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Reviewer: Jason8888 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 14 2021 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 1: Take a break

Why dont you continue this story!?

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2: #pocketparker

Short but sweet, a little bit longer would help.

I loved the idea of a cell phone shrinking with him and how he has sucess in telling people he shrunk but they just dont care and make fun of him.

I'm anxious to see how Kit and Nick develop as characters.

Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2015 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Take a break

This story is written Very well and I find it very creative. It's not your typical action adventure plot but more like the realistic what happens if you shrink and get found by a giantess who lives in a world where shrunken humans dont mean that much. You have set the story well and I look forward to reading more.

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