[Report This]Date: March 22 2019 3:22 AM Title: March Madness
Hey, relax! Don't be pissed off because of the not-five-stat ovderall rating! As someone before said, your plot is very, very well developed. Many guys here, at least currently (I'm writing this in 2019) aren't into voe and also the majority of people here are interested in quick, less chapter stories. I must be honest: I also usually like to read shorter, simple, all vore stories (even my writen ones are usually that way), but as you see, it doesn't push me away of stories like yours!
I started to read voreverse by getting 'All Nighter' to be read and, seeing that that story was sequel of many other stories, I just wanted to know how everything developed until it came to 'All Nighter'. So, I stopped reading 'All Nighter' before I did read half of the first chapter and started to read all the voreverse stories, one by one.
And man, what a good choice of mine! It's being soooo thrilling, they're among the best stories I did read so far, and Voreverse's my favorite serie hands down!
Also, as many guys said here, your plot is spectacular! I must confess: I like the vore in your stories, of course, and I'm always anticipating for the vore scenes, but what makes me keep reading your story is the plot! I want sooo bad to see what happens next to Tommy and his friedns, I want sooooooo bad to see what conspiracies are happening behind the curtains... so please keep it in your mind: you're a very talented writer, not only fr vore, but for stories at all. Your talent is for saure five-star and I'm happy that this story of yours got five-star rating too!
Keep up the good work!
PS.: although I like your stories too much, please don't again let your girl away just because you're writing... writing's good, but to be all night long with our loved ones is better ;)
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 6:09 AM Title: March Madness
:)
Author's Response:
Thx!
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 4:19 AM Title: The Program
!!! sorry for the spam :') just wanted to rate the other chapters, but the last chapter was awesome! all together a fantastic story. it's totally 5 stars worthy.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for doing this! it literally just made my day! Thx again and i hope to hear your feedback next month (fingers crossed) !
[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 4:17 AM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
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[Report This]Date: June 21 2015 12:06 AM Title: The Program
Im giving it 10/10 because I loved it, it had intense length, the plot was awesome, and I enjoyed it. It's funny because it had pissed me off in the past so many times on here, shitty stories always get 5/5 stars even if it's just a 100 word chapter and nothing even happened in it. I had my own theories on this and I think the rating system should be removed from this site, actually the whole site is really bad programmed, mail/message system isnt working, favorites arent working, search is very primitive, no real multi-tag system, and so on. But I also think that your stories are just too good actually. Most people on here are looking for short fast primitive sex action scenes and arent realyl interested in epic plots. It's like cheep fast-food for the mass. And those always get 5 stars easily. So please dont worry about it, and try to see it from this point of view. Your stories are on a much much higher level than 99% of the stories on here, and that's a good thing. Dont give up, and see it positive from this side! I know it sucks to get few reviews or bad ones, and you dont deserve it. I am sure though there are a lot of people eyoing your work. I definitly do, and always will. I was a little bit sad that there was no Tommy action in the last chapter, still it was awesome. And I also hope a little bit that you maybe will include some male vore in one of your future stories, by Tommy or Simon. I loved the ironic parts in the chapter so much, especially this one:“I’m guessing you don’t need dinner!” he joked.“Yeah,” she said, a hand on her tummy. She let out another light burp. Simon laughed. She did too.“You okay?” he asked.“Yeah, something I ate was giving me indigestion, but my belly must’ve taken care of that because now all the ache feels like it’s because my stomach walls are stretched out so far. Just meaning I ate too much and that’ll go away in a few hours,” she said, almost laughing.Simon scratched his head. He was pretty sure he knew what had given her that indigestion…
Keep up the fantastic work, youre an amazng author.
Author's Response:
Thanks zol, you've been a reviewer since the early days of the voreverse and for that I am very grateful. Thanks for the 5-stars and I'll try to keep up the irony for future instalments!
[Report This]Date: June 20 2015 11:50 PM Title: The Program
:)
This was certainly your best story as of yet and I just want you to know that I’ll always be waiting for the next one, even if it takes you a while longer to write it. Take your time if you need it, don’t let your writing here get in the way of your real life and don’t let it get between you and your girlfriend. Trust me, she’s the most precious thing in your life and you don’t want to risk that for us, we’re just a bunch of random guys you don’t even know personally.
That’s all I can say. Take your time, live your life, and if it takes you a month to write a chapter, your real fans will still be here to read it.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. You're right, i think I just got to wrapped up in this story. I can finally breath again! Thanks for the 5 stars, really appreciate it!!!!
[Report This]Date: June 13 2015 8:23 PM Title: More Than Friends
really interesting!! i havent seen this coming! amazing lenth this time and great telling style. I wonder what will happen in the last chapter, really curious, I hope to see some Tommy action in there again :')
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Aw dang, the rating for the whole story fell back down to a 4.5 again! That's okay, I'll just have to make the final chapter extra good in order to get it back up to 5 stars! Thanks again and i will get on that last chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 30 2015 3:25 PM Title: Early Check-Out
Hey! Sorry it took me some time to review and find out you have written an update!! Really hope things are going well for you and hope youll have more time again soon to write. Really liked the chapter and build up for hopefully whats coming. Please dont abandon this story or future plots, youre like one of the fast authors I enjoy reading here, because of your deep and continued plots. Kepp it up <3
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the 5-stars! It brought the whole story back up to 5 stars too! I've been working on the new chapter and will try to have it up soon. plz check back this weekend
[Report This]Date: May 17 2015 12:16 AM Title: Early Check-Out
Yay, you're back! I already thought the Huntress had eaten you ;) But I never gave up hope.
As for the chapter, it came out really well. Good writing and good action. Keep it up and for heaven's sake, don't let your gf catch you again, she might get suspicious about your 'research papers'...
Author's Response:
Thanks for holding in there! Sorry it took so long, and yes I'll make sure my gf doesn't catch me. It would be really awkward to explain what I've been doing on this site, so I'll just write when I'm sure she's not around! Thank you very much for the five star review! Hopefuly, I can get enough of those to get the overall rating back up to a 5 to! Thanks a lot, hearing from fans like u really inspires me to continuing writing!
Date: April 07 2015 9:12 AM Title: March Madness
Great so far! Always enjoy your writing for the preds. Hope to see more soon!
[Report This]Date: March 24 2015 5:04 PM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Reviews like the one from julieshrink is the reason actually why I hate this site. Why? Because I imagine 99% of the readers on here having an IQ not higher than a slice of bread. And that's also why you not getting that much reviews, or that fast of reviews like others stories. Because your work is "on a too high level" for the average reader on this site. But anyway... I really liked the last chapter, not quite as much as the first two, but still 4.5 stars worth :] Really clever plot, loved the boner part with Tommy, and also of course the great cliffhanger ending, how the "real plot" kicks into action, and I guess readers like julieshrink will get some easier and faster satisfaction. Please dont hear for those nonense "reviews". You did an amazing job for builing up the plot.
[Report This]Date: March 23 2015 6:46 PM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Very good.
Show more digestion.
less writing, more to the point.
[Report This]Date: March 22 2015 12:55 AM Title: Meatball Subs and Tummy Rubs
Seeing the small number of reviews on this story, I just had to drop by for a little encouragement :)
So just keep up the good work. I like the way you write and this story is well on the way to become your best one as of now.
[Report This]Date: March 20 2015 12:47 PM Title: Road Trip
Sorry for the late review! I didnt feel that well past the last days, but I didnt want you to think I wouldnt be interested or anything!! I loved the 2nd chapter and I found it as good as the first so I will definitly give 10 star :-') Because I think it's the best work of yours so far when it comes to writing style and plot structure. I love the whole thing because it's really clever and thought through so far. And for this chapter I loved the middle part so much with the eating and belch contest, especially between Tommy and Simon :)
Author's Response:
Thanks and also thanks for the 5-star rating! Between my studies, my job, and my gf ;) I haven't had much time to write so the thrid chapter will either be out later today or possibly even tomorrow :( But there's going to be some vore scenes in this next chapter so Im sure itll all be good in the end!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2015 12:19 PM Title: Road Trip
And for the 2nd chapter too :-) The burping eating junk food part was my favorite, especially how the boys joined in and they had all a good laugh. Very good plot so far, looking forward a lot for whats coming!!
Author's Response:
Glad you are liking it!!! I will be sure to have another chapter up on Saturday! :)
[Report This]Date: March 16 2015 12:17 PM Title: March Madness
Fantastic new story loving it already!! Awesome writing style, great chapter lengths, this is actually much better than the ordinary stories on here. Keep on writing youre one of my favorite authors!!
[Report This]Date: March 14 2015 1:24 PM Title: Road Trip
Very Good...
Author's Response:
Thanks! and thanks for the 5 star rating too! I really appreciate it