my other stories. I also don't like this whole "giants can do whatever they want thing", so I'm fixing it for my next stories, one way or another.

Thanks again for taking the time to comment and to read the story in general. I know this isn't the place but (like most people here) I'm a big fan of your stories. I'm glad you comment because I was actually inspired by them to write mine, so thank you.

Reviewer: aaron Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2015 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 13 & Epilogue: Moctezuma's Revenge

The epilogue really sealed this as being a truly great story. Can't wait to see what you've in store for us next.

aaron
PS could you consider doing a story with a milf giantess?

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I really appreciate it. As for the milf giantess, I honestly don't know. I'm struggling enough with what I already have, so I really couldn't say. Maybe, but I make no promises. Thanks again for your comment.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31 2015 10:42 AM Title: Prologue

Still got at least 14 chapters to go on my other two stories but I could end it by July where I'll begin planning my next phase of stories, lets see where it takes me. I'll contact you about it, a story in this universe has been weighing on my mind for a while now. I just need an idea to run with for about 10 chapters. Most likely with a Singapore guy since I am from Singapore. 

Author's Response:

That sounds very interesting, really. Good luck with your stories and feel free to contact me whenever you want.

Reviewer: Neurotic Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Picnic

It's a really good story and all, but when are they finally going to go somewhere different and interact with  different kind of tourists?

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Well, this whole thing is more of a series. This story is more focused about them. I plan to write about different kinds of settings and people, of course, but this story would get really long if I did it here. Think of this story as one chapter of the series. But we'll get there eventually, don't worry. Again, thanks for your comment and I'm glad you like the story.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Bonfire

I expected Bianca to counterattack but good chap.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. And don't worry, Bianca is definitely going to counterattack. ;)

Reviewer: edexdexx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14 2015 6:15 AM Title: Prologue

Very entertaining story, with a great premise, I hope to see the girls interact with more people from different nationalities.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment. I'm glad you like the story. I'm definitely using other nationalities, but as part of the series. But yes, I'm definitely using more of them in the future.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 13 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Bonfire

  Linda and Bianca, their dance continues! This one though is Bianca's fault since she did instigate the latest face off between the two. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. And yeah, Bianca did start this one. Too bad for her.

Reviewer: MostKnownUnknowns Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2015 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 10: Secrets

More. Lot more. Surely there is an good tiny guy or girl to be had here. 

Author's Response:

Well, of course. Not all tinies in the story have been bad. Anyway, thanks for your comment.

Reviewer: akooo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 30 2015 5:31 PM Title: Prologue

Wholia, thank you for the stories and this really cool world setting. Some people here treat it way too seriously but I find it really cool and fun and inspirational. I hope you keep writing. I have some ideas but don't wanna share it here. Anyway, thanks again, reading these stories has been real fun. Especially international love :)

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for your comment. I'm glad you liked it and the other stories too. It's really nice knowing all this writing isn't for nothing.