Reviewer: tostitos Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 1:50 PM Title: Blacker then the Lagoon

A few grammar issues here and there, but coherent. I did a doubletake when Revy started to do all that stuff to Rock, but then I remembered this was only a month after he was kidnapped by the Lagoon crew so she didn't start having "feelings" for him.

I was wondering when someone would do a story of like this for Black Lagoon given the attitudes of its female cast. Sadly it would seem my search/wait continues to find an actual giantess story with Revy rather than a shrink one with Rock.

Sigh.

Kudos to starting it off like a excerpt from a volume of the manga to allow for the relationship between the members to present itself. I actually thought something else might have happened in the first epilogue when Revy, too, paled. Then I read that last sentence and scrolled down to epilogue #2.

The actual fetish part was quick. Almost too quick, but I guess that fits with Revy's lifestyle. Live fast, die fast. The build up was long, yet seemingly necessary.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the Review Tostitos, i enjoy your imput and thank you for it. This type of story is a bit out of my fortee i will admit considering i lean usually more towards gentle, loving GTS so i do feel like i rushed a few aspects of this when i was writing it compared to my others. I know the actuel GTS scene at the end was kind of short but i had trouble drawing it out. When i started making it to long i thought it looked bad so i tried to cut it down to a fittable standard for her since i was trying to portray it as such.

Again thank you for the review i always enjoy constructive critasism it helps me understand were i can do better ^.^