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Reviewer: Ijod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2024 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

For those of you who don't know, the author only ended up posting one more chapter of this story, to Giantess City. While that wasn't meant to be the ending, I think it concludes the story fairly well.

Anyway, this remains one of the greatest stories in its genre, especially among gender-based size changing stories. It starts out fairly usual, but as the world changes and Alex and Elise with it, it just gets more and more engaging. Every aspect of the changing world is either hot, interesting or both. The main characters are fleshed out (something the switching perspectives helps with), likeable and work better as a couple than they do apart, meaning the reader really wants to see them work things out and live happily ever after. The only time the story really falters is when it loses the focus on Alex and Elise's relationship, but other than that, it succeeds in its ambitions.

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 24 2024 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Mom

Continue please, I want to see Alex's Mom become so huge and sexy, giant and growing moms make hot scenes!

Reviewer: eve Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2023 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Great, I like the Mom growth, I hope she grows even bigger and hotter!

Reviewer: gemm1mt Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2017 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 27 - A Special Occasion

PLEASE make a sequel. It would literally be a crime if you didn't.

Reviewer: SpookyTaco Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Julie

Hmm, I wonder what has Patricia's attention. It's so unlike her to behave that way. And poor Elsie...I'm hoping she gets to reunite with Alex soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing your thoughts.  I had hoped to kinda hint at why she behaved that way, as opposed to hit the reader over the head with what she was thinking.  I'm not sure if I succeeded, but I appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Ah crap, Alex got really beaten up. I do hope he is reunited with Elise. Glad to see you back! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, it's good to be back.

Reviewer: newb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Yes! So wool to see this back! I worry for our hero, and while I don't need to know details, I must know if there is hope of his rescue!

Author's Response:

Thanks Newb! It means a lot to have your readership and comments.

 

I definitely have a happy ending planned. Count on it!

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

I haven't read your update yet, but I just want to say, that on every story I've ever reviewed, most of them have stopped writing after I review them, and I always felt like that curse would never be broken.



Author's Response:

Sorry Cloud! I do feel like a dirt bag when I let people down that actually enjoy my work. I'm really sorry it worked out that way in the past, bit I can assure you I've already started to write the next chapter, and have outlines for the remaining 6-7 chapters until the conclusion. After so many let downs, I probably shouldn't *promise* that I'll finish it this "go around", but that is my goal, for certain.

 

I have ideas for another story is really like to get to, but I don't want to start a new story until I finish my previous work. 

 

Thanks so much for reading, and sending word. It really makes it all worthwhile. :-)

Reviewer: Cloud Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2016 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 24 - New Life

My hibernation has ended. Many chapters have been added, and each one seems to be building on the struggles the separated couple will face. Elise and her desperate sexual urges, resulting in a lack of work ethic, yet leading to more aggressive behaviour. Alex and his forced servitude, the possible erosion of his humanity, and definite destruction of his self-control. What if one day he is taken off the drug, yet its effects have permanently addled his mind. Or perhaps Elise joins the Matriarch to find Alex, and becomes warped by their practices. The desperate tragedy of their story has so many different spirals. That your ray of light, your happy ending, seems like sunlight trying to shine at the seafloor.

 

Tl;dr

Nice updates, cool tragedy so far, can't wait for the happy bit.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comments.  Yes, it was always my intention to have a bit of a rough period for the two of them.  Like you said, I've promised a happy ending, so I hope it delivers.  Sometimes you don't realize what you have before it's taken from you...  and all that.  The couple's trials won't last forever, that I can say.

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 24 - New Life

Alex had anger's reaction. it means drug effect is gone?



Author's Response:

I don't want to say too much about the drug or it's effects at this point, because that could easily become a plot device in the future (wink, wink), but I believe I did reveal a bit about how the drug affects Alex with respect to thoughts and desires in a previous chapter. 

If I'm not mistaken it was ch 20 when he realizes that the drug isn't particularly effective when he's commanded to think or feel a certain way.  It's not specified as to why this is, but it's safe to assume that the women of the Matriarchy cannot control his thoughts or desires with their drug.

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Alex is settling into his new role, that isn't a good thing but it does keep the drama going. I just hope he doesn't get lost in it. 

Reviewer: smoki1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

I love your worldbuilding. A dating site who protect men original idea.



Author's Response: I appreciate the feedback. I like thinking about the implications of a society with people like that. Just hope the story doesn't get too mired in them.

Reviewer: newb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Great to see this story get updated once more!!

Can't wait to see what Elise does!!



Author's Response: Thanks for posting!

Reviewer: Scarlett Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2016 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 22 - A New Lead

I literally am checking this site a couple of times a day soley hoping for your next update. Please keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you, I will!  It's stuff like this that makes it all worthwhile!

Reviewer: Nostory Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2016 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Good to see her side of the story, how she misses him. I half expect her to start hunting for the people who took him and then having to resist the brainwashing of the Matriarchy.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm having a bit of fun with her at the moment. 

Reviewer: gadgetmawombo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2016 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Missing Person

Great chapter! It's good to see her side of things too! I'm probably more excited for her chapters then Alex's chapters.



Author's Response: Thank you! Couple more Elise chapters coming before the pov switches back.

Reviewer: newb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Wow! Didn't see that coming at all! It sheds a whole new light on the new dynamic between men and women in this world!

Well played, good sir. Well played.



Author's Response: Haha, you're giving me more credit than I deserve, but thanks!

Reviewer: Hank the Boggle Champion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 30 2016 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Wow, love this chapter! I'm definitely a breast fan. Are we going to see more of Annette?

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!  Unfortunately, I don't have any more sequences with Annette planned for the story at present, but I really liked writing her character, so who knows...  Maybe I could slip her in somewhere down the line, or possibly in some kind of spinoff later on.

Reviewer: Gorean123 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 29 2016 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise

Great story!!

Please continue your great work!

Any possibility the virus affects mental capabilities of both infected men and women to make them different than the uninfected but compatible with each other.

Since the infected women's brains are four times larger they might be different

Author's Response: Interesting take! I hadnt thought about that, but I suppose it's one way to look at it. I tried to frame it out a bit in some of the earlier chapters by giving theories, but I don't think I ever said for certain how it all works. That was sort of by design, to allow for some reader interpretation. Not sure if I pulled that off well enough. I'm definitely trying for a very fine line between the virus just periodically driving women to act differently and full out personality alteration. It's a tough thing to do. Thanks for your feedback! I've got lots more story planned and I'm going to do my best to keep new chapters coming every few-several days.

Reviewer: Scarlett Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Surprise

I adore the story and am frequently checking this site always hoping that your next chapter is out. Thanks so much for sharing it with us, and I will be anxiously awaiting your next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for sharing that! I'm a complete sucker for feedback, so it really motivates me knowing there are folks enjoying it! 

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