Date: May 27 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Ash
Oh , a male infected makes infected women horny, no wonder Elise and Ash get so lusty for him whenever they come close to him, its not just them!
Great story you got going I hope it does not end with the women taking over and making men their slaves, it would be a horrible ending!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your comment. I don't think I want to take it in the gender enslavement direction. Women want to be loved just as men do, and all evidence so far says the virus doesn't strip that from them. Of course, there are always crazies out there...
Date: May 27 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
Wow, amazing stuff here! I really adore how Alex and Elise act around each other, so loving but careful not to ruin their friendship.
Date: February 26 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
A very talented start, showing human levels of emotions and restraint. I find the relationship between Elise and our MC to be very endearing, especially Elise's level of respect. I think your story has good potential, and I look forward to future chapters
[Report This]Date: February 26 2015 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
WOW, i've been reading stories for years, both here and on other sites, but that's the first time i feel so much potential in a story that need to review it.
you're doing really good, most stories don't even come close to what you just did.
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I have a lot of ideas, just trying to figure out the best way to make them into a cohesive story at the moment.
[Report This]Date: February 24 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1a - Alex and Elise
What an excellent story!! Can't wait to see where this goes...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words!