Date: March 01 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow!!!!! This story was absolutely incredible!!! I loved the female/female theme of the story. I loved how the stephmother got her revenge and just crushed her into nothing. I loved the story, but I also wish the stepmother kept her shurnken stepdaughter as a pet, nothing more than a footslave to be used and abused :) Hope you write more!!
[Report This]Date: February 28 2015 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like the way that you ended this one. Leaving the reader with the image of a whole closet full of blue vails.....
;`)
Date: February 28 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Odd for the good side to win for once in your stories. Is it bad I was hoping nadine was gonna win? Lol
another short and sweet one for the books though!
Date: February 27 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was interesting and a surprising twist in one of your stories to see the more absolute evil character getting the shrink treatment and the supposed protagonist eventually coming around to the kind of decision the more twisted one would make by the end. Heck yeah for fun character development stuff.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good, well done.
[Report This]Date: February 26 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nadine, crushed underfoot like a bad seed. Her guidance counselor will miss her dearly.
I love the crumpled leaf image/sound. Sent a tingle up my spine (and I don't even care for crush).